~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter Two

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I am sooo in love wid ths story..innocent love❤️ hav been ages sinc i read smthng so pure n emotnaly intense like ths! awwsmm👏 cntinue soon😳

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

sooo cuteee love it doo continueee

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logambika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

love ur ff... pls continue and do pm me...

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome prologue
but what's the age of shlok in this
just got the doubt while reading

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome update
loved it
loving the bond between astha and shlok
cute
continue soon
plz pm me

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Pveenat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Very nice and too good! All together different story, really liked it so much😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

really really loving this..i have read your fist update...but couldn't comment...my most favorite dialogue from first update is "ok tiny...you won"..after that finger sucking things...i love this bond between ashlok...you are portraying the baby's movements very well...but i have one doubt...the age difference between ashlok...waiting for your next update...if you can plz pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awh! this is utterly innocent and pure! nice reading the pro and first chapter... poor baby Asttha lost her parents while so young... NA seems a good man!

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aishaa3
I am sooo in love wid ths story..innocent love❤️ hav been ages sinc i read smthng so pure n emotnaly intense like ths! awwsmm👏 cntinue soon😳

Thank you so much for liking it😊...That's really nice thing to say, I am touched. I will be posting the next part soon.