RAJBALA 3 SHOT - TERA RASTA CHODOON NA

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Reading the spoiler made me write this
this is the 1st time i am attempting an os
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hope u all like it

Raja told madhu to get ready and left the room . Madhu was exasperated by now . She was sick and tired of all these rituals . She wanted to escape from all these . She had decided that enough is enough . She will not sacrifice any innocent animal just for the pleasure of these people . She had already seen how cruel these people were . She also knew to what extent these people could go for their useless blind belief and stupid customs . She decided that she will go away from here . She could not stay here any more . She was almost choking in this place . Her one and only friend Raju was also lost forever . He will never come back . She also did not have any expectations from Raja . In this 2 days she had understood that Raja was just a puppet in the hands of his Dauji . She knew that she had to run away . But she had to do it very cautiously . No one should understand or get a whiff of her intentions . Right now she just had to play along . She had to do what she was told to . But once she gets a chance in the pooja she has to escape .


Thinking all this she started to get ready . She wore the sari that Raja had vrought for her . She put all the jewellery . Soon there was a knock at the door . " Bahu rani aap ke liye khana laayi hoon . Darwaza khol ke khana le lijiye " She understood that it was a servant . She was just following orders . Realizing that she was helpless just like her Madhu opened the door . The servant came in and kept the plate of food and went away . She closed the door and ate . She was feeling as if she was locked up in a cage . She had read of these type of villagers who were so regressive . But it was the first time she was seeing in her own eyes . She could not believe that she was among these type of people now . These people were so different . Their thinking was so backward . She felt that she was in a cage now . She missed her Dida and Bittu Mama Chacha dearly . She planned that once she got out of here she would somehow go to Mathura . Once she reaches there no one can take her any where else . She packed all her things and hid the suitcase well . After packing she prayed " Pyaare Kanha only u can help me now . Please show me the correct way . I want to go away from here . I cannot stay here any more . I feel suffocated here . Please help me . "


Later there was a knock at the door again " Rani i have to teach u something . U have to live here all your life so u have to learn how to use a gun " Madhu was just aghast . " No I do not want to even touch a gun " " Rani u do not understand . I will tesch u how to use a gun . That was u can always protect yourself . U do not know but 2 years ago some one had attacked me with a gun . That person had shot me from the back . So I had to go to the mental asylum and I had become mentally retarded . I do not want that to ever happen to u . So u need to know how to protect yourself . If not for your self then at leats for me Rani . Please " Madhu understood that Raja will not go without teaching her . She did not want to spend any more time with him . So she said " OK u can teach me " . Raja then kept a gun on the bed . " See this is the trigger . These are the bullets . This is the place where u keep all the bullets . Operating a gun is very easy . U just keep all the bullets here turn it and lock it . Then u just press on this trigger and fire . Easy isnt it ? " Madhu told " Yes quite easy it seems . But still I hope that I never have to use it " Raja said " Rani if any one ever looks at u with any wrong intention I will kill him . I am going now . I will send u the clothes u have to wear tomorrow . Good night . " Saying this he left . Some time later another servant came and gave her another set of clothes and jewellery .Thinking something Madhu kept the gun in her bag .


Next morning Madhu woke to Raja's voice " Rani come on . U have to do the sacrifice now . It is time for the ritual . Come down . " She answered " I am coming " . She did not want to argue with Raja any more now . She did not want any extra attention to herself . She came out of the room . All the family members had gathered at the cout yard . She came down the stairs and saw a horrific sight . A small goat cub was tethered to a pole . She was supposed to slaughter it . For a while she just wanted to shout at all the people . She wanted to tell them that this was just inhuman . But then she remembered that talking logic and sense to these people were like hiitng your head on a wall . Dauji told her " Bahu come quickly . Do u see this goat kid ? U have to kill it with a sword " Saying this he handed her a sword .

