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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

beautiful it is my dear

but what happened that he was so away for a long time

and whats going to happen

eager to know

continue soon

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shaily

@shailyshukla9

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

fantastic updateee

dear update soon...

thnx for pm

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

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fantastic update...

something is troubling him wt is that don keep suspense...

plz do cont soon...

Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

hey ritu...u compel me to leave my each work nd get involved in ur fantasy lad yaa!

this one is spcl to u right...

i cn feel it in th words u r writing!
the flashback part ws sooo cute!
both of them were so naughty...sakshi getting jealous of arjun...

arjun felt a connection with sakshi's mom too hence he started calling her maai!

lovely update!!

bt wat is this mystery part...wat is it dat arjun thinks he'll hurt sakshi if he tells her truth...

continue soon

PS: missing 'betn pages'

love
Aisha

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

I m sorry ritu but I adorn this chotu ACP &his titli more than the grown ups&for that here's a biG bear hug to the two.

I so so so adorn&love the conversation between him &his Maai.

Zig Ziglar quote says "Kids go where there is excitement. They stay where there is love".Her love,care,pampering draws him towards her that he felt a sense of protection towards his Maai& titli at such a tender age😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Humairaa
Wow awsm update
Loved it
It was just beautiful
The flashback was lovely
Continue soon

Thank youu Humairaa🤗

Originally posted by: shreya09
i am speechless !!!!
Ritu ji !!!!!!!!!!! how can u write so soo sooo well haan ???
very very very nice writing
already waiting for the next part
great writing Rituuu 🤗
loved it 👍🏼

Awww Shreyaaa you flatter me againnn☺️

Thank youuu🤗

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Rituuu rituuu teri hands mein nah jadoo hain...you write sooo beautifully yaar making me go into 'Forever with you world'..lol am even imagining the scene in the rain..sakshi wearing a black dress..knee lenght one and arjun as you said white shirt

Sooo emotional as well it was...the past bit was soo cute ❤️

Oh oh why Arjun went away..what did he do...is he feeling guilty?but for what?is it something with sakshi mom death? sooo many mystery..you gotta continue soon😎

Like i said it was not looong rituu rituuu..you can do much better in terms of long updates 😉 😆

Fantabulous update...do continue soon and thank you sooo much..big hugs to you🤗

Poooh Bearrr🤗

hahaa i m glad you liked ittt hayeee main toh thanks bhi nahi bol sakti lol😆😆

Looove you for the comment and biiig hugs to you🤗

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...

Beautifully written...
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Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank you Snehaa🤗

Originally posted by: sakshiarjun
Awesome dear... As usual you took as to Sakshi's and Arjun's world...
Along with we also got drenched in the rain...
The past was so cute... I like the cute naughty Arjun...
Why was Arjun feeling guilty? Why couldn't he keep Sakshi with him forever?😕
Continue soon dear...

Thank youuu 🤗

I know you have a lot of questions, they will be answered with time hehe😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didi.

Loved it and love u.

Awww the flashback was sooo cute.

But u made me cry.

They are soo much in pain.

Can't see them in pain.

Plz con soon..

Thanks a lot Easha🤗🤗

Looove you for the comment! Awww dont worry, just one more chapter and then not too many emotional ones hehe😳

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update 👏
Loved the flashback ❤️

Thank youuu Jia🤗

Originally posted by: coolRD
OMG!!!! dis ws jst outstndng Ritu.. u made me lost vry deep in d stry again
i cud really conct 2 sakshi's pain.. she has actually suffrd a lot
d fb scene ws really vry cute.. as it is i luv d smaller versions of arjun nd sakshi.. nd d tadka of ur strys mke me fall 4 dem mre nd mre.. their cute little banter ws so adorable
there's quite a lot of mystry bhind arjun i guess.. i'm actually imagining wat wud b d posibl reasns of him leaving so sudnly.. nd again cming bck thnkng dat he won't b abl 2 stay wid sakshi 4evr.. i really wndr wat mistke he has committed..
do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm

