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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys my name is Aniqa. Usually I'm a silent reader but I started an OS on the upcoming track. Do leave your comments. I'll continue ASAP xxx




"But dad where are we going?" Zain asked his dad confused.
"Beta hum ek Bohat bade resort chale ge, indoor luxuries, swimming pools, spas...sab kuch"
Usmaan replied.
Aliya: par Mamu...
Zain looks at aliya. Aliya looks at zain.
Usman: Kay hua beta? Koi baat Karni hai?
Aliya: nahi Mamu mein Sochi rahi thi...
Zain: (mocking her) Bol do MKB, apna hi ghar samjho...
Aliya gives zain a sarcastic smile.
Usman: MKB??
Zain: (chuckles) Mamu ki bhanji, dad aur kya?

Both father and son laugh whilst the 3 chudails exchange looks.
Aliya sulks.
Usman: zain, humari bhanji ko tang mat karo...aliya bete rum bolo?
Aliya: (to zain) ijaazat hai?
Zain: irshad...

Aliya: woh mamu mein Sochi rahi thi ek agar kisi luxurious five star resort hi Jana hai to barkat villa Kya kisi resort se kam hai?
Usman: matlab?
Aliya: Hume outdoor...
Zain: chalo...kisi jungle mein picnic manate hain!
Aliya: mamu!
Usman: zain humari bhanji ki tang mat kheencho...waise idea bura nahi hai, kyun begum?
Sureeya nods with a fake smile.

Fahad: idea to zain ka bhi bura nahi hai...
Zain and fahad look at each other and burst out laughing.
Aliya: (annoyed) Mamu!
Usman: (smiles) zain! Fahad!

Both: sorry dad. (Still smiling)

(Later in zain and Aliya's room)

Zain: waise MKB apna trunk saath le kar ja rahi hi Kya?
Aliya: shut up zain!
Zain: make me!
(Zain moves in close to aliya)

"Make me" he whispers. Aliya is stuck as he places his hands on both sides. Aliya is looking down.




Precap: aliya is shown coming out in simple bhopali attire and zain is lost.
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Ravinanaik thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
its really nice n cute
conti soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice!
Loved their conversation 😃
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice and cute update.love their conversation.zain was so naughty.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Work,,

plz continue it,,

u r good writer..

dont b silent reader, jx becme a regular member.. 😳

anyways Welcome to this forum 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWWW that was sooo cute and i just loveddd it <3 <3 <3 <3
continue soon...loved zain's dialogue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone I'll continue soon xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome and cute!
I loved the way Zain was teasing Aliya, and also Fahad joined the team 😆
Loved the mamu and bhanji bond too
the end
continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi i have just started watching beinteha and i liked ur os
if u can will u pls send me pm for the rest of the parts 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww that's really adorable! Loved the last part when he says, "make me". I wish we get such scenes in BI :D continue soon::D

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