JEALOUS JODHA MODERN DAY STORY :akdha OS part 2 pg3 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Shishi! 🤗
Lovely OS dear... Very cute!😳 I loved Jealous Jo... Ruqs ko kisine bhaav hi nahi diya😆 the confession and hug was cute😳
Keep writing my love!😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was so cute and sweet os. love jealous jodha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOT A DOZEN BUT JUST YOU

SALIMA - good morning sleepy head utho bhi koi aaj ke din itni der tak kaise so sakta hai...

JODHA STIRRED IN HER SLEEP

JODHA - good morning SA...

SHE DIDN'T LET HER COMPLETE...

SALIMA - happy birthday JODHA...

AND SHE HANDED HER THE GIFT...WHICH WAS A BEAUTIFUL BRACELET AND A COLLAGE CONSISTING ALL THEIR SPECIAL MOMENTS...

JODHA - thank u sooo much salima...

SALIMA - now just get up and get ready aaj pehli class hi atgah sir ki hai...

JODHA - okieee...

THEY GOT READY AND REACHED THE CORRIDOR. ON THEIR WAY THEY MET RAHIM WHO ALSO WISHED JODHA AND TOGETHER THEY LEFT FOR THEIR CLASS.THEY ENTERED AND AKDHA HAD A MINI EYELOCK...

JODHA WENT AWAY AND SAT NEXT TO JALAL WHO WAS HAVING A SMIRK ON HIS FACE...

AS THE CLASS STARTED UNDER THE TABLE JALAL HELD JODHA'S HAND AND TO HIS SURPRISE SHE DIDN'T ASKED HIM TO LEAVE IT...

JALAL - kya baat hai aaj badi khush lag rhi ho tum...

JODHA SMILED MORE

JALAL - wait karo tumhe surprise karne ke liye mere paas ek news hai...

JODHA GOT SUPER EXCITED THINKING ABOUT HOW SWEET OF JALAL TAT HE PLANNED A SURPRISE 4 HER...

JODHA (THOUGHT) - mai to kal raat se wait kar rhi hun iss surprise ka...

AS THE CLASS GOT OVER THE FOUR FRNDS STARTED MOVING TOWARDS THE EXIT WHEN JALAL WAS CALLLED BY ATGAH SIR FOR SOME WORK SO HE WENT AWAY LEAVING THE TRIO...THE TRIO WENT TO CANTEEN...

SALIMA - JODHA mujhe lagta hai ki jalal tumhara bday bhul gyi hai...

RAHIM - hain JODHA varna vo abhi tak tumhe wish to kar hi deta...

JODHA - nhi guys aisa kuch bhi nhi hai usne abhi abhi mujhe class me bola hai ki he has some surprise for me so don't worry...

JODHA - HAAN BABA don't take tension use zaroor yaad hoga... tum dono pastry khao...

RAHIM - magar jodha

JODHA - relax guys...

THIS WHOLE CONVO WAS HEARD BY RUQAIYA WHO HAD SUMTHING ELSE IN HER MIND

JALAL WAS IN MECHANICAL LAB WORKING ON SOME PROJECT...

RUQAIYA - Ye yaad hai ki aaj pk sir ne kaam diya hai lekin lagta hia ki kuch aur bhi kaam hai jo kit um bhul rhe ho JALAL...

JALAL TURNED AROUND

JALAL - KYA matlab hai tumhara...

RUQAIYA - nhi mai bas aise hi soch rhi thi ki sham tak bechari JODHA ka...

JALAL - shut up!!! Tum kehna kya chahti ho...

RUQAIYA - mai to bas yahi kehna chahti thi kit um uska kitna dil dukhane vale ho...

JALAL - look ruqaiya just stay out of it okay aur agar tum yeh kehna chahti ho ki mere aur jodha ke beech kuch hone waala hai then better keep ur predictions wid urself only. I hope uss din library waala scene tumhe ache se yaad hoga haina...just get the hell out of here...

RUQAIYA - mai to chali hi jaungi lekin tumhe meri baat ke baare me baad me pata chalega..

RUQAIYA WENT OUT.

EVENING TIME

JALAL WAS STILL WORKING IN THE LAB ONLY WHEN SALIMA AND RAHIM MARCHED IN THUNDERING THE STREAKS OF QUESTIONS TOWARDS JALAL...

SALIMA - jalal pls tum sach sach batao ki tum jodha ko kya surprise dene vale ho pls cmon yaaar

RAHIM - haan jalal poora college chaan chuke hai tumhare surprise ka to naamo nishaan bhi nhi hai kahin par tum karne kya vale ho...

