RaBir OS : Seven minutes in heaven

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Kikidramagirl

@Kikidramagirl

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -Eris-
and I am in the gutter 😕😆
I did write FF s earlier with Vanny .. but we never finished them ... and I doubt they will ever end so I wont ask you to read them😆 ... actually this was a scene I had in mind from a long long time but the man was someone else.. never got around to writing it ... Since KT is from NY I guess he is fine playing such games 😆 ..
I had written this when we had loads of Rabir interaction but what s going on onscreen is def not inspiring for round two...😕

Your comment definately made me blush...☺️

Yeah seven minutes can get pretty intense since seven minutes is a lot but apparently not for Kabir since he wants round two ☺️

Come on!!Maybe they'll see your this OS and of course 2nd round if you write and they'll get inspired 😆

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oishi

@Oishiii

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow

sooo romantic 😳😳

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Moumi

@Moumimon

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow vibs..i am almost speechless...😳
in rabir dreaming world...really an amazing loved it...😎
PS: if possible pls make a sequel of it..👍🏼
it will be wonderful if we get any sequel of it...😆😆

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linu82

@linu82

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Oh wow, i m blushing, turning red this is really hot and well written. I do hope that there will be a second part. U have to otherwise our imagination will go wild. Good job keep it up.

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

owww
great great great, i like it

thanks for pm

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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awww...I just saw this!!! 🤗

You're welcome baby!!! Wonderful OS!!! 👏

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angelheart19

@angelheart19

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Amazing os, thanks for writing it on rabir .. so romantic

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musicgirl

@musicgirl

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

My face is like ☺️☺️☺️ while reading this! I could so imagine Kabir asking for round 2 ☺️. Can we also get round 2 please?

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PariDsouza

@PariDsouza

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I never heard about such games before, so i google to know about it before i start reading 😆

Oh Eris gimme a hug please 🤗

You've just mastered it.. You haven't missed a thing, it was just PERFECT for me.. I have no complaint about their incomplete kiss in fact i loved his kiss on rachna's forehead to assure his love for her. The kiss was very cute indeed.

BUT you better write on second round to complete the kiss 😈