AkDha OS :Confrontation ..(based on Promo)- PART 1 - PAGE 4 (UPDATED)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys...i started writing something after watching the Confrontation promo ...here are few lines ...let me know if you want me to continue😊



Shehensha ...shehensha ...humare charitra pe sandeha kaise kar sakte he...humse aise prashn karke unhone humare sambandh pe bhi prashnchinha laga diya he...tears of grief and revilement ran down her face ...dieing on the way to her heart...




Aap ne fir se hume majhdhaar me la kar khada kar diya he Shehensha...ab jabki hum aap ki chinta karne lage the..aap ke liye sache mann se prarthana karne lage the...fir se aap pe vishwas karne lage the...aap ne fir se humare bhavnao ka upahas kiya he ...humare ...humare..."pre"


She suddenly realized what she was saying and stopped abruptly in midway of confessing her feelings towards her husband...whom she claimed to hate few months ago...


"Humara pre.."She was too scared to utter that word...which had the strength to change her life..her world...her destiny...


Prem...yehi kehna chahti ho na jodha...


A sweet yet sharp voice intrigued her thoughts ...her eyes ran through the entire room to find the source of the voice...





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant! I want to read more!

I'm excited for this one..
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sure..i will😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aarrey yaar, ghaadi rukh kyon gayi... ? A aghey bado ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fabulous one👏
whose voice is it?😲 surely not jalals☺️
plz plz plzzz update soon...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Lines👍🏼
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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deepika continue soon... tum bhi meri class ki deepika ki tarah lazy mat ban na😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will continue soon guys..sorry for posting such a small portion..i was not sure if JA forum members would like to read my story😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

will continue soon guys..sorry for posting such a small portion..i was not sure if JA forum memberswould like to read my story😳



Di please likho na aage ^____^
And haan mujhe Pm krna pakka se :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deep.. Am glad to see a fellow member here..😃.
You write beautiful and I would agree to that without a doubt.. Your writings always create a different atmosphere totally engaging your readers in your write up so now I really really really look forward to reading this one that's because you have written it..😊.
Update it soon and when you do surely pm..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..
P.S-Hope you remember me..😊.

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