JALAL - guys ek baat bato use ye batane ke liye ki humara project successful tha tumhe kya lagta hai ki mai tayariyaan karunga that's just stupidity yaar cmon guys...

SALIMA - what u mean by project tumhe pata hai na ki aaj kya hai...

JALAL - of course mai calendar dekhta hun yaar aaj 2nd feb yaani Wednesday hai...to whats so special...

SALIMA - argh...rahim samjhau issse. Mujhe pata tha kit umhe kuch yaad nhi hoga I was sooo right and jodha was sooo wrong...

JALAL - what right what wrong???

RAHIM - JALAL aaj JODHA ka birthday hai aur tum bhul gye how cud you yaar..

JALAL WAS HELL SHOCKED HE FORGOT HER BITHDAY CMON MAN...

SALIMA LOOKED AWAY IN FRUSTRATION AND SAW A TEARY JODHA ON THE DOOR STANDING NUMB AS IF ALL HER EXCITEMENT WAS DRIED UP...

SALIMA - JALAL

AS SOON AS JALAL SAW HER HE WAS ALSO NUMB TO SEE HER THERE... JODHA TURNED AWAY AND STARTED RUNNING TOWARDS THE GARDEN FOLLOWED BY JALAL

FINALLY JALAL GOT HOLD OF HER AND TOOK HER IN HIS EMBRACE BUT SHE TRIED TO FREE HERSELF...WITHOUT LEAVING HER...

JALAL - I m soo sorry jodha I kno ki maine galti ki hai actually a crime but mai sachi mai srrry bol rha hun pls mujhe maaf kardo...

HE LEFT HER BENT ON HIS KNEES...

JALAL - pls jodha plsss...

JODHA - okk..now get up...

JALAL - uhhh finally I m successful..

JODHA - wait what r u hiding behind...

JALAL - nothing bus aise hi hai kuch..

JODHA - show me ...

JALAL BOUGHT HIS HAND IN FRONT AND IT WAS A ROSE BUD ...

JODHA - yeh kahan se aaya...

JALAL - I plucked it from the garden area abhi kuch tha to nhi mere paas so bas yehi mila right now...

JODHA - AWEEE... U R SOOO SWEET...

HE PULLED HER CLOSE TO HIMSELF

JALAL - I know...and now next time I promise u a dozen..

JODHA - I DON'T NEED A DOZEN I JUST NEED U...

THEY JOINED THERE HEADS AND SMILING...

JALAL - HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETHEART...

JODHA - THANK U... LUV U JALAL...

JALAL - LUV U TOO...

~*~*~*~*THE END~*~*~*~*

SHISHI...

SO HWS THIS ONE GUYS...

I KNO IT DOESN'T RESEMBLE THE NAME JEALOUS JODHA BUT I WILL POST MORE ONE SHOTS LIKE THIS ONLY... KK SO PLS REVIEW THIS AND TELL ME HWS IT ALL THE CMENTS LIKES CRITICISMS ARE MOST WELCOME

PS. THIS STORY WAS ORIGINALLY WRITTEN BY ME BUT AT THAT TIME THE CHARACTERS WERE OF A DIFF. SHOW SO I JUST CHANGED THE ...IF U FIND ANY UNKNOWN NAME THEN PLEASE MUJHE MAAF KAR DENA HUZOOR😆

Edited by kabhiasya4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one 👏
Can I suggest you the topic on which u should write after this one? 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...such a cute OS..i read both the parts...tooo cute...😳😳 i awlayzz..love colllege JO-JA..they are sooo YOUNG n NAUGHTY!!😆😆 LOVED IT yaar!!!! good job!!😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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an amazing ,cute os😃
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely OS... i wish ur birth day shoulld be like this...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey one question appeared
Ye RANDHIR AUR KAUSTUKI KAHA SE AYE
I THINK THEY ARE FROM SADDA HAQ RANDHIR IS LEAD N KAUSTUKI IS FRIEND OF SANYUKTA LEAD OF SADDA HAQ RYT ...🤣

WHATEVER BUT AWESOME N CUTE OS KEEP WRITING
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Hey one question appeared
Ye RANDHIR AUR KAUSTUKI KAHA SE AYE
I THINK THEY ARE FROM SADDA HAQ RANDHIR IS LEAD N KAUSTUKI IS FRIEND OF SANYUKTA LEAD OF SADDA HAQ RYT ...🤣

JODHA - thank u sooo much kaustuki...


SALIMA - JODHA mujhe lagta hai ki randhir tumhara bday bhul gyi hai...

WHATEVER BUT AWESOME N CUTE OS KEEP WRITING

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