JEALOUS JODHA MODERN DAY STORY :akdha OS part 2 pg3

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JODHA WAS COMPLETELY ENGROSSED IN HER BOOK WHEN SHE FELT A SENSATION ON HER HAND...WITH A JERK SHE CAME OUT OF HER DREAMLAND AND TURNED TO HER LEFT TO SEE THE SOURCE OF IT...SHE SIGHED AND SAID..

JODHA - jalal...

JALAL WAS LOOKING IN HIS BOOK BUT WAS HAVING A SMILE ON HIS FACE AND IN WHISPERS THEY STARTED TALKING..

JALAL - problem kya hai tumhari...

JODHA - kya matlab...aur tum yahan kya kar rhe ho and leave my hand koi dekh lega to..

JALAL - oh really matlab u care for others more than me...

JODHA - kya hua hai ab kya kiya maine...

JALAL - tum ache se jaanti ho tat my day never starts without having a look at your face then also tum class me bhi nhi aayi aur na hi garden area me. The reason ki tum yahan ho engrossed in ur other boyfriend

JODHA - other boyfriend????

JALAL - ur books sweetheart...

JODHA - shutup and leave my hand...mujhe bohot kaam hai JALAL pls...

JALAL - no way...ma..

BEFORE HE COULD COMPLETE THE DEVIL INTEREPETED...

RUQAIYA - hi jalal...

JALAL WAS TOTALLY IRRITATED WITH THIS GIRL...

RUQAIYA- if u don't have any problem to kya mai yahan baith sakti hun...

ALL THIS WHILE ANGER ON JODHA'S FACE COULD BE SEEN CLEARLY SEEN...

JALAL - ya sure...

RUQAIYA SAT AND LEANED HERSELF MORE CLOSER TO JALAL AND STARTED BLURTING OUT HER CRAP... SHE HELD HIS HAND IN HER'S MAKING JODHA'S ANGER CROSS HER LIMITS....

RUQAIYA - jalal tum to jante hi hona ki ek tum hi to ho jis se mai iss project ke bare me baat kar sakti hun questioning kar sakti hun haina

JODHA - vaise ruqaiya tumhare project ka topic kya hai...

RUQAIYA - what u mean

JODHA - I was just aise hi asking ki tumhare project ka topic mechanisms par hi based hai na yaa phir dusron ke boyfriends ke saath kaise flirt karte hai iss par based hai...

JALAL - (laughs)

RUQAIYA - excuse me...

JODHA - ummm nothing...I guess I shud leave actually somebody was waiting for me in the morning and now I m not able to locate that person agar tumhe dikhe to bol dena ki mai uss se milna chahti thi {while giving a deadly glare to jalal}

JODHA COLLECTED ALL HER BOOKS AND STARTED MOVING TOWARDS THE BOOK SHELVES...

JODHA - aur hain ek aur baat jitna time aur dimaag tum jalal se questions puchne me laga deti ho na agar utna project ki taraf lagao to baat hi kuch aur thi...

AND SHE LEFT....

RUQAIYA - oh god jalal tum ise kaise handle karte ho I feel bad for u..

JALAL - vaise thanks for tat lekin uski koi zaroorat nhi hai tum apna khyal rakhlo tat's enough... Now pls excuse me...

BEHIND THE SHELVES...

JODHA WAS ARRANGING THE BOOKS BACK INTO THERE ORDER... WHEN JALAL CAME AND HUGGED HER FROM THE BACK...SHE STRUGGLED TO FREE HERSELF BUT IN VAIN HE HELD HER TIGHTLY...

JODHA - kya hua mr.mohammad time mil gya aapko...

JALAL - JEALOUS...

SHE TILTED HER HEAD TO SEE HIM...

JODHA - JEALOUS MY FOOT...

JALAL - itna gussa...shit man aur kisi ko dar lage na lage mujhe zaroor lag rha hai...

JODHA - look jalal samajha dena ruqaiya ko ki agar agli baar tumhare aas paas bhi dikha na to mai...

JALAL - to aap kya lady bheem

JODHA - to mai use nhi chodhungi...

JALAL - acha baba...I promise aisa agli baar bilkul bhi nhi hoga...

JODHA - ab chodho mujhe varna mam a jayengi...

JALAL - madam ji library me humare alava ab koi nhi hai...

SHE TURNED AROUND TO FACE HIM

JODHA - ACHA ...

JALAL RUBBED HIS NOSE WITH JODHA AFFECTIONATELY AND THEY HUGGED EACHOTHER..

JODHA - I LOVE U JALAL...

JALAL - I LOVE U TOO JODHA....

~*~*~*~*THE END*~*~*~*~



OKAY MY FIRST ATTEMPT AND I SERIOUSLY NEED UR REVIEWS...SO HWS THIS ONE GUYS...

PLS LIKE AND CMNET IF U LIKED AND LOVED IT...

CRITICISMS ARE MOST WELCOME...

SHISHI⭐️


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow wonderful start..😳
beautifully written👏luved it...😳
plz do cont.
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ohh i 4got...
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Good attempt, buddy.
Thanks for sharing.
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That was a lovely and cute os dear , really such a nice attempt ^^ *-* *-* !
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omg!!!! vow!!! superb!!! Awesome!!! Yaar loved it... what a cute nok jok... Jodha's gussa subhan allah... mar java... Ruku ki to kya bend bajai Jodha ne... and cute hug... LADY BHIM😆 SUPERB!!! Continue soon👏👏👏

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a very cute story dear :)))
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loved ur os... continue dear with next ones... keep updating other ss or os soon...
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Nice Attempt 👏👏 Keep writing
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Awesum yrr loved it 👏
I am expecting same Jealousy frm Jodha in the show also 😳
Thanks for the PM buddy😉

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