[AS] SS: At First Blush - part 2, pg 9 DC

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Superb update...u written the part so cutely...sakshi moving to new flat and rasha daughter is apple of all eyes chooo cute...Arjun sakshi's neighbor great...waiting for there nok Johk and there encounters...do Cont soon dr...do PM me while updating...i couldn't get any clue for ur update...

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Ayushi Patel

@arakshi_16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I love doing MASH with my friends it's so fun, I love the story super. PM ASAP PLZZ.. Want to talk...

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I hate you! 😭

Kahe aisan karrat ho Tahi maiyaa!! Isiliye hum tumko Cruelty ki mata kehat hain... Aisa kaahe karrat ho humre saath?

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Oh no... This one was so interesting... Arjun Sakshi chemistry was rocking... Arjun was so different... Please re consider your decision and continue with this please please pretty please x

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

y DISCONTINUED??????

hey ur starting ur story with interesting note and suddenly ur discontinuing...don do this... take ur time we will wait don DC...

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Please continue this... This was the most exciting of ur works arjun was so cool... Please re consider and re start this again x

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

just read all parts and realised i have read 1'st wala page but i guess there was no name for the story

but it really is awwsome i mean arjun sakshi sworn enemies since childhood but guess arjun is bit

possessive of her hence scared her class 12'th boyfriend

also he is bit protective hence follow her to her home offcourse making her life miserable is must for him but now that they r padosi what will happen to others living in the building 😆

pls if possible pm me also for rest of the parts

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Heylooo Tahi!😃

i cannot believe i came across this so late😲

anywaaay, my morning started with this! i read a bit of the prologue and i was hooked to it from the start! ahhh those childhood pranks, and all the flashbacks - so awesomely penned down!👏

haha i love their love-hate relationship ! he cannot live without making her life hell can he?😛 and yet, he makes sure she doesnt have to go home alone..that was so awww😳

the basketball match, the math-tuition bit, everything was so feel-good!😃

now coming to the last part - the way your transitioned to the present was amazing! little Anwesha sounds so cute and adorable!😃

i cracked up when i read the end hahahaaa it was awesomeee! but i was kinda expecting it when she moved in haha. i dont know why i had this feeling that he was going to be her neighbour!😆😆😆

and now the fun starts!😃

i LOVE this story of yours! so if you have a PM list, can you please add me to it?

would love to read the rest😳

EDITED:

WHAAAT? discontinued?? i just read that! NOOO you cant discontinue it please dont please dont, not when i just got hooked to it

Edited by ritu_24 - 12 years ago