After leap my story( please try it)

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Hi guys I am writing this story just for fun. This is a story made by me after the leap. Please have a look at the cast.
Alisha: zoya daughter no 1
Almost same to same copy of her mom. She is very bubbly and open. She believes in freedom and enjoyment however she hates pizza.

Nadia: zoya daughter no 2
Completely the opposite of Alisha. She is very shy and sweet. Believes in her religion a lot. Wears hijjab.

Ali: Tanveer son
Really really rich and spoiled. Loves to hang with his friends. However, he did not turn out to be like his mom.good from heart

Hareem: Najma s daughter
Cute and bubbly. Very simple and sweet.

Family number 1: alisha and Nadia live with Noor kala
Family number 2: Ali, Tanveer and shareef live together. By the way Shareef is another man Tanveer trapped.
Family 3: Imran and his daughter Hareem
Family no 1

Alisha: diii how long are you gonna take? The auto man is waiting from last 19 minutes.
( Nadia rushes out of her room)
Alisha: Dii not again. Come on it's our first day of college and you can't wear this hijjab. People will make fun of us.

Nadia: we should never leave or forget our religion because of others. I don't care

Alisha: okay baba I know u won't listen.

Both sit in the auto and leave for college
Both enter the college and everybody starts staring

Alisha: Kai kai.?? ... Hum chand sai aye hay

Unknown: lag tou kuch aisa he raha hai. Miss Hijabi ki Behna

Alisha: teri Tou!!!!!

Nadia: stop Alisha... Just ignore them

Alisha: okay di you go to your class and I need to go to my chemistry class. Bye bye

Bell rings( Alisha runs towards her class and bumps into a guy)

Ali: aaaiii. What the hell? What the hell?

Alisha: ohhh I am so sorry I need to go

Ali blocks Alisha's way

Ali: where do u think you are going mam without picking up me books.

Alisha: look I said sorry na now let me go

Ali: oh... Showing an attitude instead of feeling guilty

Alisha: aiii

Ali: aiii finger down . You don't know who you are talking to. Ali Fahad Rehman. The owner of this 3 malls in this city.

Alisha: Larki deki nahe... Kay show off shorow

Ali: hey mam whatever. You are wasting my time and your time. So it is better to pick up my books.

Hareem: Ali Kay hua...

Ali: nothing yaar ... Just stuck between weird people.

Hareem: come yaar we are getting late ... And why are your books laying on the ground?

Ali picks up the books and whispers to Alisha

Ali: you will have to pay for this "mam"

Hareem, Alisha and Ali are in the same class. Ali gets shocked to see Alisha in.his class.

Ali: tum

Alisha: pata nahe ...? Kis manhos ka cehra deka tha maina subh subh. Sara din Karab

Sarah: hey did you call me?

Alisha: oh no

Alisha whispered to herself
Alisha: who cAn talk to you. You are busy in your make up 24 hours

Sarah: by the way you know yaar. There is a new guy in our college. His is sooo rich.i need to trap him.

Alisha: ohhh that guy. Don't even talk about that loser

Sarah: no you might be mistaken...

Mr. Haider makes an entry in the class room.everybody stands up except Ali.

Haider: ohhh hello no manners

Ali: no sir... My manners are lost deeply deeply inside my richness. I don't know how to bring them out

Everybody begins to laugh

Haider: batameez. We need to have a talk. I guess a real one.

Ali: please sir. May we proceed... Out of this room

Haider: no now ... After this class.

Now Nadia s class
Nadia enters the class. Her friend comes towards her

Feza: aj tou Torah fashion kar late.. It was our college first day...

Gang of modern girl: ohhh shes from the old 50s girls... Ahahahhahahah

Fahad( haider son): what the hell is wrong with you guys. Why are you always behind her.

Gand if girls: so who should we be behind handsome... Ahahhahahah

Fahad: very very funny. Hah hahahaha right . You guys actually don't have the brains to understand who the actual modern one is.

Gang of girls: you are handsome as you dad... But your anger sits on your nose just like your dad.

Fahad: oh just shut up

Please tell me if I should continue or not. Tell me how you felt about the story.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!!!👏

Nice start!!!⭐️

Loved it!!!❤️

Yeah you should continue!!!😃

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