AkDha OS :Confrontation ..(based on Promo)- PART 1 - PAGE 4 (UPDATED)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nikki

@NikkiReed

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow NYC update continue soon and write thoda lamba... 😊 😆

Quote

904903

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

👏

Update soon dear. 🤗

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Thank u so much guys for these lovelyyy comments 😊

Quote

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
update plzz

I will update this weekend :) <3

Quote

Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wow dear!
It's beautifully written.. Jodha's pain and the surroundings around her were described so precisely. I was in awe! You are an amazing writer! Excited to read the next update.. Really want to know Jalal's POV. I'm guessing that Jodha is in a jungle.. Update this FF soon..

You wrote an OS on AkDha right? Can u plz send me the link? I forgot to comment on.. Sorry.. People named me GHAJNIAT and TahniRes for this reason 😆

Quote

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
wow dear!
It's beautifully written.. Jodha's pain and the surroundings around her were described so precisely. I was in awe! You are an amazing writer! Excited to read the next update.. Really want to know Jalal's POV. I'm guessing that Jodha is in a jungle.. Update this FF soon..

You wrote an OS on AkDha right? Can u plz send me the link? I forgot to comment on.. Sorry.. People named me GHAJNIAT and TahniRes for this reason 😆

😲😆

This is not a FF..max three parts i will write😆...i am too lazy to start a new FF...have 5-6 FFs pending on another TV pair...😳

U have an awesome sense of humor😊

Quote

PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

amazing update ... seriously somebody needed jodha to show the mirror to her kartutein ...though she is partly right & partly wrong as well ... whatever she did was to protect her brother & her husband ... but still she needed to tell the truth to her husband ...

anyways loved ur update ... hoping to read more n more from u...👏

Quote

shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
amazing update ... seriously somebody needed jodha to show the mirror to her kartutein ...though she is partly right & partly wrong as well ... whatever she did was to protect her brother & her husband ... but still she needed to tell the truth to her husband ...
anyways loved ur update ... hoping to read more n more from u...👏

OMG !!! I completely agree with your point of view... I feel Jodha was 100% at fault... she should not lie to her husband... I hate vachan drama... 😃

Quote

Nikki

@NikkiReed

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
OMG !!! I completely agree with your point of view... I feel Jodha was 100% at fault... she should not lie to her husband... I hate vachan drama... 😃

par didu she was really wishing to tell jallu the truth but suji took vachan from her jabardasti... It was not her fault completely...

Quote

arvifan1

@arvifan1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Wow this was awesome, simply mind blowing...
The way u wrote one could actually feel jodha's pain
Very nice please do continue soon 😊
And thank you for the pm 😳