'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
arey baap re what a story seriously
but the update looked very small for me
anyways do pm me when u update it
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing storyline ...!
really interesting ...!
just read all three parts and love it to bits...!
i wounder what rey will say to get her back into his life...!
can't wait for the next update ...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooowww this story is aaammmaaazzizinnnggg
just read all the parts and they are fab!!!!
damn good!!!!
love the way you described the feelings...
rey's kria's feelings perfect!!!
and the aggression rey possess perfect!!!
the kiss anger( a bit) and full of aggression!!!
just love it!!!!
am just loving this!! Its awesommmeee!!!
rey's guilt, anger realization of love perfect!!!!
kria's feelings justified!!!!
and then the line in second part- things have changed!!!
totally perfect for the part!!!
kria has taken wrong but rey seems determined!!!
loved it!!! Very nice!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic...supercool concept...
loved the story and kriyaansh...

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was really really really good...
I read all three together and I have to say I was xpcting another one because I didnt want that to be the last one for now...plzz jaldi update karna...will be waiting...
n lastly I loved it... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
So, hello guys. Thank you so so soo much for reading this short story! It was supposed to be an OS but I turned it into a SS for a very special friend! She had always been a great support throughout! this story was dedicated to her and everyone who read and liked and commented. that meant a lot guys, coz the comments are the only thing which makes us write.😊 anyway, this is the last part of the story! I hope you like it!


<IV>

Kriya wiped her eyes once again, sniffling loudly and forcing the tears back inside. She can't shed tears. If she does, the make-up will be ruined, and if it gets ruined, the marks on her cheeks will be visible. And if it's visible, a lot of questions will arise. And she is in no mood to answer anyone, not even Swayam, not even Sharon. She has to be strong, she will never give into Rey's charms, she will not let her feelings overcome her thoughts, she has to ignore his insanely appealing eyes and she'll never get weak again.


The door of the fire-escape opened and Rey quickly stepped inside, locking the door behind him. He knew she will be here. She had been dodging his tireless attempts to talk to her for the whole day, and when she went all missing, he knew this will be the place she'll be.


It's strange, but he is also sure that she knew he can find her here, he will look for her here.


A half-smile lightened up his face with the realisation. Kriya wanted to be found.


Kriya stood up, shooting daggers through her eyes at him as her fists all curled up. She watched him step down and stand in front of her while his face continued showing the same innocent apology. The same face she fell in love with.


"What? Why are you here? Can't you tell I don't want to talk with you? What, do I have to spell it out for you now? Carry a sign-board with me? That Keep Away'??"


Rey made a few futile attempts to stop her and speak up, but as usual, it went in vain. Kriya Ghai can't be easily stopped when she speaks. So giving up with delight, he shifted his concentration on admiring her. He stared at her face, how her face turned all red at the immense pressure to stop the tears which is trying to force its way out, how her large eyes all wide and her steel-grey orbs reflecting his own hazel one's, how her eye-brows arched on top of her forehead, giving away a very irked expression, how her tiny nose is all flared up when she kept yelling, how sweat glistened her porcelain skin due to the hot weather and excitement. She is breathtakingly beautiful, she is mesmerizing and she is clueless about what she is doing to him right now, she doesn't know how much he wants to hold her tightly in his arms and kiss her senses away. She doesn't know how much he wants to clutch that slender waist and press her against him. May be with those thoughts, may be with those realisation, his face revealed a soft smile. Making Kriya get even more irritated.


"Huhh, you are not even listening to me. You don't even care what I- "


"I DO CARE!"


A chill ran down through her spine as soon as Rey's husky voice hit her. He didn't yell or shout, but his voice was demanding, his voice was almost regal. It felt like she has to listen, she just can't disregard it.


Rey watched her response and his voice softened automatically.


"I care Kriya, this is the only thing I care about. What you think, what you want, what you feel. That's why am sorry, for last night..."


His voice almost choked as he said the last few words. With a couple of steps he closed the distance between them and placed his palms on the wall, carefully around her but not touching her. She could feel the heat emitting from his body, contrasting her stiff cold stand. It was almost agonising, yet comforting. She almost felt the urge to pull him on her, but at the same time, it reminded her again and again how easy it is for him to manipulate her body's reactions. He could feel her breathing hitched as his face leaned towards her. He wanted to chuckle but stopped, thinking she might misunderstand again. Kriya averted her gaze, she couldn't take the intensity, the longing his eyes showed. After a few moments of unease, she finally spoke,


"Sorry, for, last night? Again, you're sorry for-"...


"No, not that!"


He cut her again, with his lips inches apart from her, he exclaimed with every bit of emotion he had, all put into his words. She could smell the mint of his breath, the cologne he used, the little sweat he had on him. An intoxicating smell, like a wild flower. Pulling her with a force she can't escape. She is scared to look up, as if she does, she might never be able to look away. But him being so close, her every bit of sanity is losing, every bit of determination is breaking. She can't escape him anymore. She is getting captivated. And not-so-surprisingly, she wants it. She wants to be his prisoner. With a long inhale, with every bit of courage she could manage, Kriya looked up at his face, hell-bent on not giving in. But much to her surprise, he was waiting for it. Like he was waiting for that moment only. A crooked smile crossed his innocent face as he whispered softly,


"Am not sorry for kissing you Kriya. God help me, I wanna do it again and again. But am sorry I didn't take your permission last night. Bas yehi bolna thaa. So, may I?"


