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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

HEY PEEPS!!!
I AM NEW TO THIS FORUM AND HAVE DECIDED TO WRITE A SS FINALLY!!!
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...
HERE'S THE PROLOGUE...
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!!!
PROLOGUE...
zain and aaliya had gone out for a wedding... there aaliya had been busy helping her friend shilpa out with her wedding... then comes the sangeet.. since we all know that men are not allowed in sangeet... shilpa's fiancee gaurav takes the help of his friend zain to enter the sangeet.. will zain be able to get gaurav into this sangeet... or will aaliya catch zain red handed? will zain be able to confess his love... to know more keep reading...

SO HERES THE PROLOGUE...
PLS TELL WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT...
PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE
THANKS FOR READING...

CHAPTER-1: PAGE 1...
CHAPTER-2: PAGE 2..
CHAPTER-3: PAGE 2..
PLS CHECK THEM OUT...
THANKS..

ALL MY ZAYA WORKS INDEX:
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Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept
update soon n pm me..

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Divya

@hakunamatata

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Posted: 11 years ago

you should continue..never get demoralised...your FF could get all the likes down the line once the story starts taking shape :D

all the best..do pm me..

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

HEY AND THANKS FOR YOUR REPLIES...
SO HERE I AM WITH CHAPTER 1..

BECAUSE I LOVE YOU

CHAPTER-1

zain and aaliya had gone for a wedding... it was aaliya BFF's wedding... and while aaliya was busy attending the guests... her husband, zain, was busy looking at her... looking at her beautiful anarkali... looking at her hair... which was curly and brown... then he walked up to her... caught her elbow... and pulled her to a corner... he caught her into his cage of arms...
zain: kya baat hai mrs. zain abdullah? apne shohar ki taraf dekh tak nhi rhi...
aaliya: zain pls chhodo sab dekh rhe hai...
zain: toh dekhne do na mei konsa kuch glat kaam kr rha hoon? apni begum ki saath flirt krna guna thodi na hai...
aaliya: pls zain shilpa (aaliya's friend.. whose wedding was being held) bula rhi hai...
zain: haan toh mei bhi toh bula rha hoon..
aaliya pushed zain back and ran to shilpa... zain was left alone there looking at her running and giving glances to him.. laughing.. giggling.. and smiling... this gave him a good feeling... that everything was superb for him...
zain: abhi toh jaana diya hai mamu ki bhanji.. ghar pahauch ke batata hoon...
just then.. shilpa's fiancee gaurav walked up to zain... he saw him smiling while looking at aaliya who was laughing with her friends...
gaurav: itni mohobbar krta hai kya apni begum se...
zain was brought back from his trance...
zain: hey yaar kesa hai tu... apni barbaadi.. oops.. i mean shaadi ke din enjoy kariyo...
while zain let out a giggle.. gaurav punched him jokingly... then he looked at shilpa who was with his friend's wife..
zain: itna ghur ke mat dekh.. nazar lag jayegi...
gaurav: ya mere bhai... mujhe teri maddad ki zarurat hai...
zain: kya hua shaadi se bhagna hai?
gaurav: shut up yaar... mujhe... umm.. sangeet mei ghusna hai...
zain being a muslim did not know much about these hindu weddings...
zain: toh ja na sangeet pe.. teri hi barbaadi.. umm... shaadi ka hai...
gaurav: yaar.. mei kese jaoon sangeet toh sirf ladkiyo ke liye hota hai...
zain: matlab?
gaurav: matlab ladke allowed nhi hai...
zain patted on his back...
zain: tu tension na le ill talk to aaliya..

IN ZAYA ROOM..
shilpa had gave zain and aaliya a room to stay during the wedding...
aaliya entered the room... it was around 11:45 at night.. zain was waiting for aaliya to come coz he hadnt talked to her even once throughout the day...
aaliya came out of the washroom... she saw zain sitting on the bed... she went up to him and sat beside him.. he snaked his arm around her waist while she rested her head on his shoulder... zain held her hand in his... and kissed on her forehead...
zain: kesi ho?
aaliya: m k kitkit... tum btao.. how r u?
zain: im good too...
aaliya: kal sangeet ki tayaari krni hai.. hay allah kya hoga mera?
she digged her head in his shoulder and closed her eyes...
zain: mamu ki bhanji?
aaliya: hmm
she said as she put her arm around his waist...
zain: i was thinking can i come to this sangeet..
aaliya rose her head and then looked up at him...
zain: kya hua?
aaliya: zain... sangeet pe sirf ladkiya allowed hai... didnt u know that?
zain: ya im sorry... tum so jao...
aaliya digged her head back into his shoulder..
zain: i love you aaliya..
aaliya: love you too zain...
she rose her head pecked on his lips and then settled back..
zain simply smiled...
zain: lgta hai mere bhai ab mujhe hi kuch krna padega...

