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Divya

@.Divyaa.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Lovely. ❤️

Iwish something like this is shown in the show too.😳

Do write more.😃

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shalu79

@shalu79

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome. Pls continue. very well written. Would loke to see such understanding between our lead. Eventually it will happen. Till that time writers like u fulfill our fantasies. I take this oppurtunity to thank u n also other FF writers like Dreamweaver, Mallika, EkPaheli, Naddiya26 n others. Sorry if i missed anybodies name or misspelled it. But u all r fantastic story teller. Just love to read ur stories. Thank u once again.

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eternalasha

@eternalasha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow serendipity,

That was well written.

I am really glad you showed Raman fight thru his fear and reach out to Ishita. I especially like that when she was also afraid and wanted to escape, he recognized this and just had her listen.

Also finally they talked about Subbu, her pain re not conceiving. It was lovely to see the connection happening little by little. Their conversation was real. Oh the best part, Raman admitting he was afraid

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

loved it!!

I could imagine the scene very nicely. Would love to see anything similar happen in the show 😆

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

omggg U WROTE THIS RB??????????😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲...

n i'm readin it now only???y u din evn tell me...doosre cheezon ke liye toh pm karti ho...toh y din u pm me this one?😡😡😡😡...

but thank god i didn miss it..!!

i so want to be katti with u for not sayin abt this to me...bt seein wht u wrote,my narazgi with u is gone with the wind..😆..!!

Woman THIS ws one of the BEST OS i hv evr read on IshRa..!! And mind u i'm NOT exaggerating..!! i'm a critic reader..!! And i'm sayin this is truly HEART TOUCHING and indeed indeed one of the best OS i hv evr read on IshRa...👏👏👏👏👏...!!

how much hell badly i'm cravin to see such scenes in show yaar..!! lik Nina said show waale IshRa NEED to hv such scene..then only they can start a fresh TOGETHER for REAL..!!

nywz i loved loved evry bit of this OS...gosh u r such multi talented...!!

avis,siggies,nw stories n i remmeber u sayin u will go back to "VM"s..!! now i'm evn more lookin forward to see VM by u..!!

btw next time koi bhi IshRa story write karu toh DivAn ke naam par mujhe pm karna...😆😉

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

im going to reply to EVERYONE this time 😃

and not be a bad girl like last time :P

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PreciousPri

@PreciousPri

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I can only say beautiful Reeno!! 👏👏

This OS has moved me ...believe me

Very thoughtfully written and loved how both despite not wanting to still managed to share their fears and pain

Finally Subbu's matter comes out and even RKB admits his fear

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Reeno babe, edited my comment on Page 3. & By the way, you totally escaped from all the 😡 ONLY because I loved your OS and of course love you more my fellow DIVANi.😉

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

omg shivu v REACTED SAME..🤣... pehle HELL GUSSA at this chokri for NOT PM-ing any one of us..

bt aftr readin her OS,all the gussa gone with wind seein the beauty with which she wrote..!!

Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omg shivu v REACTED SAME..🤣... pehle HELL GUSSA at this chokri for NOT PM-ing any one of us..

bt aftr readin her OS,all the gussa gone with wind seein the beauty with which she wrote..!!

hi5 Nikki. & Tell me about it yaar. I was like WTH... How can this girl not let us know about this? Thank god, she's not within reach if not would have definitely gotten left right centre from us. 😆 BUT YES YES... it was an Emotionally Lovely OS.👏 Which made up for all the anger.

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