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Posted: 11 years ago
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Today's epi - I don't want to rewrite ! Nothing to be rewritten ! It was just perfect ! After many days , huh ?! I just wanted to add a teensy weensy bit to the beginning scene - so here it is.

Saras was sitting on the chair hugging his family photo. He spoke to her mom and promised her that he will definitely rescue his brother from all the troubles he is strangled in , while promising he hugged the photo tighter. The camera moves from saras to the door right behind his left hand. The camera zooms and we see Kumud smiling at our Saras teary eyed . her hands crossed change their posture , she moves towards Saras and her hands rest on his shoulder. Without another word Saras puts his hand on his wife's , reassuring her that he is all well and that she should not worry. On the other hand a tear falls from his eye and it makes its way to her hand. She feels it and her eyes close , knowing that her Saras is going through pain , but doesn't say a word as she knows that he doesn't want her to know what hurricane is brewing within him. A tear silently pulls its way across her cheek too.

Okay - that was an addition - as I said did not want to change anything in this episode. Nothing at all.

What are your views ? I wanna know ? Liked the epi ? Was it better than the feed we got last friday ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I editted it - had some mistakes , but now doesn't . ;P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes Pia.. I too felt that the episode was good. 😃 And the scene scene you added is also good😃 But I don't have anything to rewrite today and I loved Samud both like small cute penguins in london..😳😆 hand in hand
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: believerintruth

Today's epi - I don't want to rewrite ! Nothing to be rewritten ! It was just perfect ! After many days , huh ?! I just wanted to add a teensy weensy bit to the beginning scene - so here it is.

Saras was sitting on the chair hugging his family photo. He spoke to her mom and promised her that he will definitely rescue his brother from all the troubles he is strangled in , while promising he hugged the photo tighter. The camera moves from saras to the door right behind his left hand. The camera zooms and we see Kumud smiling at our Saras teary eyed . her hands crossed change their posture , she moves towards Saras and her hands rest on his shoulder. Without another word Saras puts his hand on his wife's , reassuring her that he is all well and that she should not worry. On the other hand a tear falls from his eye and it makes its way to her hand. She feels it and her eyes close , knowing that her Saras is going through pain , but doesn't say a word as she knows that he doesn't want her to know what hurricane is brewing within him. A tear silently pulls its way across her cheek too.

Okay - that was an addition - as I said did not want to change anything in this episode. Nothing at all.

What are your views ? I wanna know ? Liked the epi ? Was it better than the feed we got last friday ?

Didnt see. Will have to wait to see it. But did this really happen? If so, great.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pia i liked the epi😳
and i jst hope this track will bring trp highy for he show or thn rumours be khtm ho jai gy😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pia ...



The Episode today was Nice ...


But i wish they had they added something like the Scene written by you...That would have been Great😊


Great Idea ...Great Scene ... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

Didnt see. Will have to wait to see it. But did this really happen? If so, great.

The second para did not happen..its just a version of Pia..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow ur addition 👏 if only uncreatives used sme brain
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh-aarambh

Yes Pia.. I too felt that the episode was good.😃 And the scene scene you added is also good😃 But I don't have anything to rewrite today and I loved Samud both like small cute penguins in london..😳😆 hand in hand



Yeh hui naa baat subu ! Aaj ka epi accha tha ! So do I wish - trp attracts like iron to magnet ! Small cute penguins - so right 😆 !! Two cutie teddy bears - hand in hand !! That taxi scene was awesome , bechaare samud and that taxi driver ko samud ko dekhe aam ras puri yaad aa gayee - kya kare iska koi kasoor nahi - woh hain he itne cute !!!! I think the new writer wrote the scenes but then all these scenes are shot long back ... What do you say ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pasumarthisa


Didnt see. Will have to wait to see it. But did this really happen? If so, great.



No my friend the scene ended when Saras hugged the photo tightly. This is my addition to make it a pinch better than what it already is.

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