SwaRon OS: Tu Ne Jo Na Kahan...

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Sharon was home.. Sitting in her room.. by the window.. Her gaze stuck at the moon.. It was a full moon night.. But yet felt so dark.. the moon was lighting up the path for the walkers.. But failed to light up her life.. She smiled weakly as now she didn't know what should she do?.. What should she think?.. She let her mind go blank.. No thoughts.. No worries.. No tears.. But yet her heart felt heavy.. Her eyes weren't teary.. Only reason as now they had gone dry, devoid of tears.. Destiny had finally made the last move of the cruel game.. But this time she felt nothing.. Maybe.. Maybe she was use to the harshness.. Maybe her heart was now too numb to feel anything.. Maybe! Is all that was left.. How ironic na.. "Some" thought that she used people as their toy or puppet.. But no one knew she herself was being used like a toy and now her fate was laughing back at her after breaking her so brutally.. How successfully and easily she was being shattered by her fate.. It not only defeated Sharon Rai Prakash the "Diva" but also the innocent, caring, loving Sharon or precisely Swayam's Siren Sharon.. At first she fought back.. Fought back with all her might.. Tired to challenge her fortune but at the end she is a human too.. She is human too..

Swayam, on the other hand was sitting on the terrace.. starring in thin air.. His face expressionless.. His body lifeless.. He was lost.. He had lost.. But there was one thing that not all would notice.. Only the one's who knew him.. Knew him well.. The hatred.. In his eyes.. This hatred was something different.. It was too intense.. Too intense to handle.. His knuckles looked white.. His fist was tightly curled.. What was it?.. Anger?.. Hatred?.. Guilt?.. What?.. And most importantly.. For whom?.. The calm, thoughtful and right person was nowhere visible today.. If a person kept looking at him they would actually have tears.. They would actually feel the pain.. They would actually feel the hatred.. It was so intense.. But.. There one this he felt too.. Broken.. because today he was the reason behind his love being so broken.. He doubted his own thought of calling Her his love too.. Because clearly today he thought he wasn't worth Her.. And what he did to her was not something he would have done if he loved her.. if he trusted her..

Trust.. Such small word na.. But is the only thread that keeps any relationship intact.. It is like the building block of any relation.. You Trust, You love.. Perfect!.. But you say you love but don't trust.. Nothing but a joke.. Understood trust once broken is difficult to mend.. But not impossible.. But neglecting one's efforts to mend it is just like putting on blinders.. But what makes you put on those blinders.. What forces you to never trust that person again.. One reason.. Or maybe a strong reason can be Hurt.. But still doesn't justify to be ignorant towards someone all the time.. And that is exactly where most of us end up committing mistakes in our life.. We never realise what is the right time or the right moment to remove those blinders..

Sharon took her mobile.. She let her finger tips wander on her screen.. They stayed there for a bit longer.. Her lips formed a weak smile but the love and intensity that her eyes showed were more than enough to portray what she actually felt.. Love.. Immense love for the person on her mobile screen.. But the smile vanished the sooner it came..

You don't love me damit!!'

Tumhe sirf mere attention ki aadat hai'

Obsessed woh nahi Tum ho'

For God sake Sharon! Accept the truth'

Agar pyaar karti toh yeh sab nahi karti'

Tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti, tumhe sirf lagta hai ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho'

I'm breaking up with you Sharon'

Mere 5 saal ke pyaar ko tumne 5 minute main jhoota sabit kar diya'

Apne destination tak pahuchne ke liye woh koi bhi raasta le sakti hai..Everything is fair in her dictionary'

You don't love me damit!'

You don't love me damit!'

A silent tear trickled down her eyes.. But she kept up a smile.. Her mind was yet left blank.. It was as if she didn't want to think about anything at the moment.. His words were still echoing in her mind.. Yet again.. Yet again his words had left a deep impression on her.. She closed her eyes and left a huge sigh.. As if trying to bare the pain she was feeling.. Or maybe to stop those tears that wanted to pour out.. She wiped the tear trail and got up from the windowsill..