END OF CHAPTER-1
THANKS FOR READING...
PLS PLS PLS LEAVE YOUR COMENTS AND LIKES..
THANKS...

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Cute upd8!!

Luvd ZAYA convo's...they're so sweet!!

Continue soon n thnx 4 d pm!!

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awsome part
loved it..
thanx for m..

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

THANKS FOR THE REPLIES...
HERE'S CHAPTER-2...
JUST SO YOU KNOW THERE WILL BE ONLY 3 CHAPTERS..
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU
CHAPTER-2
zain woke up in the morning and saw aaliya sleeping beside him... he saw their hands entwined within each other... then saw a strand of aaliya's hair on her face... he could see that it was disturbing her and so he pushed the strand back to her ear gently and this woke aaliya... she opened her eyes so fast that zain wasn't able to react... then he stayed in that position for sometime and then went back to his side... aaliya rose and rubbed her eyes a bit as she was half awaken... then she sat up and zain put his hand around her shoulder while she tilted a bit towards him... then again rested her head on his shoulder..
zain: gudmrng mamu ki bhanji...
aaliya: gudmrng kitkit...
zain: you okay?
aaliya: ya i am good... okay i have to go.. long day today... bye...
saying this she pecked on his cheek and gave a quick hug..
zain: bye mkb...
chal beta tujhe bhi gaurav ki madad krni hai... he thought...

SANGEET CEREMONY...
sangeet ceremony mei dulhan ko mehndi lagai jaati hai...
aaliya: aunti zara acchi si mehndi lagana... mere jeju ko naam nhi dikhna chahiye..
shilpa jokingly scolded her... while aaliya let out a giggle..

GAURAV'S ROOM...
zain: soch gaurav sochh... koi toh tareeka hoga... socch...
zain was in gaurav's room and he was walking around the room..
gaurav: yaar.. tu rehne de.. wahan sangeet shuru ho chuka hai.. jab tak tu sochega na tab tak khatam bhi ho chuka hoga...
zain: shut up... sochne de mujhe.. umm.. idea..
gaurav got up from the couch..
zain: hum andhar ladki ban ke jayenge..
gaurav: ladki ban ke?
zain: haan.. dekh... meine pta lagaya hai ki aaj ki ceremony pe 2 ladkiya ane waali hai jinka naam geeta aur kavita hai... shilpa ki dost hai.. pure guest list aaliya ke paas hai.. par usse yeh hi nhi pta ki aaj woh dono nhi aa rhi hai... toh hum usse bina bataye chup chap ladki ban ke chale jayenge.. then u can see ur wife in that stupid getup..
he said the last part sadly... gaurav hugged zain..
gaurav: thanks so much bhai..
zain: its k gaurav..

