update 24th may india

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys,

sry 4 the delay...ther was no current..

the episode begins with mamta telling krishna not to go to mumbai ..he can go to any corner of the world but mumbai.krishna tells her that mom till onw you've been working for me but now i will work and you will rest to which she tells him angrily that he is not going to mumbai.he asks why..and she just walks away..mishti begins to tell krishna about how mamta has brought him up..with all the difficulties..she sent to a good school and how she stayed up all night cuz he was crying..how she wud stay hungry but feed him...and once u grow up you ask her why??? there must b some valid reason for her to tell no..when the right time comes your mother itself will come and tell you..you shudnt have broken her heart..mimi tells him that mamta aunty had a dream for you..she wanted u to study business management from the oxford university of london and for that she got the forms too..and all the money from her salary she collected it so that you cud study..and krishna feels guilty and goes to his mom..mamta was crying..and then he consoles her and tells her he has no rights to break her dreams and tells her he wont go to mumbai..then mishti and mimi come in..mishti tells..you just spoke about going to mumbai and both of us began to cry..god knows wht will happen to us..wen mimi will leave us after marriage..to which krishna tells that who will marry a buffalo like her?😆and then..they share a light moment and mishti tells they both wil keep fightin i think v shud go and do our work..and they both leave..

suddenly krishna becomes sad and mimi was going to console him but then she thought mayb i shud leave him alone 4 sumtime..and she too leaves..later krishna opens the cupboard and takes out some papers and keeps lookin at them.and then mimi enters and he hides the papers..mimi asks him wht is it..to which he gets really angry and tells her itz not necessary to tell her everything..and then shows it to her..tells her these are those papers and documents and my appointment letter..and a book on mumbai was ther..and then he walks away angrily..mimi takes the books and papers and keeps them in the cuboard and goes..

In the morning krishna comes into his room and begins to burn all those papers and documents..and then mamta enters..he apologises and then mamta tells him itz ok and hands him an envelope both mimi and mishti are confused as to wht is ther inside it..and then he finds out that itz tickets for mumbai..mamta tells him that aaj tak tumhari aisi koi iccha hai jo maine poori nahin ki?? and then they hug.

they show mimi packin krishna's bag with tears in her eyes...mishti and mamta cooking food for krishna and they pack everything in a bag...they all do pooja and after the pooja krishna tells mimi he'll miss her..too which she just runs away with tears in her eyes..krishna said he'll go meet her but mishti tells no..meet her at the bus stop as it is gettin late..they go and mamta tells him all the usually motherly things like take care of urself i've packed this and that for you..they keep waiting for mimi..but then it begins to get late and so he goes away..then mamta comes home and she goes to mimi's room thinkin why she didnt come..but she over hears mimi talkin to krishna's picture ..she tells him if i wud hv come to leave u the thing that was in my mind and heart wud show in my eyes..my eyes wud show my love for you..and the episode ends on mamta's face..

i kno the update isnt really good ...but i tried my best..

pls comment and tell me how i cud improve!!

thanks

regds

craziegal

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-Happy4Ever- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks.
The update was very well written.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great update, you did a great job
sharala thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you
really appreciate your effort.
good job
akash99 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks craziegirl for wonderful update
Sweet N' Sassy thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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It was really gud, u dont need to improve on anything, really appreciate your effort....perfectly done....couln't ask 4 anything more 😃


THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks so much. Update is really good. We appreciate your help
nousheengeorge thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thankyou for ur wonderful update. why do you think ur update is not good. it is very nice update. we say "short but cute" . ur update is very nice
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great job!!! Keep it up... 👏 👏 Your update is really nice..

Now action will shift to Mumbai!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI sneha
Thank-you so much for the update... Excellent job...
I recvied your PM.. Will reply you in a bit...
Take cre... and keep up the good work!! 😊

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