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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 2

Pinky: Geet, kya yaar? Hum bal bal bach gaye

Geet is lost in her thoughts...

She is still thinking about the house...

She is disappointed that she couldn't see the full place...

Geet is not satisfied...beech mein ye Dhust Danav kahan se tapak gaya?

She just needed a few more minutes, why the hell did he return home so early?

It's Sunday, and he is at home?

Maybe his plans for the day were cancelled? Else who would stay at home on Sundays, maybe next week she would be lucky enough to visit in peace, no more inruders, Geet has happily forgot that she is the intruder here...

Poor girl! How would she know that Maan has no friends to hang out with on Sundays and if not for any business meets he would be all alone at KM...you should say that MSK is the ghost haunting this place right now...but Geet Handa is not agraid of any bhooth or for tht matter any Dhust Danav...haina?

And is she has wishes to visit KM then no one could stop her...not even Mr.DD Khurana...

Geet doesn't know his name yet...

She wants to see that room...

She returns to KM that following Sunday...

This time the security will not take any risk...

Even Nakul is not ready to let her in...

Geet waits out and she pelts some stones on the windows...

One glass breaks and the security goes in to check...

Geet uses this opurtunity and enters in...

She finds the car missing and is confident that Maan is not inside...

Maan has gone to meet a client...

She gets in and climbs up to reach that room...

Actually it's Maan's room...

She finds it very dull and boring...

Geet is disappomted...

Itne achche kamre ko kaise sajna chahiye?

This man has got a very bad taste...

That's why he is all alone...who will like such a boring personality...

Iski zindagi kaise berangi hai? no color, no fun? Haina?

Geet neeche jaathi...

She explores every looke and corner of the house...

The other places are fine...

She goes to the backyard and strolls in the garden...

Its looks barren except for the few cactus and wild plants...

Ye kaise bageeza hai? ek bhi phool nahi, unkke mehak nahi?

Geet looks at the time...

It's been more than an hour since she came in...

She must return now...

She stealthily walks out of the garden and enters the hall...

She slowly looks at the kitchen...

Nakul and the others are busy preparing lunch...

Ek aadmi ke liye itne naukar? Aur ghar ka haal dekho?

Ye kya karenge? Jab malik nahi chahatha toh ye bhi kuch nahi kar sakthe, haina?

Khaash yahan koi aurat hothi, kehthe haina? Aurat ghar ki Lakshmi hai, wahi ek makaan ko ghar banathi, aur iss MSK ko dekho? Ek sudar ghar ko hi makhaan banadhi, nahi, issko bhooth banglow hi banadhi, kudh bhooth banke...isse toh hummare bhoothnath kitne smart hai, Big B, unko dekhke bache nahi darthe, par issko zaroor bhoothland mein entry miljayega, ye toh bachon ko kya, mere jaise bechari 18 saal ki bolibali ladhki ko bhi darartha hai, Monster Maan...ye bhi achcha hai, haina babaji?

Geet aaise sochkke peeche jaathi...

She hits something and falls...

It's Maan standing there...Monsteeerrr...

Geet almost faints...she turns pale and is so scared...

He catches her...She looks at him...Maan is shocked...

Ye toh wahi ladhkki hai...Phir se mein sapna dekh raha hoon kya?

Ye toh sapnon ki Rajkumari hi lagthi...

She is so sweet...Maan ki dimag mein ganti bhajthi...

Get out of your dream Mr.Khurana, don't be a fool, this is not a dream, this is real, and you are falling in love, falling for a stupid girl...What? Maan, tummare bahon mein ek ladhki?

Maan pushes her away...

Geet is so scared...

Maan: tum yahan chori karne aayi haina?

Geet feels insulted...how dare he calls me a thief? It has hurt her pride, she had to make it clear that she is not a thief...if she runs away, then his statement would become true...nahi...

Geet: what? I'm not a thief

Maan: phir yahan kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: mein...yahan, nai aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan stares her...: what?

Geet: nahi, woh...mein

Maan: itna kyun darthi ho? zaroor tum chori karne hi aaye ho, Nakul, security ko bhulao

Geet somehow escapes from him that day...

She was so scared that she even saw his angry face in her nightmares...

She would never enter KM when that MSK is there, don't mistake, it's not Maan Singh Khurana, it's Monster Singh Khurana...

Achcha naam haina? Suits him better, thinks Geet Handa!

She keeps thinking how to escape that MSK and fulfill her wishes...

