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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Awesome Ritu...

The way you portrayed her feeling of loss and pain was just..beautiful...

Thank you for this update...

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awwssmmm Part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Wonderful...
Loved littel Arjun-Sakshi frist meet... sooo... cute
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Aww I loved the cute banter of Chotu titli o mean Saakshi & Chotu Arjun especially his cute & adorable conversation with her mother when she took him in her arms so that he can ring the bell This is really really bad ritu that u stopped at a crucial point😡

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@Arakshiya_58

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

amazing story... with lots of emotion ...😊😊

as always briilliant work...👏👏

love this TITLI and OUR ARJUN tooo much...❤️❤️❤️

so now arjun is back again ..but y he left her???😲

eagrly waiting for next part...

lots of hugs from me for giving us wonderful story...🤗🤗

your stories r magical...⭐️⭐️

love you di...

i m new member so plz accept my f.request and pm me..

love to read your work...

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Heylooo!🤗

First of all, bit big sorries and apologies for the delay! I know, I should have updated sooner but was caught up with work and uni a little...anyways, now I am here and with the next update!

Secondly, thank youu sooo sooo much for loving this story! 🤗I do know I have to reply to you individually, will be doing that shortly😃

So...exciteddd?😳😎

I am sure you have a lot of questions in your mind after the first chapter...so have patience, all will be answered in time!

P.S - Also, I realise you would want to hear things from Arjun's POV after this update, so yeah the next one will be more about his POV.😃

Filhaal, enjoyy!

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Don't forget to leave your comments and likes 😉P.P.S - It got a bit long but since I was late, I think you'd like the long update😉

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 11 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Wow awsm update

Loved it

It was just beautiful

The flashback was lovely

Continue soon

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

i am speechless !!!!
Ritu ji !!!!!!!!!!! how can u write so soo sooo well haan ???
very very very nice writing

already waiting for the next part

great writing Rituuu 🤗

loved it 👍🏼

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Rituuu rituuu teri hands mein nah jadoo hain...you write sooo beautifully yaar making me go into 'Forever with you world'..lol am even imagining the scene in the rain..sakshi wearing a black dress..knee lenght one and arjun as you said white shirt

Sooo emotional as well it was...the past bit was soo cute ❤️

Oh oh why Arjun went away..what did he do...is he feeling guilty?but for what?is it something with sakshi mom death? sooo many mystery..you gotta continue soon😎

Like i said it was not looong rituu rituuu..you can do much better in terms of long updates 😉 😆

Fantabulous update...do continue soon and thank you sooo much..big hugs to you 🤗