SwaRon OS: Tu Ne Jo Na Kahan...

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

tis was classic

edited my comment on pg 2 🤗

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wowww awesomeee one👏

jus lovedd ittt😊

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Another masterpiece of yours. It is a beautiful different view of the track. Not giving the patch up was a nice move and it made the story more apt and real. Keep writing like this.

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

another amazing os by u on current track...

beautifully penned down...

loved every bit of it...

loved d way u have described der emotion's...

ending was simply perfect... "i wil wait for Us to happen"...one of my fav dialogue in entire os...

and nice song selection...

overall it was just fabulous...

keep writing more... 😃

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try2149

@try2149

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Amazing os dear.

Just mind blowing.

Specially the end it was just the best.

U very well justified the situation, their emotions every thing. I really liked it.👏

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

what to say? i'm short of words its beautiful somewhat i would love story to move if not patch up

you are really a sensible and mature writer

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Ridzi

@Ro-001

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Amazing
Beautiful
Outstanding
Fantastic
No more words to say about it
It is one the story that pricked my heart
Thanks for writing so emotional story
And thanks for the pm

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

that was wonderful and brilliant and awesome os... loved it

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Fab os.
Beautifully written. The beginning ws very emotional.
Luvd it alot. Gr8 job.

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Awesome one shot..Actually the concept was amazing and emotional one..I like ur writing to penning down some of the emotional scenes..
Very well written..
Keep writing

Thanx for the PM
Sorry for the late

Prateek