Sharon (to herself): Off to bed Ms.Sharon Rai Prakash.. Kal se finally Musical ke rehearsals start ho rahe hai.. Ab koi hurdle.. Koi obstruction nahi.. Ab yeh affiliation humara aur phir hum sab ka sapna sach hoga.. Humari khud ki dance academy..

Aur Swayam? Aap dono ka kya?'

There came a voice from the door.. Sharon turned and saw Kriya standing there..

Sharon (smiling): Hey Kriya.. Chalo jaldi soo jaate hai.. Kal early morning rehearsals hai..

Kriya walked towards her and held her by her shoulder..

Kriya: Aapne mere question ka answer nahi diya..

Sharon (holding her arm): Jo bhi questions aur answers hai kal puch lena.. Ab chalo soo jate hai..

Sharon moved to her bed trying to avoid Kriya's gaze.. She knew if she looked into Kriya's eyes it would just want her to answer all her questions which would in return break the shield that she was trying to pull.. She moved to her bed and started straightening it though it was neatly laid..

Kriya (folding her arms): Bed ko aur kitna theek karogi Sharon? Mere questions ko avoid karna asaan hai par Swayam.. Usse kaise avoid karogi?

Sharon smiled and she turned to look at Kriya..

Sharon (smiling): Swayam ko avoid karna hi nahi hai..

Kriya (confused): Usne jo kuch bhi kiya uske baad bhi?

Sharon (walking past her): I don't blame Swayam for anything.. Situation hi aisi thi..

Kriya (cutting her): Come on Sharon! Aap Swayam ko defend kar rahe ho jab ki aapko bhi pata hai ki uski galti thi.. Usko aap par..

Sharon (holding her by her shoulder): Relax Kriya! Aur main Swayam ko defend nahi kar rahi.. Iss main sach main uski galti nahi thi.. (looking in to thin air) Haan pehle main hurt thi.. bahut hurt thi.. Par ab main jaanti hu mujhe kya karna hai..

Kriya smiled warmly at her.. Though she didn't know and didn't even intend to know what was Sharon actually planning to do but she also knew that whatever Sharon would do it would be good for her and Swayam.. She hugged Sharon telling her that come what may she would always stand by her.. Sharon was touched with her gesture and thanked her for being there.. She didn't know that a friendship that started off with a lie would end up being so strong.. Sharon knew this was a lifetime investment.. Both wished each other a Good night' and were off to bed.. Though Sharon was aware that sleep was not going to knock her door but she did need to give her body some rest so she laid down in bed..

Swayam on the other hand was yet on the terrace.. He recalled the past happenings that had left him to feel angry and disgusted about himself..

FLASHBACK

2 days back..

Sharon was pacing in the Rehearsal Hall.. Tensed and restless.. She just had to let Swayam know the truth because she had already faced the consequences in the past.. Not taking any more risk and putting the so called challenge that Ruhi gave her aside she thought of letting it out.. She checked the time for the nth time and looked at the door.. Not finding any trace of Swayam she again continued pacing..

After a few minutes Swayam entered and saw Sharon all tensed.. He came and stood in front of her..

Swayam: Hey! Kya hua? All good?

Sharon (sighing): Thank God Swayam tum aa gaye.. Mujhe tumse bahut important baat karni thi..

Swayam: Haan woh toh main samjh gaya.. Toh batao baat kya hai?

Sharon (nervous): Swayam woh actually.. Baat.. Ruhi ke bare main hai?

Swayam looked at her confused.. So he waited for her to continue..

Sharon: Woh actually ever since your accident Ruhi ka behaviour kaafi weird ho gaya tha.. Aur phir jab woh cold coffee wala incident hua tha tab maine waiter se pucha toh mujhe pata chala ke Ruhi ne purposely spoiled milk ki coffee banvayi thi.. Maine Ruhi ko confront kiya and ever since Ruhi ke intentions aur uski sachai ke bare main mujhe pata chalne laga.. Swayam Ruhi ko bipolar disorder hai..

Swayam (shocked): WHAT!! Tumhe yeh kisne bataya?