She can't run away from her dreams, her project and her career, it's her life, she can't let some MSK to deter her goals, she had to find some solution, how to bypass that Monster...

Then she has to know his schedule first and plan her visit, so that there won't be any disturbance and she can finish her job peacefully...

Then she remembers Nakul, he is very nice, else who would serve that MSK, even for double pay, and Nakul could help her...

She then goes to KM very early,that following Sunday and waits for Nakul at the corner of the street, Nakul comes out to get milk and is shocked to see Geet back, at this time...she is insane, and is going to get him into trouble for sure...

Nakul tries to escape pretending that he had not seen her, but Geet wouldn't spare him...

Geet: Nakul bhaiya

Nakul is touched...he stops and has been trapped...

Nakul: tum? Itne subhe subhe?

Geet: woh, mein aap ka hi intrezaar kar rahi thi

Nakul: kya? mujhe bahut sare kaam hai

Geet: ek minute, pls pls, bas ek bar meri madat karo, phir mein yahan kabhi nahi aaoongi, ye mere liye bahut important hai, aur ye mere colloge ke project ke liye hi hai, peechle hafte jo meinne photographa liye na, aur unko istemal karkke meinne project shuruvaad karli, sab ko ye bahut pasand aaya aur mere master bhi kehthe ki unko bhi ye bahut hi achcha idea lagtha, mujhe bas 2 gante andar jaana ki permission chahiye

Nakul: tum Maan sir se baat kyun nahi karthi?

Geet: nahi nahi, mujhe uss MSK se bahut dar lagtha hai, aapko bhi lagega haina?

eakul: haan

Geet: dekha, uss monster ne sabke jeena muskil kardhi

Nakul is shocked...monster? Maan sir ko monster kehthi hai?

For a moment Nakul thought very apt...then Maan's angry face comes to his mind...

He immediately apologises even in his imagination...

Nakul: nahi nahi, mein aaise nahi sochtha, tum chale jao

Nakul runs and Geet chases him...

Geet: bhaiya bhaiya

Nakul had to help her...he tells her that Maan is going out at 10 am and return only n the evening...

Geet is happy, she tells him that she will come at 10.30 am...

Then she rerurns at 10.30 and she finds Maan's car missing...

Then she bribes the security and gets in...

Nakul asks her to finish her job ASAP and leave before getting him into trouble...

She thanks him and assures that she will leave before Monster's return...

But unfortunately Maan returns as he had forgot some file...

He comes to take it back from his room...

And Geet is exploring his room...

How could she bring it back to life, make it colorful and add some fun to that place and everything...

Maan is surprised to see her back, that too in his room...

Geet is unaware and she is busy in her job...

Maan is mersmerised by her innocent beauty, he keeps staring her for a while...

His heart yearns for a minute that she shpuld be some pari form dreamland and how he wishes to see her often, mabe in his dreams...there is no harm, it's only a dream...haina? Maan starts his self talk...ek ladhki ko dekhkke Maan ka kya haal ho gaya?

He is puzzled how could she enter his room, and this is the third time he is seeing her at KM...

She must be living here only, in this very house, as a soul? for Maan is seeing her often, and he is sure it's not his imagination...last time he had caught her and he clould still feel her soft silky skin...

She is real, and she is here, infront of him, but what is she doing in his room?

Maan keeps dreaming , but he is not someone to buy ghost stories...maybe she is trying to fool him...she is here and this time she won't escape...

Part3
Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2
awesome dear...
oh so Geet is doing this for her project...
and Maan thinks hes hallucinating...
Nakul is funny...
interesting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet project keiye yeh sab karrahi hai aur maan usko ghost samjhraha hai😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FF aur GF ke chakkar me mera post hi kho gaya tha
nice updates...
maan to geet ko bhoot samjhne laga 😆
aur ye geet kya kya kar rahi hai project ke liye!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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abb toh geet gayi kam se...sher k samne pad gayi...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part -3

Maan gets back to his senses...this girl is really turning him mad...

And also awakening his feelings that he had put to sleep once for all, but this girl comes back to remind him that he is a human afterall and he has feelings too...

Maan has been running away from love, affection , happiness , sorrow, smiles, tears , he totallt hates beibg human, for his philosophy has always been expectations lead to disappointment, emotions are the free entry pass to pain, which Maan has already experienced and is not ready to enter that gate again, now he has succeeded in freeing himself from emotions thus keeping away from pain, that's what he thinks but still human nature is to love that pain though you know it's worthless, no pain no gain, Maanji...

