Duet song for Zaya railway station scene...my creation..:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi...This is a duet song/poem that I wrote for the Railways station scene..

Aliya is sitting in the railway station...Zain is running and looking around for her..determined to get her back..

Pink : Aliya's thoughts

Blue : Zain's thoughts

Tune for the song... same as - Jaane kaun ho,Par ho tum kahi..(tune repeated for every 2 lines)

Hindi/Urdu version:




































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Author's note..

Please let me know your feedback on this...


Just to clarify, the first stanza is about Aliya's dreams for a prince charming..and the wishes she used to ask in her prayers...:)
Sitaron se bhi aage ..these 4 words are from a poem by Iqbal..an Urdu poet..


Disclaimer: Images have been taken from the Beintehaa Picture Gallery thread..
Credits for the pics used:

Pic 1 - BabyStone - who has in turn credited garima22
Pic 2 - ..SheWolf..
Pic 3 - created by merging 2 pics from -AshaNegi-
Pic 4 - me..:D
Pic 5 - .ayesha.

If any of the owners of these pics/creations would not want me to use the pics, pls pm me and I will remove them...If not, well thanks a tonne for these pics..:)

Tried posting English version...all the pics got jumbled up..if anyone requests for it...will post later..
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-Minion- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mindblowing,the lyrics get along with the stiuation.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

mindblowing,the lyrics get along with the stiuation.


thank u so much 😊...i was wondering if my little poem had scared off y'all..lol...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its wonderfulšŸ‘ especially loved the lines u used for Aliya😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its amazing, love the lyrics
Edited by Shiiya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...really nice!
Loved itā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

Its wonderfulšŸ‘ especially loved the lines u used for Aliya😳



thanks dear...😊...hindi is not my mother tongue..n on top of tat..i have tried to write this in Urdu...glad 2 hear positive feedback..😊
Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful!! It's so damn lovely 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shiiya

Its amazing, love the lyrics


Originally posted by: -Spriha-

Wow...really nice!

Loved itā¤ļø



thank u...glad y'all liked it..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZaYaFan1

Wonderful!! It's so damn lovely 😳



😊..thank u so much..tuk me a lot of effort to put the poem up..with all the pics n such...

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