Sharon narrated how she found out about Ruhi's health.. Her real intentions.. Her challenge.. Her tac tics of staying close to Swayam.. In short everything that had happened till date.. Swayam was beyond shocked after listening to all of this.. He didn't know how to believe whatever Sharon said.. And to believe it or not? Sharon had just finished narrating all of it to him.. Swayam stood there looking at her with a shocked.. confused and doubtful expression.. Just then Ruhi came there followed by the gang as it was time for rehearsals now.. Swayam looked at Ruhi who came and stood next to him..

Ruhi (confused): Kya baat hai Swayam? Aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Then she looked at Sharon who gave her the famous Diva look and crossed her hand over her chest.. Ruhi got all the more confused and looked at Swayam for answers.. Swayam broke his silence..

Swayam: Tumhe Bipolar Disorder hai?

Ruhi got the shock of her life, she had gone numb listening to Swayam's question.. Then she looked at Sharon and gulped harder..

Sharon: Jhoot bolne ki sochna bhi mat!

Ruhi thought for the second and then with a determined look turned to Swayam..

Ruhi (innocently): Aapko lagta hai main itni badi cheez aapse chupaungi.. Swayam aapko sach main Sharon ki baaton pe vishwaas hai?

Swayam: Ruhi mere sawal ka jawaab do.. Haan ya na?

Ruhi: Nahi.. Hume toh pata bhi nahi hai ki yeh hota kya hai!

Sharon was stunned with the level of acting she just saw.. She should have guessed.. If a girl could pull off such a brilliant act all these days how would she fall prey to something so easily.. Sharon started fuming as she saw the wicked smile on her face.. Swayam turned to look at Sharon with a straight face.. Sharon saw the doubt in his eyes and that look told her she will have to try harder to make him realise that she was saying the truth..

Sharon: Swayam believe me! Yeh sab iska natak hai.. Yeh itne dino se tumhe aur sab ko bewakoof bana rahi hai aur..

Swayam (a bit irritated): Par Sharon woh aisa kuch kyun karegi?

Sharon: Because usse lagta hai ke woh tumse pyaar karti hai!

Swayam (even more shocked): What!!!

Gang (shocked): WHAT!!

Sharon: Haan but yeh apni iss obsession ko pyaar samjh baithi hai.. Swayam trust me.. Maine doctor se bhi baat ki hai aur unhone hi mujhe bataya ki Ruhi ko yeh problem bahut pehle se hai..

Ruhi (irritated): Sharon aap chahti kya ho? Humne aapka kya bigada hai?

Sharon (angry): Enough Ruhi!! Ab toh apna yeh natak band karo! Tumhe bhi pata hai ke main jo bol rahi hu woh sach hai.. So just accept it..

Ruhi: Par jab yeh sach hai hi nahi toh kyun accept karu?

Sharon: Oh toh ab yeh sach nahi hai! Toh mujhe kisne challenge kiya tha Swayam ko leke? Kisne kahan tha ke main Swayam ke pyaar ke layak nahi hoon? Kisne mujhe yeh kahan tha ke Swayam ko kaise bhi jeet kar rahogi? Batao Ruhi!

Ruhi: Aap kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha! Aur main aapko challenge kyun karungi?! Swayam humre dost hai.. Best friend.. Unko leke aise challenge kyun karungi?!

Sharon (sarcastically): Yeah right! (shouting) Just accept it Ruhi tum Swayam se obsessed ho iss liye mujhe aur Swayam ko itne dino se door karne ki koshish kar rahi ho!

Swayam (shouting): ENOUGH SHARON!!

Sharon and the gang was stunned with his tone.. It was so harsh.. Sharon too looked at him flabbergasted..

Sharon (under her breath): Swayam..

Swayam: Ho kya gaya hai tumhe?! Bina soche samjhe kuch bhi bole jaa rahi ho! Out of all the people Ruhi.. Ruhi pe ungli utha rahi ho with some baseless thing that Ruhi ko koi mental problem hai?? I can't believe it ki tum kisko demean karne ke liye iss hadd tak jaa sakti ho!

Sharon (stunned): Swayam..

