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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guyz... 😳 First post here...😃 I donno much about the show yet, but the promos were impressive.. and yesterday i caught up with few episodes and i am completely in love with Sameer..😳 He is just too cute 😳
Although i love this cutie pie avatar of him, but i love Angry Young Man attitude as well... 😆 So i am waiting eagerly for his changed avatar 😳
Ok.. so i wrote something on SaHer, this takes place after Sameer's return as an army officer..WARNING:- My thoughts have a bad habit of reaching to the extream levels 😆... Sorry if there are any errors Hope you like it ... Please Please Hit like if you find it good 😳
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There was always love in sameer's heart for meher. But his witty and childish mind was too dominant on his heart which never led him to realize this.

But after facing a time which took away his innocent, joyous and happy go lucky life, everything chaged.
Meher had been noticing his change in behaviour ever since he came back as an army officer.
She herself had changed over the time. But not as much as sameer.
After her marriage failed to take place, all she had in her life was insult. But she was strong enough to face it.

She tried to talk to sameer but he hardly responded. He did notice her constant efforts to bring him back to what he once used to be, but he avoided her.
His love was the same, but he had changed.
His intense looks and his serious face always managed to hide his love for her. But such a deep love is tough to hide for a long time.

It was a rainy night when sameer entered his room with cuts and bruises on his body.
He had fought with few boys who were trying to mishandle meher.
He recalled how meher was shocked on seeing his agressive fight with the boys. Her sweet, soft, tender hearted sameer was now so harsh and tough.

He took our his shirt to reveal his muscular body covered by a thin black vest.
Taking a cotton dipped in dettol he tried to reach to the back of his shoulder where he had a wound.
His tough hand was held by a soft one which took the cotton.

"mai lagaa doon?"
A sweet familiar girly voice asked.
He closed his eyes tightly to avoid his soft feelings for her.
He wanted to look back and hug
Her tight but he stopped.
"kya karr rahi hai tu yaha? Jaa yaha se" he said.

Meher didn't pay any heed and applied the cotton on his wound.

"chup chaap khhadaa reh! "
She finished applying it.
"haa ho gaya!"

He turned around and grabbed her by her shoulders.
"kaha na jaa..!"
"kyu!??"
"kyuki mai keh raha hu."

And he walked to the window to look away from her captivating eyes.

She walked to him.
"kyu aisa kar rahe ho tum? Haan? Mujhe toh samajh hi nai aa raha!! Aakhir baat kya hai?"

He was quiet.

"meri taraf dekh! Dekh na!! Kuch bol!!"

It was just too much for her. She was tired.
"theek hai. Matt bol. Kuch matt bol. Mai samajh gayi. pind vaalo ki tarah tu bhi ..."

She paused.
" Pind vaalo ne hamesha meri beizzati ki... Seh liya.. Kiske
Liye? Tere liye! Lekin abb tu hi? Abb mere jeene ka kya faayda!"

She sounded so determined that her words pinched his heart.

She tried to leave but her tender arm was grabbed by his strong hand. And she was forcefully pulled back by him and she banged on his hard chest.
She looked up at him in shock. He had intense deep look in his eyes and they were glues to her lips.
She felt a weird kind of nervousness.
His chubby eyes had turned into such hot ones.
His childish look had turned into a mature attitude.
Her nose was touching his, he was so close.
His eyes were so dominating, she forgot the whole world.

She tried to come out of his grip but the more she tried, the stronger he made his grip.

He moved down and took her up in his arms. She was so surprized
That she freezed.
His gaze was fixed on her and she started having problems in looking into his eyes due to their intense looks.

She gulped as he took her to the bed and carefully layed her on it.
This was so freaking weird (and pleasing) for her; even her tongue gave up to ask for mercy from those sizzling eyes.

With his muscular body covering
Her tender body totally,He leaned close to her. She felt so nervous but she didn't want this stop. His gesture was so rudely-loving.

He went closer causing her to close her eyes and touched her lips with his.
She clintched her eyes tightly but did not respond to the kiss.
But he was not giving up. Closing his eyes,He moved ko kiss her upper lip and then the lower one... Just to make her nervously clentch the bed cover with her hands and feet.
She moved her head to the other side to take her lips away for some air. But his strong hand forced her lips back to the place.

This time she just had to give up. She kissed him back as he moved his fingers inside her hair. The other hand holding her waist tightly.

She grasped his bare shoulder with her hand and moved the other hand through his hair..

As soom as sameer felt meher's hands on him, he suddenly got back to life and realized that he had gone too far. He had to stop right then.
But he didn't want to break away abruptly and get up and shout at her to leave. He didn't want her to feel that he did this as an accident.

He slowly broke the kiss and looked at her, their noses still brushing.
She opened her eyes with hesitation.
He got up and sat on the bed.
She realized what had happened and she was feeling so shy, she wanted to run away and think about it again and again. She got up and smiled which was noticed by sameer.
With her blushing face she ran away from the room.
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❤️Rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.. :D
Unres...

Wooww.. u are the first one who started writing on saher.

Loved the OS. Loved the story and loved it how u made sameers character change.

Please do write many more stories.. and please do write some FF's too which goes too long. Keep writing on saher dear.

Enjoyed reading it. =]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhhaaa that was marvelous piece of writing.👏
Do write more on Saher 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: krupaa

Ahhhaaa that was marvelous piece of writing.👏

Do write more on Saher 😊

thnku so much...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naz_YuvReen

Res.. :D

Unres...

Wooww.. u are the first one who started writing on saher.

Loved the OS. Loved the story and loved it how u made sameers character change.

Please do write many more stories.. and please do write some FF's too which goes too long. Keep writing on saher dear.

Enjoyed reading it. =]

Oh thnku so much ...😳 i really like sameer... and i feel SaHer can make a gr8 couple... 😃 i will surely write more...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: QH_DDEJ_Fan

Lovely OS :) Keep writing

Thnks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TasrinS

Beautifuly written...loved it.

Nice to see you here 😃 thnks a lot😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such a nice oneshot. it was perfect really loved continue u to write more. looking forward to read more work from you

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