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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is awesome !!! 👏
Damn Rudra !!! 😡 Why why why did you go to Laila ?! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmi279

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seriously! U being one of them .. i feel privileged to read such brilliant wrk :)

kya??😲 utteri...main kaha se a padhi !
see napster, tattle-tale,SJ, zara, what_the and now curled up joined the privileged party !😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Interesting...! Waiting to read more ... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Loved this! do continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Amazing!
Do continue :)
Plz pm me updates :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
i rembr reading ur stories
welcm to dis forum
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
:'( You stopped there...
Nahiii...

Really well written as usual and love that Paro is leaving. Good on her!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was painful - finding out abt his relations w/Laila & still keeping it.

-Sona
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! I love it. Please write part 2 right now!
This sounds so interesting. He has a lot of explaining and apologizing to do!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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2 | Beauty-spots




She had eleven beauty-spots, eleven. Five scattered on her cream like legs, three were hidden behind her choli two on her back, and one-- his favourite one, on her face. He had counted them all.




Is it not something to pity, a man who refused to engage with his wife knew every minute detail about her and with such ease he let her go? Is it wrong then to pity him further? Or shall we refuse him our shoulders because he went to the brothel asking for a woman with eleven beauty-spots. Do not hide your gasps of horror.




Rudra Pratap Ranawat, a man built on shattered foundations, broken pillars and a leaking roof asked for a woman with cream-like skin that had to be soft to touch, and on her beautiful skin there had to be eleven beauty-spots. Not one less. The women who were met with the acute demand were not surprised, after his so-called marriage he visited the brothel frequently, often asking for a fair-pretty girl with wavy locks- but the eleven beauty spots requirement was new.




When the girl was presented before him he neither appreciated her provocative smile nor did he gratify her need to drown him in every drop of alcohol present, the beauty-spots that were revealed to him were not in the right places some were above instead of below. Everything was wrong. They didn't beautify her, they marred her. He stood and passed her the discarded gown and left, do not muffle your gasps.




He wouldn't touch her-- couldn't touch her. She wasn't right, everything was wrong, it was wrong. She wasn't fair enough her hair wasn't long enough, she wasn't his wife. She wasn't Paro.




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Hey kids, hope you enjoy the second chapter/segment, I don't know whether these are dribbles or chapters but I hope you can endure whatever I throw your way ^_^


Let me know how it was


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Edited by curledup - 11 years ago

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