Swayam: Ohh! Now I get it! Ab samjh aa raha hai tumne yeh sab kyun kiya.. (clapping) Waoh! Ms. Sharon Rai Prakash iss baar toh tumne saari hadd hi paar kar di.. I mean pehle mere paas aane ke liye Kriya se jhooti friendship and ab yeh sab! Seriously Sharon!! Aur tum kehti ho ki Ruhi obsessed hai?! Obsessed woh nahi tum ho! Tumhe mere attention ki itni aadat ho gayi hai that ab tumne Ruhi ko mentally unstable bhi kar diya.. For God sake Sharon! Accept it!!! You don't love me damit!!! Leave me Alone!! Nahi chahta main tumhara saath.. Tum aur Main kabhi Hum nahi ho sakte.. Its high time you accept the truth! Aur rahi baat tumhare iss mindblowing research and allegations ki then let me tell you Sharon (moving towards her) This was disgusting..

Sharon stood numb all this while.. Was this really him?? Was this really Swayam?? The Swayam who loved her?? The Swayam who understood her unsaid words.. her unsaid feeling?? Don't think so.. This wasn't Her Swayam.. This was surely not him.. This was someone else..

Sharon kept looking at him with brimmed eyes.. She didn't want them to flow.. She wanted to hear all that he wanted to say.. Her heart had already stopped beating.. As he spat out the last few words all she could feel is disgust.. venom.. hatred.. anger in his voice.. She flinched at the intensity of these feelings that were reflected in his eyes.. But she kept looking in them hoping that she might find traces of love somewhere atleast as there was a time when these same pair of eyes emoted nothing but endless love for her..

Rey was way too shocked with Swayam's sudden outburst and so was the gang.. The gang had never seen such a side of Swayam or Sharon ever.. It was another shock for them to know about Ruhi.. As far as they all knew Sharon, she wouldn't point out fingers at someone without any reason.. Ruhi had a wicked smile that she was trying to hide from all.. She didn't know she wouldn't have to work too hard to kick Sharon out of Swayam's life.. In fact Sharon had done it all by herself by letting out Ruhi's medical problem.. She felt more "love" as she termed it, towards Swayam as he was standing by her instead of Sharon.. Rey thought of stepping in as even he was known to Ruhi's problem..

Rey: Swayam tu..

Sharon put up her palm to stop Rey yet looking into Swayam's eyes..

Sharon: Nahi Rey.. Don't! (smiling through her tears at Swayam) I just hope you never regret what you said..

Sharon walked out of there.. Swayam kept looking at her retreating figure with the same intense emotions but this time he even had confusion added to them.. Though he knew he had hurt Sharon and had broken things way beyond repair but Sharon's eyes confused him.. He saw hurt.. pain.. shock.. love.. But also confidence.. And that confidence confused him.. Keeping aside his confusion the intensity of his words started seeping into his mind and he just realised what he had done.. He had broken Sharon.. He had insult her.. He had insulted her feelings.. He had shattered her into minute pieces.. But right now Anger overpowered all of it.. Anger he felt for Sharon.. For her actions.. For her "baseless accusations"..

Next day..

Swayam was sitting in the canteen recalling yesterday's event.. That was what he did ever since the spat.. The night too hadn't been kind to him.. All he said to Sharon.. All Sharon said to him.. All she said to Ruhi.. All of it was coming back to him again and again.. He covered his face with his palm and ran them through his hair.. He didn't know what was happening.. He didn't know why was it happening?.. He didn't know what to do..

A peon walked in and told him that VP sir was calling him to his cabin immediately.. He took his bag and made his way..

Swayam (standing at the door): May I come in, Sir?

VP: Swayam! Come in.. Come in..

Swayam: Sir aapne mujhe bulaya?

VP: Haan woh actually baat personal thi.. I just wanted to say Thank you'

Swayam (confused): Thank You? Par kyun, Sir?

VP: Thank You Ruhi ka itna dhyaan rakhne ke liye.. Woh yahan itni comfortable ho gayi hai and she is quite happy with everything..

Swayam (smiling): Sir iss main Thanks bolne ki kya baat hai..

VP: Mujhe pata tha ke agar main tumhe koi responsibility du toh tum poori tarah se usse justice karoge.. Iss liye maine Ruhi ki zimedaari tumhe di.. And I'm so happy that yahan aane ke baad Ruhi ki health pehle se kaafi better ho gayi hai..

