AkDha OS :Confrontation ..(based on Promo)- PART 1 - PAGE 4 (UPDATED) - Page 4

Deepika u r nice writer
each n every word touch my heart
i ws so glad to read the update
thanks fr pm

Wow...
Par excellence writing.
Beautiful and excellent portrayal of Jo's POV...
I really loved it...
Precap is amazing...
Waiting for Jalal's POV...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

Deeps you're back at wooing people with your write ups and how??.
This was something so damn fab..❤️.
I liked the description of the natural surroundings you gave in the beginning of your chapter it was wriiten beautifully..😃.
Even better was the heart to heart talk between Jodha and her inner conscience it was penned down do perfectly I don't have words to convey how much I have loved that section..
I liked how her inner conscience though a part of Jodha remained neglected by her till now but when it made its presence felt it was so overpowering and impactful..❤️.
Jodha finally realized that apart from her husband even she is at mistake for the fact that she had hidden the truth from him and gave him reasons to doubt on her..
I'm waiting to read Jalal's POV now can't wait for it to be posted update soon Deeps will be waiting for it..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..😃.

awesome dipika... beautiful update
well written... and thanks for pm!

Wow very nice!
Update soon! I wish cv's cud show something gud like this!!

wow nice piece of writing
hats off to you for this part
please write next part soon
kash cvs bhi aisa kuch dikhate show me

Nice yrr itzz amazing and how wonderfully u have stated about the nature loved it and continue soon...!

when will u update...
it z long time dera
plz do update asap😭😭😭😭😭