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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Very nicely written..

I loved the flow of words, so easy to read...and such a sweet ending, where he holds her close and comforts her.

The first two paragraphs describing the way she was chasing a butterfly...and the sudden change to the funeral scene, was very nicely done..

Paro's pain and confusion at watching her dead parents was very evident...you described her emotions beautifully...

Indeed there would be no more nightmares...

Love

what_the (Maya)

PS: You totally deserve to be on Napster-sa's list... 😛

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shirinfarhaad

@shirinfarhaad

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Oh!!! Lovely OS, heartwarming and wonderful!

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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: What_the
Very nicely written..
I loved the flow of words, so easy to read...and such a sweet ending, where he holds her close and comforts her.

The first two paragraphs describing the way she was chasing a butterfly...and the sudden change to the funeral scene, was very nicely done..

Paro's pain and confusion at watching her dead parents was very evident...you described her emotions beautifully...

Indeed there would be no more nightmares...

Love

what_the (Maya)

PS: You totally deserve to be on Napster-sa's list... 😛

Thank you so much for the lovely detailed comment. You completely made my day with those beautiful words and I am so glad that the emotions had the desired effect on the readers 😊. Thank you once again😛😛

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Amazing. U have writtenn it sooo well..

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

I can't express in words how beautiful it was... It was short yet so sweet! Absolutely loved it... OS OF THE WEEK FOR ME! 👏 you keep bringing up these kinda os/FF/SS please... And do pm me😳

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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Mushfika
I can't express in words how beautiful it was... It was short yet so sweet! Absolutely loved it... OS OF THE WEEK FOR ME! 👏 you keep bringing up these kinda os/FF/SS please... And do pm me😳

Thank you so much for those kind words. 😃😃 I am so glad that you said that. Nothing is better than a thoughtful and sincere comment from the readers. 😛😛

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: HappilyLost

Thank you so much for those kind words. 😃😃 I am so glad that you said that. Nothing is better than a thoughtful and sincere comment from the readers. 😛😛

Aww.. Lol after reading this OS, I immediately visited your profile to search for some other works of yours... and found few too but unfortunately it was too late... I'm gonna continue reading today again😆 Btw, make an index... you really need one...I don't want these beautiful works to be lost ever... 😳 and I'm saying it for my benefit as well, So that i don't need to search for your stories 🥱😆 ..

PS: Gonna reread 'nightmare' now 😳

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