Swayam (confused): Ruhi ki health?

VP: Actually Swayam maine tumhe pehle bataya nahi mainly because main nahi chahta tha ki college main koi Ruhi ko mentally disable student ki nazron se dekhe.. Woh Ruhi ko Severe Bipolar Disorder hai.. Iss liye woh Mumbai aayi hai uske treatment ke liye..

Swayam went numb as soon as he heard that.. he wasn't shocked.. he wasn't angry.. nothing.. He wasn't moving.. He just kept looking at VP with a blank face.. VP sir was yet talking to him but Swayam couldn't hear anything.. It was as if the numbness had blocked all his sensory organs.. VP sir shook him as he wasn't getting any response from Swayam..

Swayam: Excuse me Sir! Mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya..

VP let him go.. Swayam started walking aimlessly in the corridor recollecting VP sir's words..

Ruhi ko Bipolar Disorder hai'

Swayam trust me!'

Yeh apne obsession kop yaar samjh baithi hai'

I hope you never regret what you said'

FLASHBACK ENDS

At night..

Swayam ( in mind): How could I!!! How freaking could I!!! Maine Sharon ko bina soche samjhe itna kuch keh diya! What was wrong with me.. Sharon ko Hurt karne ka socha bhi kaise.. I doubted her intentions.. I doubted her feeling.. And I say I love her.. What sort of a person would do that?? Sharon shayad mujhe kabhi forgive nahi karegi.. Aur agar forgive kar bhi diya toh main aapne aapn ko kabhi forgive kar paunga?? Sharon kaisi hogi? Mujhe baat karni hogi.. I need to see her.. I need to talk to her.. NOW!

Swayam without thinking twice left from there .. He took his cycle and at lightning speed rushed to Sharon's house.. Throughout the ride the only thing in his mind was Sharon'.. He reached his destination and threw his cycle in one corner.. He stood outside the door and called her on her number..

Sharon was still lost in her thoughts when she heard her phone buzz.. She looked at the screen and was surprised.. After that incident it was the first time Swayam had tried to communicate with her.. She picked up her phone..

Sharon (hesitantly): Hello? Swayam??

Swayam (pleading): Kya tum bahar aa sakti ho? Please..

Sharon (shocked): Abhi??

Swayam: Main.. Main bahar hoon..

Sharon: I'm coming..

Sharon immediately got out of bed.. Though she was surprised that Swayam was standing outside her door.. But above all she was worried.. There was something in his voice that told her he wasn't alright.. And it made her even more curious to know why was he there at this hour of the night.. Swayam stood by the road and waited for the door to open.. Out came a confused kum shocked kum worried Sharon.. That's it? Just confusion and shock? No anger? No hatred? Nothing? And what was she so worried about?

Both stood in front of one another trying to know what the other person was thinking.. Sharon was fiddling with her fingers and looking everywhere else but him.. She didn't want to look at those eyes.. It will break her to see hurt or regret in those eyes as she had now gauged what was he there for..

Swayam on the other hand was taking glances of her but couldn't meet her eyes as he was way to ashamed with his actions.. but he was here to apologise.. and if there was even 1% chance to mend up things then he would..

Swayam (softly): Sharon.. woh..

Sharon (nervous): H.aa.n.. Bolo.. Swa..yam.. k.y.a baat hai?

Swayam (looking down): I.. woh.. mujhe.. tumse.. woh.. (closes his eyes and takes a deep breath) Sorry!!

Sharon looked at him for a moment.. A lone tear escaped her eyes with the amount of guilt and regret she saw on his face..

Sharon (softly): Swayam.. its.. o.k..

Swayam looked at her and saw the tear trail.. he moved forward and caught her hand..