And with those words, leaving her speechless and gaping, Rey took her lips again. Merging them as one, claiming her as his, he kissed her. His hands soon wrapped around her waist and pulled her up against him. With the harmony, she immediately wrapped her legs around his waist while her hands, which were curled up in a fist, which were not ready to give into him, soon wrapped themselves around his neck, pulling him near, making sure there is no distance left between them. That kiss made shivering cold ran through them, while fire burned inside their skin. They soon melted away in each other's arms.



A kiss pushed them apart, they had to bury their feelings.

A kiss dug out those feelings, they had to face them once again.

And this kiss depicted their feelings, they are now brought closer. Together.


A few words said, a few unsaid.


A few emotions portrayed, a few hidden.


But in the end, they belonged to each other. And they know it now.


~A few weeks later~



"Don't you dare dodge the question!" a furious Rey snapped at her as Kriya threw her hands in the air in frustration! Why is her boyfriend so unreasonable? Why's it so difficult to be in a relationship with the person you love with all your heart? Whose idea was it anyway, to get into a relation in the first place?


"Aap pagal ho gaye ho kya? Aryan Sir wanted to talk to me about his departure!"


"Ha main hi pagal huin na abhi? Why can't he talk to me instead? Or Sharon? Or Swayam? Or anyone but you?"


"Oh lemme think!" she pretends a mock thinking before spitting fire again, "because I belonged to his academy in the first place!"


"You don't understand, he surely has some ulterior motives!" Rey completely ignored Kriya's mockery and made a very detective-face!


"Really? You are standing in my bedroom, at the middle of the night, demanding answers for why I talked with our affiliation manager? Like, really Rey?"


"As your boyfriend I have the right to?" he crossed his arms over his chest, pursing his lips together, forming a faint small pout on his face, he stared at her. Demanding, troublesome and jealous! Yeah, that's the simplest description Kriya could think off now. Why is he so kiddish? Why is he so annoyingly cute?


"Boyfriend huh?" her face was almost defeated, but still with the same nose flaring and arched eyebrows, she frowned at him, standing at the other side of her bed.


Rey stared at her face for a while. Then with the crooked grin he leapt forward, almost like a cheetah at his prey!


And things might get a little, umm, wild from here...


Well...A few things never change...


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THE END!!

So, how is it? good? bad? ugly? please do leave a comment!😊

Edited by anki_22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res... 😃

unres...

OMG is it coincidence...

in your both stories i am first...

yeeyyy...after a long time...😆

okay enough...

khatam end finished...itani jaldi...🤔

but ye to hona hi tha...

i sooo loved this part...


"A kiss pushed them apart, they had to bury their feelings.

A kiss dug out those feelings, they had to face them once again.

And this kiss depicted their feelings, they are now brought closer. Together."

these lines are beautiful..

waiting for more wonderful works from you...

Keep writing... (:

Edited by ..Roop.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woowww amazing part..
But wat is this..!! U ended it.. 😲
Y so .?? It was so good.. I want to read more.. 😭
Specialy the end..
And tht fire exit kis.. 😳
Good one..
Edited by PunjabiKudi_17 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ress...

unres..
1st of all m really sorry for being dis late...i was unwell...
i will miss this ss badly...it made me realise how special m to u nd how imp u r to me...afterall..its the rootcause of the bond we share today...
i will miss it for sure...okk no more emotional talks...
starting from the start...
kriya sitting in fire exit wiping her tears...it made me feel bad for her but at the same time left me in a spree of giggles...laughing coz she was afraid dat her makeup will drain out...bt stopped coz dat was NOT the only reason...
there comes the hero...or acc to me..villian cum hero...he knew she will be here nd she knew he will come here to look out for her still she was there...silly but was adorable...in this last part there r a lot of awww moments...
rey really have guts to do so...while she was yelling...instead of calming her down...he is adoring her...dumbo...but again...i was like...cute...coz dat is what makes kriyaansh diffrnt...
" He stared at her face, how her face
turned all red at the immense pressure to stop the
tears which is trying to force its way out, how her
large eyes all wide and her steel-grey orbs
reflecting his own hazel one's, how her eye-brows
arched on top of her forehead, giving away a very
irked expression, how her tiny nose is all flared up
when she kept yelling, how sweat glistened her
porcelain skin due to the hot weather and
excitement. She is breathtakingly beautiful, she is
mesmerizing"...anki take my bow here...u were just outstanding here...i font hv words in my vocabulary to praise u for this...just dat...i loved this part to no extents...my favourite throughout...u described rey's love so well...it wasnt kriya...
hats off to u here...
" e wants to hold her tightly in his arms and kiss
her senses away. She doesn't know how much he
wants to clutch that slender waist and press her
against him."...
isme to i was like no beta ab nai...is bar kiya to kriya ghai itna maregi ki ur soul will later on search for ur body...
baatcutter was back...i too missed her as much as rey did...
"I DO CARE"...the intensity with which he spat it out...it was enough to blow her away...
conversation afterwards...was very beautifully executed...
his authoritative tone nd the automatic softness in it just at the mere glance of her reactions...
nd the sorry interpretation by both...ah-mazing...
how she resisted to look into his eyes coz she was afraid of being imprisoned...nd he was waiting for dat only...
he asked sorry for not taking permission b4 kissing her...how modest...
nd dis tym too he did it...bt i loved ye wali kiss...
nd it was mesmerizing how u described what a kiss meant to them...
not to forget...the bedroom hustle bustle...hilarious...sb gaya bt aryan khanna ka bhoot nai gaya...
nd jump of cheetah on its pray...🤣🤣...
anki...i jst love you...
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
itni jaldi khatam ho gaya.
anyways...superb
loved it

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