~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 3

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

sooo cuteee love it doo continueee

Originally posted by: logambika

love ur ff... pls continue and do pm me...

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome prologue
but what's the age of shlok in this
just got the doubt while reading

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
loving the bond between astha and shlok
cute
continue soon
plz pm me

Originally posted by: Pveenat

Very nice and too good! All together different story, really liked it so much😛

Originally posted by: hashima

really really loving this..i have read your fist update...but couldn't comment...my most favorite dialogue from first update is "ok tiny...you won"..after that finger sucking things...i love this bond between ashlok...you are portraying the baby's movements very well...but i have one doubt...the age difference between ashlok...waiting for your next update...if you can plz pm me

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Originally posted by: AshesToDust

Awh! this is utterly innocent and pure! nice reading the pro and first chapter... poor baby Asttha lost her parents while so young... NA seems a good man!

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Chapter three

Ur story is really nice..loved reading it..but onetng,aastha is a baby n anjali has already startd concering about her realatn wid shlok!

Awsm update😊 anjalis worries r so right...Cant wait for shlok to b back n try to manaofy astha😃 btw 1questn😛 do kids start talkng so much at the age of 3? I hv nevr hd much interactn wid so smal childrn so jus curious😆