Swayam (guilty): No Sharon.. I know maine jo tumse kahan.. Jaise tumhare saath behave kiya.. It's not ok.. Maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya.. Tumhari insult ki.. that is not ok.. Tumhe aaj tak for granted leta raha.. tumhe ignore kiya.. that is not ok.. Maine tumhare pyaar ki insult kar di.. THAT IS NOT OK!! Maine tumhe chodke Ruhi ko trust kiya.. That was not ok.. Maine tumhre pyaar ko obsession kahan.. That.. That was not ok!.. Maine jo kuch bhi kiya.. Uske liye Sorry is Not Ok.. But I'm Sorry Sharon.. Main shayad kabhi tumhe samjh hi nahi paaya.. Maine harr situation main tumhe blame kiya.. Harr cheez ko khud ke nazron se dekh.. Kabhi tumhare point of view ko consider nahi kiya.. And I'm sorry for all of that.. I'm really very sorry..

Swayam had just let his heart do the talking and the result, all of it that he had suppressed was out.. Sharon kept her other hand on her his hand and gave it a slight squeeze..

Sharon (calmly between her tears): Hey main tumse ghussa nahi hu.. Hurt thi but I understood your situation aur yeh sab tumhare point of view se samjhne ki koshish ki.. And things sort ho gaye.. It's really ok Swayam.. Trust me..

Swayam: It's ok for you but..

Sharon (cutting him): You don't have to feel guilty..

Swayam: But maine jo kahan..

Sharon (cutting him): Ghusse main kahan.. And how many times have I said so many thing in the spur of the moment.. Tabhi tumhe bhi bahut kiya..

Swayam: But Sharon..

Sharon (stopping him): Nahi Swayam.. Don't.. Main keh rahi hu na.. It's ok..

Swayam looked at her with hopeful eyes.. She passed him an assuring smile and he smiled back though weakly.. Sharon removed her hand from above his when he held on to it.. She looked at him confused..

Swayam: Sharon.. Can we.. I mean kya tum aur main.. Humare relationship ko ek aur chance de sakte hai? I know maine kahan that we are not meant to be but tab maine tumhe misunderstand kiya tha.. Aur ab jab sab theek ho gaya hai toh..

Sharon (cutting him): Nahi Swayam..

Swayam was taken aback by her answer.. He thought she would agree as since their break up she was the one who was asking him for a chance.. And now when he was ready.. She says no??

Swayam: Sharon?? Tum..

Sharon: Nahi main ghussa nahi hu.. Aur bahut soch samjh ke bol rahi hu.. Swayam harr relationship main ek bahut important thread hota hai jo do logon ko bind karta hai.. Trust! Aur yeh trust hum dono ke beech missing hai.. (turning around) Aur yeh sirf kal ke incident ki baat nahi hai.. Jab hum relationship main the tab bhi humare beech differences aayi aur bahut misunderstanding bhi.. kyun Swayam? Kyunki tumhe mujh pe ya mere pyaar pe yakeen nahi tha.. Aur main nahi chahti thi ki phirse humare beech aisa kuch ho jis wajahse hume phirse alag hona pade..

Swayam was standing there.. completely numb to react to whatever Sharon was saying..

Sharon (looking at him): I'm not saying ki hum kabhi saath nahi ho sakte.. Maybe or maybe not.. Main sirf hum dono ko time dena chahti hu.. Time for you to trust me the same way I trust you.. and your love.. Main tumhara trust jeetna chahti hoon.. And if are meant to be.. toh hume saath hone se koi nahi rok sakta.. Hai na?!

Swayam had gone pale when he first heard her answer but as she went on he realised that she was right.. Life had put them across so many hurdles that misunderstandings only grew but never got solved.. And somewhere she was right about him not completely trusting her.. or her Love.. He thought over whatever she said and had a sweet yet pained smile plastered on his face.. Pained because he had doubted the Love of a person who's Love was pure.. immense.. and endless.. If given Them a chance to fall in love all over again was the solution the he would happily agree to it.. He would want Them to start afresh and live those feelings all over again..

Swayam: Your wish is my command..

Sharon's smile grew wider as she heard him.. She immediately wiped her tears and stretched her hand forwards..

Sharon (grinning): A New Beginning of a A new chapter.. So Friends??

Swayam: Friends?? Seriously?? Itna sab hone ke baad main tumhara friend toh nahi bann sakta..

Swayam turned to the side while folding his hands over his chest and was looking at Sharon from the corner of his eyes..

Sharon: Kyun?? Kyun nahi bann sakte??