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With trembling hands Madhu took the sword . Just then there was a loud noise of hooting cars . Dauji told " The Minister is coming . Soon we will start the ritual . Bahu behave your self in front of the Minister . We have very good relations with the Minister . I hope that u will not spoil it with your behaviour " Raja then told " Dauji do not worry . Rani will do nothing of that sort " Soon the Minister arrived there . Dauji said " Welcome Minister Saab . Meet Raja's wife . This is Rani . Raja has just come with her yesterday " Raja whispered in Madhu's ears " Rani do pranaam and namaste . Wish him . He will bless u " Madhu took his blessing . She had decided that she will follow all of his instructions now and not create any problem . Then she will be able to escape easily . All of them came to the slaughter place . Madhu still had the sword in her hand . She could not look at the innocent goat kid . How could she kill it ?


The priest started chanting the mantras . He told Madhu to put sindoor on her forehead once more . He gave some flowers to Madhu to give in the holy fire . After some time the priest said " Now is the sacrifice time . Bahu ji now u have to strike off the head of the goat " Madhu then stood up . She said " No i will not kill an innocent animal " All the people then started speaking at once . Dauji screamed " Bahu what is this ? I said that I will not tolerate any such thing from u . This is a ritual u have to do it " Madhu said " No I will not do it no one can force me to do anything now " Raja came close to madhu and said " Rani what r u doing ? U r insulting our family in front of the minister ? What will he think ? That I have married someone who does not value rituals ? Do not do this Rani . U r e devi now . Remember that and do as Dauji says " Madhu snorted " Am I a devi ? Really ? Then I will do as I wish . I will not kill an innocent animal . Do u even understand how cruel it is to kill an innocent animal ? This is just a kid and it must be missing its mother . Its mother is also sad as the kid is not there . U people are so selfish . U just think about yourselves . Only u should be satisfied . U do not care or give a dam to any one else . U so not care for any one else's feelings and emotions . U consider that only u r humans . The rest of the people around u are just robots " Hearing all this the Minister told " What is happening ? Whi is the ritual not being performed ? Why did u call us ? To waste our time ? If there is no ritual then I will go . I have a lot of work to do " Madhu then told him " U r a minister . It is your duty to protect the aninals not slaughter them " Minister got evry angry and told " U girl . U do not have to teach me my duty . I know it well . I am leaving now " Saying this the minister went away .


Now Madhu was just bombarded from all sides . Dauji said " Bahu u have insulted us today . U have insulted the minister . U have crossed all your limits . U do not know how much wrong u have done . I wil punish u so that u never repeat this again . Jija said " Dauji I had told u that this girl is not fit to be in our family " Elder sister said " I knew that this girl is up to no good " Younger sister said " All this is for Raja . He has just pampered the girl beyond limit " Raja told " Rani what u did was not at all right . U have to pay for your mistakes . Say sorry to Dauji . May be he will forgive u " Madhu said " I am not sorry so I will not apologise to any one . I did what I felt was right and still I feel that it is right " Saying this she walked away towards her room . Dauji called her from behind " Bahu I have not finished . Come back here . Dont go when I am speaking to u " Without turning back Madhu said " I am going to my room . I am feeling tired " Dauji was shocked at her insolence . After coming to her room she locked the door . Raja came and knocked the door " Madhu open the door I have to talk to u " She said " Leave me alone for sometime I am tired " Raja went away . She sat for some time thinking what to do now . She knew that right now no one will bother her not even Raja . She then took her bag and opened the door quietly . She then slowly went on the terrace . From the terrace there was a stair case to the back gate . She had seen in the film JAB WE MET that when the hero heroine were running away they first went to the terrace stayed there for some time and then went . She applied the same tactic .


After staying in the terrace for some time she slowly climbed down the stairs . She slowly went to the back gate and came out of that unlucky house . She breathed deeply . Ah now she was free . She just had to go to Mathura some how and then she will surely be safe . She started to walk .


Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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She was carrying her bag too so she could not walk as fast as she had wanted . She also did not know which direction to go but she just followed the village main road . After walking some distance suddenly she felt that she was being followed . She looked back but saw no one . She shrugged and continued walking . Suddenly she saw a jeep following her . There were some notorious looking men sitting inside . She panicked and started to run . The car also increased its speed and chased her . She prayed " Pyaare Kanha please save me . Please help me . I need u . Please send help " She kept running frantically . Some one from the jeep called out to her " Why are u running from us ? We will take care of u . Come to us " She just did not know what to do . She then saw a pond nearby . She then ran to the pond and faced the men in the jeep .She said " I am warning u if u come any closer I will jump in the pond . If anything happens to me then u will be responsible for it " They just laughed and told " Go on jump . We will save u " She started walking backwards . One of the men suddenly came and caught her hand " Oh darling I have caught u now u cannot do anything else " Saying this the man started dragging Madhu towards the jeep . Madhu struggled a lot but to no avail . At last she started praying to her Kanha . Suddenly there was the sound of another jeep . The men got a bit startled . Soon they saw another jeep coming towards them . Raja was in the jeep . Seeing him the men in this jeep quickly tried to start the jeep . Raja showed them a gun and said " Stop . If u even try to get away I will kill all of u . If u care for your lives then stop " The men just ignored him . Withing seconds Raja was there . He gave a punch to the man who was in the drivers seat . The other tried to protect their companion and jumped on Raja . Raja punched kicked and beat all the men . He said " U touched my Rani . U tried to misbehave with her . I will not leave any of u " He beat all of them to a pulp . Then he wanted to call Madhu but he saw that she was not there any more . He understood that she had run away again in all this commotion . Raja sat on the jeep and quickly left searching for Madhu .


Meanwhile Madhu was running with all her energy . She knew that soon Raja will find her out and force and drag her to the same place . Soon enough she heard a jeep and she knew it was Raja this time . She ran faster but Raja had a jeep so withing minutes he caught up with her . He held her hand and said " Stop Madhu . It is no use running now . I had told u that even if u try to run then also I will bring u back . U cannot go " Madhu jerked her hand away " No I will never go back . I will die but never go back . Why should I go back ? " Raja told " Madhu we have married so u will stay with me now " Madhu told " I do not accept the marriage . It was a fraud . U just do not understand me . U always order me around without even attempting to know what I want . No I will not go back " Saying this she brought out the gun Raja gave her from her dress " If u force me I will shoot myself " Saying this she pressed the gun to her forehead " Madhu no u cannot do this " Raja if u come close I will press the trigger " Raja said " OK I give up I will not force u please take away the gun " Madhu said " I do not trust u " Raja said " Your friend Raju is promosing u please trust me " Madhu said " But u told Raju is dead " He said " Madhu trsut me " She removed the gun . Raja asked " Why r u doing this ? I love u so much " Madhu said " I love my freedom my principles my sanskaar I cannot be the doll u expect me to . I hate these old rituals . Your family's mindset does not match with my views . I cannot live in a cage all my life . I want to do as I wish . I want to follow my heart . I want to be the mistress of my own mind . I want to enjoy life in my way . I want equality in this marriage . I cannot sacrifice my self respect for any one " Hearing this Raja said " Madhu I understand u fully now . I was so wrong . I behave very badly with u . Please forgive me now . I will never tell u to do anything against your wish now . I will always respect your decisions . I realise now that what has been taught to me from childhood is wrong . Dau ji is wrong in some ways . I promise u that I will change myself . I promise u that I will support u in everything now . Please just do not leave me . I cannot stay without u . I have already lost my parents I cannot loose u Madhu . U r the only one I can call u as my own . Please do not leave me " Madhu asked " What about Dau ji ? I am sure he will not accept this " Raja said " Madhu he has to accept u the way u r else I will not stay here . I will go back to Mumbai . I cannot stay in a place where u r not happy . Madhu please promise that u will never leave me and go . Please " Madhu said " Promise " Raja said " Keep your hand on my head and prmise " Madhu said " I will never leave u ever " .

Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems no one is interested
fine i am removing the story then
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

seems no one is interested
fine i am removing the story then

WHO SAYS NO ONE IS INTRESTED IN UR STORY GO HEAD
ACTUALLY NOW THEY ALL R BUSY IN FALTU RUMOUR OF MB GOING OFF AIR ON 24 MAY 2014
SO CHILL N CONTINUE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start and continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice rima
continue dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenji22

VERY NICE

CONTINUE SOON


thanks 😊
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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Nice n continue soon😊


thanks a lot 😃

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