But this girl has gatecrashed, she is an uninvited guest, bin bhulayae mehmaan, and life is full of surprises whether you like them or hate them, whether you expect them or not God always keeps the options open...no matter how hard you try you can't change your fate, your destiny...

Maan thinks..."Ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi"

Maan: tum?

Maan shouts angrily...

Geet turns back and panics...

ye monster itne jaldhi lautke aagaya?

Geet: Monster Singh Khurana. Aap?

Maan: what?

Geet: Maan Singh Khuranaji, aap yahan?

Maan: ye mera room hai? aur tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh mein, byeee

Geet tires to leave...

Maan catches hold of her hand...

Geet is scared to look back...

Maan keeps staring Geet and her nautanki...

He is amused that she is so sensitive and is a real drama queen...

But why is she coming here again and again? What is she up to?

Is she looking for something to steal...

Poor girl! She has come to the wrong address, Maan doesn't have a heart that she could steal...

Maan: Nakul, Chandu, kahan mar gaye ho sab? Security, jaldhi police ko bhuao

Geet: police?

Geet pulls off her hand and starts running...

Maan chases her and the servants are shocked...

Maan sir kissi ladhki ke saath chor police khel rahe hai?

They don't know whether to help him catch her or just watch him play?

Maan gets angry seeing them stand there like statues and watching them...

Maan: yahan kya picture chal raha hai? kadhe kadhe kya dekthe ho? pakdo usse

Everyone runs in a different direction and it's chaos at KM...

Maan is frustrated...how could a stupid girl challenge MSK?

Maan waits at a corner and keeps watching them...

Geet runs here and there as if she is blind...

She is about to hit Maan who is standing in the middle like a statue, when Maan catches her...

She looses her balance and Maan pulls her and ctaches her by her waist...

Geet is startled by the touch and she holds him tight to avoid faling ...

Maan could also feel the difference that her touch could induce within him...

Maneet freeze and so do the servants...

Maan then realizes his mistake and steps back...

Geet is still caught in a trance and she keeps staring Maan...

Maan couldn't face her eyes, and he takes his usual love shield, his anger...

Maan: tum andar kaise aayi?

Geet: mein , mein

Geet stumbles, she is stammering

Nakul is shivering...this is what he was afraid of...

He prays to god Geet doesn't utter his name infront of Monster Singh Khurana, nahi Maan sir

Maan: tum bar bar mere ghar mein kya kar rahi ho? aur tumme andar kissne aane diya?

Maan knows she can't get in easily evreytime without the other's help...

Geet keeps looking around for help and finds Nakul...trying to hide himself behind Chandu...

Geet's eyes widen seeing him and she screams...

Geet: Nakul bhaiya

Nakul ko heart attack ho jayega...Geet looks at Nakul and winks...

Nakul is shocked...his worst nightmare has come true...

Maan stares Nakul...

Geet: aap toh mujhe jaanthe haina?

Nakul stands there speechless...

Maan: Nakul, ye kya bol rahi hai?

Maan chilatha...

Nakul: Maan sir, ye...ye...

Nakul wonders what to say to escape from Maan...he curses Geet for using him as a shield...

Geet feels sorry for Nakul, she shouldn't have mentioned his name...he only helped her ...

Geet : woh , meinne Nakul bhaya se permission liya tha

Maan: kya?

Maan turns towards Geet and his anger doubles...

Geet: aapse milne ki?

Maan is shocked...she came to meet me?

This is even more dangerous...Maan, just get her out of the house immediately...

This is it...Maan erupts...like a volcano...

He catches hold of her hand and drags her out...

Geet: hare, chodo mujhe, mere haath, koi toh bachao, sab ke sab aaise kya dekhhte ho, mein aapko nahi chodoongi, mein bhi police ke paas jaaongi, Nakul bhaiya, aap hi eyewitness ho

Nakul hopes to run away immediately never to return...

Maan couldn't hear her bak bak anymore...

He closes her mouth..."chup...bilkul chup..."

He stares and Geet stares back...maneet eyelock...

Nakul: Maan sir

Nakul feels pity for Geet, he is the one who asked her to come now, how would he know that Maan will return immediately...he knows he has lost his job, so he thinks he should atleast help Geet...

Maan: tum log kya kar rahe ho? mere ghar mein mere hothe hue bhi ye achanak andar kaise aayi? Security

Maan shouts...

