Posted:
Very nicely written..
I loved the flow of words, so easy to read...and such a sweet ending, where he holds her close and comforts her.
The first two paragraphs describing the way she was chasing a butterfly...and the sudden change to the funeral scene, was very nicely done..
Paro's pain and confusion at watching her dead parents was very evident...you described her emotions beautifully...
Indeed there would be no more nightmares...
Love
what_the (Maya)
PS: You totally deserve to be on Napster-sa's list... đ
Anupamaa