MEHNDI CEREMONY...
zain and gaurav had entered.. zain was wearing a red and yellow saree while gaurav was wearing a green and blue saree... they looked really stupid.. they had covered their faces with the saree and were telling everyone they cnt raise it...
zain and gaurav were walking when they spotted aaliya on the way..
aaliya: namaste..
being a muslim she also knew a bit about hindu culture... she gathered her hands and bowed in front of them..
zain cleared his throat to make his voice like a lady...
zain: namaste..
gaurav: namaste..
aaliya: aap log kon?
zain: ji umm... umm... um..
aaliya: aapko apna naam tak yaad nhi?
zain: nhi... humein yaad hai... mere naam kavita hai...
aaliya: aur aap?
she said as she turned her face towards gaurav...
gaurav: ji mera naam... ji mera naam geeta hai...
aaliya: aap zara ye ghunghat utayenge?
zain: ji nhi... umm.. mei nhi uttar skta.. oops.. umm uttar skti...
gaurav: haan mei bhi nahi uttar skti...
aaliya: chaliye koi baat nhi...
aaliya showed them the way...
then she went and sat beside shilpa..
zain admired her... they way she looked was admirable.. her curly hair.. her lehenga chori... her eyes... then he saw some girls coming up to her and making her stand and then taking her to the dance floor... he admired her even more as she danced.. the innocent girl he had fallen in love with.. then he saw her leaving them and again going and sitting beside shilpa... a smile played on his face...
aunti: kya naam likhna hai shilpa?
everyone giggled including zain and aaliya...
shilpa: aunti... (blushes)
aunti: decide nahi kiya kya?
everyone giggles again... while gaurav makes a sad face...
shilpa: aunti gaurav...
she said at a really slow volume...
aunti: kya sunai nhi diya..
shilpa: aunti... gaurav..
this time she said it loud and clear..
zain looked at gaurav who was smiling..
aunti: gaurav.. theek hai...
aunti wrote gaurav and prettily decorated it on her hand..
then she turned at aaliya...
aunti: arre beta tumhari bhi toh shaadi hui thi na...
a blush ran down her cheeks..
aaliya: haan unfortunately aunti..
everyone laughed while zain got angry...
aunti: toh phir tum bhi mehndi lag wa lo..
aaliya got up and walked towards aunti and sat beside her..
aunti: haan ab batao kya naam hai uss khushnaseeb ka?
aaliya: zain..
a smile lit zain's face...
aunti: mashallah... kya jodi hai.. zain aur aaliya... matlab zaya?
aaliya: haan..
aunti: chalo phir acchi baat hai...
she wrote zain on her hand and decorated it..
aaliya: thnks aunti...
aunti: bahaut pyaari lag rhi hai mehndi..
then everyone started chatting.. talking... dancing.. just then shilpa noticed something...
shilpa: aaliya?
aalliya: hmm?
shilpa: geeta aur kavita nhi aaye?
aaliya: aaye hai na..
she said as she pointed towards zain and gaurav...
shilpa was shocked..
shilpa: yeh geeta aur kavita hai?
aaliya: haan kyun?
shilpa: aaliya meine unhe aaj tak pure kapdo mei nhi dekha... aur dekho toh... they are size zero aaliya... yeh toh itne mote hai... they are not geeta and kavita...
aaliya: kya?
then she looked closely towards them.. she noticed that the girl in red and yellow saree who introduced herself as kavita (zain) was wearing zain's watch... she thought: why will a girl want to wear a men's watch with a saree that is so bright... every girl has this much of common sense...
yes shilpa was right they are not kavita and geeta..
they are zain and gaurav...
oh zain dear.. u r living with me for months now and no improvement... now i am gnna show what i am made of.. agar meine tumhe maza na chaka diya toh mera naam bhi aaliya zain abdullah nhi...
aaliya: shilpa?
shilpa: hmm?
she said as she was looking and zain and gaurav.. trying to figure out what was wrong with them..
aaliya: they are not kavita and geeta..
shilpa: kya matlab hai tumhara?
aaliya: they are zain and gaurav!
shilpa was shocked..
shilpa: really?
aaliya: yes...
shilpa got angry..
shilpa: hmm.. lets go then...
aaliya: kaha?
shilpa: inhe maza chakane... bada aaye mere sangeet mei ghusne waale..
aaliya: k bestie..

HERES CHAPTER-2..
I KNOW THERE IS NO ZAYA ROMANCE..
BUT YOU DONT WORRY NEXT CHAPTER WILL HAVE LOADS OF IT..
THANKS FOR YOUR REPLIES..
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
CHAPTER-3 WILL BE THERE BY TOMORROW OR BY TODAY NIGHT..
THANKS..

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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nishi joshi

@nishi_taareyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

great work dear... 😊😊 continue writing ... ur work is reaally appreciable...

dont think about likes u will get them as u write more... ur really a⭐️

and dont forget to pm me when u write😊😊

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

Superb
Continue soon
Can you please pm me and accept my buddy request

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: nishi_taareyfan
great work dear... 😊😊 continue writing ... ur work is reaally appreciable...
dont think about likes u will get them as u write more... ur really a⭐️
and dont forget to pm me when u write😊😊

thank you so much dear...
pls accept my buddy request..
thanks😊

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