Amour Immortel Swaron OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Amazing Harshu what do I say beyond this.. Everytime I read something you write I wonder how someone can write so so so good..
The pain, the love and the emotions you depicted in this Os were mindblowing I almost cried while reading Swayam's thoughts when Sharon leaves him with a promise to see him tomorrow ohh dear my heart ached that moment..😔. I felt like doing anything in my capacity to get him back the love of his life.. So that they could be happily ever after quite literally..
And the few words Sharon said were so so beautiful.. I don't have much say but I'd just say Fab harshu just lovely.. Keep writing more don't ever stop..😃.
Love,
Kash Di..🤗.

kash dii🤗
thank you for such kind words I am so glad I could write something that moved you...

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

harshita yeh kya tha 😲

tis was one amazingg piece of writing yaar

itna emotional sply the place were you

described sharon's appearance thru

swayam's eyes tis was one masterpiece

completely wrapped wit emotions

n heart-touching content

i cried wit swayam his pain

was excruciating 😭

these lines will always stay wit me

Swayam I know but I will come early tomorrow promise. I love you and I love being loved by you. You know I can never stay away from you for long, You know that right."

Her presence was like a guilty pleasure to him

all in all a very beautiful os 😃

thank you for this huge comment rosy dii.I am glad I had the power to make you feel swayam's pain through my words😃😃

Originally posted by: -spongy-

And she's back.

Amazing piece of work harshita. Simply amazing.

It was filled with meotions, and the way described sharon. 👏

This was a tremendous piece of work. Written so perfectly.

A beautiful content. Heart warming

enjoyed reading it. 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM

thank you ishu.I am glad that you liked my write up😃😃

Originally posted by: cutelove

i went numb all of a sudden.. i cant explqin.how i felt crying reading d part of swayam pain ..ohh it was jst best!! i will always remember it as it did touched my heart .deir pain ,pure love ,swayam.waiting fr her daily n.whole it was jst awesome..i m stil feeling very different ..i loved d depth of dis beautiful write up bt it did made me cry honestly.. beautiful!!!

thanks and i am glad that my write up could make you cry😃😃

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

aswom os

thanks😃😃

this is fantastic, mind blowing dear..
loved it to the core of my heart...
very well penned down emotions..
taunting of people...
bt as said love is immortal..
so is for swaron..

really beautiful , you should have submitted it !

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

this is fantastic, mind blowing dear..
loved it to the core of my heart...
very well penned down emotions..
taunting of people...
bt as said love is immortal..
so is for swaron..

Thanks😃😃

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

i simply cried ! for the first tym after reading something , i noe i burst out after watching anything visual but first tym i could visualise the whole thing while reading i tears rolled out , it was mesmerizing di seriously mesmerizing . that is ur power n nobody can deny that . u r awesome . 🤗

mar bhi jaaye yaar waale mit bhi jaaye pyar waale zinda rehti hai unki mohobatein <3

naa adhuri yeh kahani hai naa adhura yeh fasana

marke bhi naa ham kahenge alvida <3

awww doll thank you for the sweet review.Sweet words just as sweet as you🤗