Swayam (adamant): Hum ek dusre ke liye jo feel karte hai uske baad hum friends kaise bann sakte hai??!

Sharon : Relationship se pehle bhi toh hum friends the!

Swayam (looking at her): Kisne kahan? Maine kabhi tumhe friend ke nazar se dekha hi nahi!

Sharon (turning to the side with her hands folded): That's not my problem..

Swayam: Humare beech Friendship toh nahi ho sakti..

Sharon (irritated): FINE!

Swayam (mocking): FINE!!

Sharon: Yeah FINE!!

Both stood looking to the other side and their hands crossed.. They waited for the other to speak.. To see what the other person was doing they slowly turned to look and the next thing they burst out laughing.. They laughed.. laughed together.. on their childish behaviour.. but this was them.. Their true selves.. Both shook hands and mumbled Friends'.. Both knew this wasn't friendship for sure.. Sharon was still giggling and Swayam stopped looked at that angelic face lit up once again.. He had surely missed that 1000 volt smile on her face.. And somewhere he knew he was the reason behind it missing.. Sharon saw him lost looking at her and snapped her fingers in front of his face..

Sharon: Hello Mr.Lost.. Kahan kho gaye??

Swayam just nodded negatively with a smile.. after a few moments of silence he spoke..

Swayam (lovingly): Sharon..

Sharon: Hmm?

Swayam: I'll wait..

Sharon kept looking at him as she knew what was he saying but waited for him to speak..

Swayam: I'll wait.. For US to happen..

Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola People,


I don't know what have I written or how have I written.. A thought just came to my mind and I penned it down as it proceeded..

Please don't kill me for not giving a Patch-up

The reason for not giving it was because it would look quite abrupt here that Swayam and Sharon just forget everything are together..

A Patch-up at the end didn't convince me so I avoided writing it..

I tried my best to give it a happy ending..

Hope you'll liked it 😃

Please do leave in your valuable comments and hit the like button

P.S I will be updating all my stories this week 😉

Love

Tanvish

Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ya, me first! Victory Dance⭐️!!!
I loved it soo much di!
You are the Best :D!
Accha hai Patchup nahi dia, I like it this way!
Keep Writing and Updating More and More!
Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Beautiful!! Your OS on current situations and well thought and worthwhile!! I lyked this one!!
Keep writing!!

Thnx fr the pm!!
Edited by acceptng_lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res :)
-- Edited

Hey :)
Firstly thanks for the pm :D
This OS was absolutely amazing!
I loved how you showed Sharon!
And of course the ending was a pure bliss 😳😃
You've done a brilliant job I feel showing everything
It was definitely worth the read!
Keep writing ^_^

Tc, Hinal
Edited by basket_101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS
Beautifully penned
Ek hee thing kahungi Ameeta ko tujhse kuch seekhna chahiye
Itne saare tarike bata chuki hai tu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tanvish what an OS re
Sensible... Amazing and out of all it is Swaronish...

The level of maturity OMG im in tears pehli baar mujhe ek non patchup OS se itni khushi mil rahi hai...

And you have exactly put everything in place re... i would never want Sharon to be ok with everything after such an insult...

Thanks for writing this i cant explain how much i loved it,. maar daala re 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os!!!
hope actually vp sir tells swayam the truth
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
res
unres
do i need to say ki yeh kitna amazingg tha
i hav to say tat the bg score is perfectly complementing this os
not many ppl know ki the hardest thing is
to write are the scenes that require us to dig
for an emotional truth making ur reader
empathize with the main character.
n creating a bond between the reader n the character
which raises a passage to an emotional pitch
by giving attention to small specific details
its definitely a pure bliss to read ur works
coming to ur os
yes tis was definitely one of those emotional ones
which i love the most
i felt sad to see swayam react like tis
whn sharon was pointing the truth out to swayam
in fact i felt swayam's world literally crashing down
whn he heard the truth from vp sir's mouth .
but the best portion wud be the
emotional confrontation between swaron
i liked the ending though
whr yu did not end up wit a patch up scene
it was more practical becoz thr are
sum wounds which need to heel first
all in all a very well formed pleasing read
do write more 😛


Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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