He comes running...

Maan: tum kya bahar beitkke sorahe ho?

Security: nahi sab

Maan: phir ye kaise andar aayi?

Geet: usski koi galthi nahi hai, ye meri galthi hi hai, mujhe laga ki aap mujhe andar aane nahi dethe toh kya hoga? Issiliye mein chup chupkke andar aagayi

Maan: tumme patha hai ki tumne trespassing kiya hai

Geet: what? Mein yahan koi chori karne nahi aayi hoon, aapko mujhpe barosa nahi hai kya? aap chahe toh mujhe check kar sakthe ho

Maan: what?

Geet removes her over coat and shows that it's empty...

She tries to show that her pant pockets are also empty...

Maan is shocked...for a while he is awestruck and keeps staring her...but then he realizes that this is getting out of his control...he had to do something else he would definitely become mad...

He stops her...

Maan: usski koi zarooart nahi hai, isse pehenlo

Geet wears her coat...and guess what? Maan is much more relieved...no more torture...

Geet: mein bas aapse hi milne aayi thi, haina Nakul bahiya?

Nakul thinks...ye bar bar mera naam kyun lethi? Mujhe aaj marwayegi kya?

Maan: mein ghar pe kissi ko nahi miltha,mujhse milna hai toh KC aao? Who bhi appointment lekhe, waise ab koi vacancy nahi hai

Geet: woh nahi, mujhe office mein koi kaam nahi hai

Maan is getting tensed...office mein nahi toh ghar pe kya kaam?

Maan: mein ghar pe kissi ladhki ko kaam pe nahi rakh saktha

Geet: kya? mein kya kaam wali bhai dikhthi hoon?

She is not here for a job, then why is she here? And what does she want from me? Maan gets nervous...

Maan: tum chori karne nahi aayi, kaam ke liye nahi aayi, phir tum kyun aayi ho?

Maan is scared ...looking at her age and her dreamy eyes Maan is confused...

Geet keeps looking at him, Maan doesn't want to look at her...

Geet opens her bag and searches something...

Maan is puzzled...what's it? Is she really mad? Is she looking for some weapon to attack? Like mirchi, pepper spray ...

Maan gets ready to defend himself...

Geet takes out her ID card...she gives it to him...

Maan looks at it carelessly...immediately he puts it on the table and it falls on the mat...

Geet gets very angry at this attitude...what's he thinking of himself?

She keeps staring at him...watching his moves carefully...

Maan thinks that she has come for donations...

Maan takes out his cheque book...

Geet is confused...she expects some respect...hana babaji?

She decides to tell her herself that she is not here for money or any other help...

Geet: mein ek college student hoon

Maan: meinne dekhliya, ab bathao, kitne rupiye chahiye

Geet gets angry...what the hell is wrong with him? First he thought she is a thief, now he thinks she is a beggar...

Geet snatches the cheque book and tries to throw it away...

Maan gets really pissed off...

He holds her hand and stops her...it hurts her a lot...

But she couldn't match him...Maan is way too strong for her...

Maan: pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Maan stares and Geet is not afraid...she won't let anyone insult her like that...

Geet: mein yahan koi bheek mangne nahi aayi hoo

Maan: teri ye himmat? Mere ghar pe aake mere baizzati karthi ho?

Geet: kya? aapne mera insult kiya hai, aapko toh mujhse maafi mangna chahiye, pehle kehthe ho mein chor hoon, ab bekari

Maan: tum toh...what nonsense? Security, get this girl out of my sight

Security comes running...

Geet: kabardar, koi mere paas nahi aayega

They just can't get near her...they look at Maan for help...

Geet's entry has created a sunami at KM...and bechara Maan pasgaya...

Kya Maan Geet se bach payega?

Part4
Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update...




Geet phir se aagayi...aur maan bhi...Arre maan ke paas antenna hai Kya...geet aaye hi usse pata lagjaata hain...ya phir koi sensor😆



Poor girl! She has come to the wrong address, Maan doesn't have a heart that she could steal......aisa kiya hogaya maan ke Saath...




Geet ko donation wali samjha😲...geet ka reaction Kya hoga...😉




Continue soon...😳😆

Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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zindagi bhadke liye jhelna padega abb maan ko geetko...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome every time geet thinks msk out of km he comes back
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awesome dear...iss geet ke guts ko maanna parega...& maan thinks that she is some pari...😆...waiting for some romantic moments...😳

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