AMAR_LOVE thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#1

One random night Kriya woke up as she was getting bad dreams of his boyfriend Rey, she moved aside of her bed, picked the glass and drank the water. After this she was going to sleep when suddenly she got a message, she picked her mobile and saw that it was Rey's message saying that "Sorry but we are over." She get shocked by reading this but thought may she had done something wrong that's y. She decided to ask that what she has done that he is breaking up with her so she called him and told to meet at their place. Within half an hour they both reached their, by seeing Rey standing near the lake, she gone near him and called him

Kriya: Rey (she called his name with a hurt voice)

Rey: Kriya I want to tell u something (with his back facing her)

Kriya: Yes I know what u want to say...say that u never loved me that's y u r breaking up with me...say that u r bored from me...(she started crying)

Rey did not say anything just closed his eyes to stop his tears as her tears were breaking his heart...he nodded his head in no manner...he decided to tell her the truth so he turn towards her and saw that she is kneeling down and covered her face with her hand and was crying loudly. He gone near her and hold her arms and

Rey: Plz Kriya don't say that I hate u... u r my life how can I hate u (his eyes was full of tears)

Kriya: Then y r u leaving me...

Rey: Plz Kriya I can't tell u the reason...

Kriya: (holding his collar and shouted) no u have to tell me... plz tell me.

Rey: Kriya plz try to understand...

Kriya: If u will not tell me then I will kill...

He kissed her and not allowed her to complete her sentence, after 10 mins he left her due to lack of oxygen, he hugged her tightly plz Kriya don't ever leave me bcoz I need u...she requested him to tell the truth, so he just kept his head in her lap and cried harder...she did not said anything just keep running her fingers in his hair to make him calm...he hold her hand and kept near his heart...after sometime when he was calmed she helped him to sit and cupped his face and kissed his eyes then his cheek and asked him...he told that he suffering from Blood Cancer...by listening this she get shocked, she requested him that plz don't say like this...she will not be able to handle this...but he told that it is true, he took her to his house and shown her his medical report and said that he is dying...she hugged him very tightly and started crying.

Kriya: Rey I want ask u something...

Rey: What...

Kriya: Will u marry me?

Rey: No Kriya plz try to understand that there is no future of us...means I am going to die so how can I maary u...plz move on...

Kriya: Don't u dare to say like this... I just want to spend my whole life with u.

(After a lot of hesitation he finally agreed to marry her and within one week they got married, their parents were very happy with their decisions...next day after the marriage they both flew away to New York.)

On the first night she told him that she has surprise for him...he asked her but she denied then she told him if u want to know u have to fill my wish, he asked her that what is it..then she told him that she want him...

Section 18+

He leaned towards her and started kissing her...due to lack of oxygen they broke the kiss, he started grazing the cheek with his cheek, then he kissed her on cheek and started moving downwards and kissed on her shoulder, he started removing her clothes with the help of his teeth and give the love bite...she moaned in pain...by seeing her like this he become desirable so he just remove her inner clothes and give the love bite in her cleavage area, she moaned in pain...to distract her he kissed her...while he was kissing he squeezed her breast... after some time he started massaging her inner thigh and entered her...after a long love making season he laid down beside her and pulled her towards him...she kept her head in his chest and with this they both slowly drifted in a deep sleep...

Next day she took her to hospital and told him that is the best hospital for cancer treatment. She took him in and they consulted the doctor...but doctor told him that it is very late bcoz his cancer has reached to his last stage and he cannot do anything...by listening this both Rey and Kriya get shocked...Kriya eyes got filled and ran away from there...Rey called her but she did not stopped...he took the permission and gone behind her and saw that she was sitting in the edge of the terrace and was crying bitterly...he gone near her and kept his hand in her shoulder...she hugged him tightly and asked him not to leave her alone as she cannot leave without him. He hugged him tightly and let her cry bcoz he knew one day he will leave her alone forever...

1 year later

Rey was got admitted at hospital due to health problem, Kriya tried to stay near him but he did not allowed her to stay as 8 and half months pregnant. One month later, Kriya was sitting in their room holding his picture and was praying to god that plz send him back...her thought was broken by continuous ringing of the phone...she picked the call and get to know that Rey's condition is not good and he wants to meet her... She rushed to the hospital and saw in him very bad condition...she rushed to him but doctor told him to stay out...with the heavy heart she left from there... after 2 hours doctor came out of his ward and told Kriya that he has only 1 day to live... she got hurt by listening this then asked the doctor did he know this, doctor nodded his head in positive manner and told him right now he needs u so go to him...she gone towards him and sat beside him, he kept his head in her lap and started crying...she ran her fingers in his hairs

Kriya: Rey...(called him softly)

Rey: Kriya I want to live with u and our child...

Kriya: Nothing will happen to u...u r going to live...

Rey: But Kriya...

Kriya: Rey u need rest, so keep quiet and sleep.

Rey: Kriya I want u to request one thing...

Kriya: What...

Rey: I want to take my last breathe in ur lap holding u and my child...

Kriya: How dare u say like this (she shouted)...

Rey: Kriya calm down it is not good for u...

She did not listen to him and started shouting at him...suddenly she felt some pain her stomach so she hold her stomach and shouted loudly, by listening this doctor came to his ward and saw that Kriya is lying in the floor...with the great difficulty they took her to O.T.

After an hour he heard the sweet angelic voice of their child...doctor came out and told him that he has been blessed with a baby girl...he told him that he wants to meet them...so doctor told the ward boy to bring them...after some time Kriya came to him with their baby, he got very happy by seeing her...suddenly his breathing become abnormal and...

5 years later

One cute girl ran towards her mother holding one picture...she showed her picture and asked her that who is he...her mother told her that he is father and he is with our Universe Ji...then Kriya requested to Shanaya to sleep as tomorrow is the most important day...

Next day the preparation was going on as it was Shanaya's birthday, at evening where everyone was enjoying the party...Kriya was missing Rey and requested him to come back. At night after the party Shanaya was sleeping in the room, Kriya saw her sleeping...she felt someone's hand in her shoulder, she turned around and saw that Rey is standing there...he took her to room and laid down in her bed...he kept her head in his lap and gestured her to sleep and with this slowly drifted into a deep sleep...

THE END

Created

Last reply

Replies

6

Views

2.7k

Users

7

Likes

26

Frequent Posters

don girls thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
amazing OS...!
simply beautiful and emotional at the same time
just amazing
unishaz thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
superb dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Beautiful OS
Loved it 😊
alex754 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Heart touching awesome story
Tragic but then very beautiful
Like button is not working for me
Thats why couldnt like
Thanks for pm
reyaditi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
beautiful os...
u made me emotional...i waz almost on d verge of crying..
beautifully penned down...
so Rey finally died...
how lucky his last wish waz fulfilled...
so Kriya is imagining Rey after his death...
such a true love...
love KriYaansh...
glmorous_diva thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
simple bt beautiful os
loved it
its heart touching

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

Chapter 1 (Late-Night Confessions) Munni sat cross-legged on her small bed in the staff quarters, staring at the cracked screen of her...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

A "What-If" Rumya Continuation Story — imagining what could’ve happened if Soumya never left Ishqbaaz and her relationship with Rudra was...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".