RaBir OS : Seven minutes in heaven

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Esha Singh

@eshasrk

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Thank you so much for the PM dear
I loved this, but can we get round 2 please 😉...????

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Vanilla.Sky

@Vanilla.Sky

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

That was such a beautiful FF, omg ☺️

You did such an amazing job on it and I really hope to read more FF from you in the future! ❤️

(P.S. - your FF is the reason I even joined this website. I just wanted to comment on how marvelous it was! 😳)

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Vanilla.Sky
That was such a beautiful FF, omg ☺️
You did such an amazing job on it and I really hope to read more FF from you in the future! ❤️

(P.S. - your FF is the reason I even joined this website. I just wanted to comment on how marvelous it was! 😳)

OMgg that s one of the sweetest thing anyone ever said to me !!! ☺️ aww here s a hug 🤗 .. sure dear i ll let know when I write more 😳

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

when is yhe nxt round cmng vibz

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PariDsouza

@PariDsouza

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia
when is yhe nxt round cmng vibz

yes vibz would love to read second round of this os. You are busy these days 😭 Try to write when you free 😳

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AESSOP

@AESSOP

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow, so beautifully written. That was my 7 minutes of heaven just reading it. I wish a scene like that happens in the serial, it would be so awesome! You are really a talented writer! Keep it going.

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Oh my, very well written!!!! You have me sitting in the office with a very silly grin on my face...🤣

Loved this please do a follow up!

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Always makes me wonder if innocence actually exists when it comes to passion.😆 Because Miss Gary certainly does not fit the bill of innocent.

Kabir Tripathi , the charm of a woman is hard to resist.

Well written dear.

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Gewels

@Gewels

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Eris that was a very welcome surprise! This was light, fresh and a delight 2 read. Please continue with part 2. I have 2 admit i still don't know what an OS is, but now that i've started reading them, they r fun!