Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Rituuu rituuu (why are we allowed to put a character only 3 times and why not more 😭 😭) okay that was not about the story 😆 😆 😆 😆

I found the update a really emotional one...the way it was written portrayed the emotions really well,sakshi pain of losing her mom,losing arjun and now shutting down the cafe 😒 😒

Soo sooo arjun came back...but aisa kya huwa that he had to go away when his titli needed him the most?thats one of the reason am really looking forward to the story 😃 😃 😃 😃

You better continue soon..you left us at a cliffhanger again...i wanted to know how arjun console her and how they talk but yeah i guess it'll be too long then...i understand but then the greedy reader in me waaant mooore you see 😉 😉

Thank you sooo sooo much rituuu rituuu for the awesome blossom update and pm 🤗 🤗

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kunchu

@kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

/beautiful start indeed

the cafe and bell, both had a great impact

waiting to know more

and the end was very nice

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

i loved it..the start ...the end everything ...the way u dipicted sakshi 's pain
their first meeting was awesome..
want to knw more..
continue soon
thnx for pm

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome update...

Sakshi missing her mom & Arjun...😭😭😭

Why Sakshi is closing her cafe???😕😕

Why Arjun left her when she needed him???

Arakshi first meet was too cute...😃😃😃

Present scene was 😭😭😭

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

the flashback was really cute... ❤️

feeling bad for sakshi... 😭

continue soon

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awesome update
loved it
The FB was cute
Why did Arjun leave Sakshi when she needed him the most
Feeling sad foe her
she really misses her mom a lot
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

it ws amazng!!! beautifully writn

d ambiance of d cafe u creatd nd d emptines it had ws wndrfully shwn

sakshi's pain really mde me sad.. she has sufrd a lot nd her closng d cafe is cmpletely undrstndable

luvd d fb prt where u introducd d chhota arjun.. hayee so cutee!!!!! milte hi tng krna chaalu!! his addresng sakshi as 'titli' ws really cute.. bt his mother's ignornce 2wrds him ws really painful..

sakshi's xcitmnt brot a huge smile on my face.. nd d way u'v writn it i flt myslf being presnt there nd dat evrythng ws hapning ri8 infrnt of my eyes.. she's really cute..

nd not 2 4get her mother.. i jst luvd her character a lot.. her luv 2wrds sakshi ws so pure nd beautiful.. no wndr she's misng her lyk hell.. also her intractn wid arjun shwd hw wndrful a persn she is

it mkes me really wndr y arjun lft sakshi wen dey shared quite a strng bnd.. bt watevr d reasn b i'm happy on his retrn..

ri8 nw i'm havng a lot of questns in my mind.. impatience rani jo theheri!! bt i'l patiently wait 4 d nxt prt (kya detrminatn!! huh!!)

thnx 4 d pm

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Rula diya yarr!
u made me cry...it was so emotional...the mother daughter love...so beautifully written...
couldn't hav asked for more...

I loved the Titli and Arrrjun moments...so cute as a child they were..and grumpy too :P

But why is she closing down the Caf' and why did Arjun leave her...
so many questions jumping around in my chotusa dimag...

continue soonish ritu

love
Aisha