Thank you thank you thank youuu for the lovely comment 🤗

it serioulsy means a lot to mee!😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
loved it
It was magical
the FB was too cute
why is Arjun guilty?
why can't he live with Sakshi?
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank youu Shravanii🤗

Questions shall be answered sooon😉

Originally posted by: vivy58
hey u again back with boom...😃
love it .❤️..what an amazing update...👏👏👏
the FB part was superb ,, awesome.. lovely tooo...👍🏼👍🏼
eagerly waiting for next part ..
con.soon...😊.

Thank youuu🤗

Originally posted by: yams.s
Wonderful Update

Thank youuu🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
awesome update
Loved it
It was just beautiful
The flashback was lovely
thankx for pm.

Thank youuu Pariii🤗

Originally posted by: NainaSM
cute flashback .,,,,😳,,,,,,,, but what happened ? wana know ... why arjun can be with her forever ? .😲... continue soon 👍🏼

Thank youu Naina🤗

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
sakshi's anger her need to know why and arjun's helplessness to give the answers for what ever the reasons 😭
flashback was so sweet how they became friends and how sakshi's mom loves arjun
hope sakshi is able to bring arjun back to herself with the time and they never part again
thanks for pm
hey i was in kerela back waters recently and it is absolutly beautiful so green so much of water
so u can use it in any of ur arakshi stories and the way u will write i am sure u r gona make
it more beautiful 😉 happy writing

Thank youu Shefaliii🤗

ahh i so want to be there too myself! thanks for the idea, will deffo try and use it sometime😉

Hope you enjoyeddd 😳

P.S - I have a wedding invitation in kerala for august and now i m thinking i should go hehe

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet
amazing...beautifully written
loved it..
arjun cant stay with her y????
y does he leave her before
plz contd. soon
thnx for pm

Thank youuu Aradhya🤗

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Its just beautiful Ritu..

Cont. soon...
Thanks for the pm...

Thank you Anjali🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kunchu
beautiful it is my dear
but what happened that he was so away for a long time
and whats going to happen
eager to know
continue soon

Thank youuu Helna (that's your name right?) 🤗

Originally posted by: shailyshukla9
fantastic updateee
dear update soon...

thnx for pm

Thank youu🤗

Originally posted by: anu91
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fantastic update...
something is troubling him wt is that don keep suspense...
plz do cont soon...

Anuuu🤗

Thank you sooo soo much for the comment! it means a lot😳

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
hey ritu...u compel me to leave my each work nd get involved in ur fantasy lad yaa!

this one is spcl to u right...

i cn feel it in th words u r writing!
the flashback part ws sooo cute!
both of them were so naughty...sakshi getting jealous of arjun...

arjun felt a connection with sakshi's mom too hence he started calling her maai!

lovely update!!

bt wat is this mystery part...wat is it dat arjun thinks he'll hurt sakshi if he tells her truth...

continue soon

PS: missing 'betn pages'

love
Aisha

Awww thanks sooo much Aisha! 🤗

that really really means a lot..and hehe it might be a lil special😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
I m sorry ritu but I adorn this chotu ACP &his titli more than the grown ups&for that here's a biG bear hug to the two.
I so so so adorn&love the conversation between him &his Maai.
Zig Ziglar quote says "Kids go where there is excitement. They stay where there is love".Her love,care,pampering draws him towards her that he felt a sense of protection towards his Maai& titli at such a tender age😃

Awww lovely quote Farheen🤗

hehe glad you liked ittt..thank you for the comment 🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Heylooo🤗

Sorry agaiinnn..this got delayed hehe.☺️

So so, I know the questions are still biting at you, and they will be answered but as the story proceeds😳

Here is the next chapter (yeah I know you will say that it's not a very long update, but I am going on a holiday on Friday and hence I had to update before I leave)

Read onnn😳