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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os...

nic ending...

nd yus wating 4 ur works update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Wonderful OS 👏
Hate that Ruhi Chuhi 🤢
I loved it!!
Ending was amazing.. 😳
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Love love love love the ending! No doubts on that, and the thought behind it is brilliant! so Kudos to that!!! :D

Coming to the story, it was very intense, beautiful, and so so SwaRonish! :)
This is everything i love about SwaRon!

Seeing the stupid Swayam on the show, all i can think about is how to make him regret all this! And this was a brilliant way of showing that!
Fabulous concept. True to what SwaRon are to me!


It was just too good ya! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tanvish...

superb os.. really loved it a lot..

sharon swayam ruhi confrontation n swayam yelling sharon believing wat ruhi said was painful..

loved sharon's confidence wen she said hope u don't regret wat u said was bang on..

loved d pov of both.. d way they were analyzing things was awesome...

sharon kria convo was nice..

swaron convo in d end after swayam knowing d truth was blissful...

thanks for not giving a patch-up n wrote abt gaining trust.. thats d best part in os..

awesome work dear.. in love with ur writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing one !! ya bt somewhere frnds wale dialogue i felt different ...bt yes at end d typical swayam i loved d most..beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice
thanks for the pm
I think you should continue this os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing one !! ya bt somewhere frnds wale dialogue i felt different ...bt yes at end d typical swayam i loved d most..beautiful. n mst imp i loved sharon's decision to give dem time..dat s where swaron r reflected..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is awesome as it is... no patch up, it's okk atleast happy ending to h.. wonderful os dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼Omg...it is so beautifully penned...
Just perfect... Read it twice..
And i totally agree with u about not giving a patch up at the end...the end is completely justified...👏
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.as u mentioned u will be updating all ur stories, so eagerly waiting for them... I've become a huge fan of ur writing...
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey gal i just luv ur writing yaar
n evry time i read it m more in luv wd it
superb perception u have dear
awesum wrk
keep writng more offen

thanks for the pm !!!!!

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