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Posted: 11 years ago
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Badly wanted to write this😊 Albeit didn't give it my best but hope u liked it a bit...Anxious for your comments😛
Finally she succeeded in putting maham to sleep.Her daughter was indeed lucky,she got a loving mother and...and indeed a loving father who loved her more than anything in this world.It had been been 1 year since she got married to zeeshan after nabeel's death.It was so difficult for her to come out of that trauma.Being someone else when u love your husband too much was quite difficult for but she sacrificed everything,everything for sake of her daughter.She knew that she became selfish in this case but a mother had to become selfish for her kid's sake.She hated herself for doing this to zeeshan,he didn't deserved this.
Sitting on the terrace she was talking with herself when she heard maham's giggling voice.She came downstairs and a smile appeared on her face seeing zeeshan and maham playing.He truly loved her and wanted best for her thats why he shifted to lahore for maham's sake.
"Aap le liye khana lga dun." "Ummm,,chalo lga do mein aur maham akhtay khana khain ge haina janu,,," he pressed his nose with maham's and began to tickle her.Rumaisa felt so relieved when she saw both of them like this.She felt contented that atleast zeeshan has someone special in his life but no she has to talk to him he just can't waste his life like this.He deserves a life partner who loves her immensely.
After dinner.
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"Zeeshan mujhay aap se baat krni hai." He immediately put his work aside and asked rumaisa to sit...She felt hesitant but finally mustered her courage to speak..."Mein ap ki bohat shukar guzar hun ke aap ne mere liye itna kuch kia,mujhay aur maham ko apnaya..."He was about to cut her when she insisted him to let her speak today."Mein jaanti hun ke aap maham se beintihaa muhabbat krte hain lekin ap ki bh to koi zindagi hai,aap yeh life deserve nahi krtay,mein is ehsaas ke sath nahi jee skti ke aap mere liye apni zindagi brbaad kr len,plzz plzz aap shadi kr len..." He looked at her with surprise and disgust..he felt that he would cry out any moment.Rumaisa waited for his reply but he just kept on staring her with those teary,fierce looks."Plzz kuch bolen.."
Mein kya bolun rumaisa,tum ne mujhay meri hi nazron mein jhuka dia hai.tumhe kya lgta hai ke mein ne tum se shadi tum pe ihsaan jtanay ke liye ki th,nahi rumaisa nahi,jis shaks ne mujhay sab se zaida chaha,sb se zaida support kia mein us ki biwi aur bachay ko kese akela chod skta tha,tum se shadi mein netumhe tahafuz fraham krne ke liye ki th.i wanted to protect you and maham from this cruel world.agr mein aesa na krta to kya jawab deta nabeel ko.." He held her hand and with tears coming out of hus eyes deliberately."Mein jaanta hun keh tum nabeel ki amanat ho lekin rumaisa tum ne kabhie socha hai keh wo tumharay liye kya chahta tha,he wanted u to be happy,rumaisa aj tak tum aoni khushiyaan kurbaan krti aii ho,kabhie apne hakk ke liye nahi ladi at least aj to socho apne baare mein.." Rumaisa stayed numb,she looked at him inquisitively."agar tum mere baare mein soch rahi ho to aik baad yaad rakhna meri life sirf do logon ke liye hai,aik maham aur dosri maham ki mama ke liye." He jerked her towards him reducing the distance between two.
"Plzz rumaisa aik mawka do mujhay,hamaray rishtay ko,mere liye nahi na sahi lekin hamari beti ke liye,nabeel ke liye plzzz just one chance." He bend his head and put his head in her palms.Within a second he realised that she thise hands lifted his head up and rubbed away those tears...She looked at him lovingly and hugged him crying but with a smile and promise.
"Mein hamaray rishtay ko aik mawka dun gi zeeshan zrur dun gi.hamaray liye hamaray beti ke liye,Nabeel ke liye." Within a moment he caught her in his embrace kissing her unbrushed tussels and assuring her that he will always be there for her..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh iam so happy yu wrote this!
gonna go read!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well... zeeshan is such a janu! well written and a nice attempt! i liked it that you thought of writing on current couples instead of those which pl no more watch. not that i dont love Khisher any more... but readung about current favs is a felicity!
write on more... Ehtesham sania?sehrish
or Shabi and sarmad... would love to read them too!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely and wonderful one shot
Zeeshan truly is a man with a golden heart. He is a great guy and he deserves someone like rumaisa who is selfless unlike his rest of his family.
I love the zee sham patience and calm to convince Rumaisa to believe in their relationship and to give another chance to their marriage.
Love the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you are right. Rubia would have been selfish too. he is lucky to have rumi in his life.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant!!! Just the way I want their story to end...not live forced in marriage but to end up happy. However Romaisa can actually think?!😲 Its wishful thinking😆

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