AkDha OS :Confrontation ..(based on Promo)- PART 1 - PAGE 4 (UPDATED) - Page 2

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Hey guys..here is the 1st part of the three shot...its on the current track...few things are different from the show...

1- Jodha is yet to realize her feeling ..she knows she likes and admires him..but she has not termed her feelings as LOVE yet
2- Jalal didnt confess his feelings during the show down scene...he just questioned her and confessed that he always felt she is different from the rest and had faith in her ...

Hope you will like the 1st part 😊This part is dedicated to Bhavini & Nancy...Thank you so much dear for ur help and support..

Thanks Nancy for being so helpful😊both of you are sweethearts 😳


Chapter -1

The hilltop was blushing hard due to her newly found beauty... the new experience of love ...finally the monsoon has arrived ...heaven and earth were exchanging glances through the soft clouds ... like young lovers they embraced each other that magical moment... When sun bid adieu to both of them ...heaven showed its true color ... His first touch...the first rain ...made earth more beautiful... she is now covering herself with a beautiful greenish shawl ... the soft touch of rain drops made her scenic picturesque beauty ... The rain drop were signifying the heaven's love for earth ... Heaven was pouring her with all the love he held for her in his heart and she was cherishing all these moments of togetherness ...

The beauty of nature...the beauty of wonderful feeling called love ...both happen to be masterpieces by the creator ... He is the greatest artist ...his art is amazing and always revolving ...

She thought ...

Love ..happiness ...family ...suddenly all these words seemed meaningless to her...Her heart was still aching due to the monstrous torture it has gone through few hours back..

A beautiful young lady was sitting on a huge rock ... staring at the sky...soft cool breeze was caressing her long open hair ...her face slightly hidden by the intriguing hair strands was looking no less than the moon playing hide n seek with clouds...her big beautiful hazel eyes were slightly moist ...with pleasure of enjoying the first rain or because of the pain of being away from someone close to her heart ...with cool breeze it started drizzling ... Rain drops hugged her nude lips shamelessly ...making their way up to her silky neck...

Due to presence of clouds the number of stars were comparatively less that evening ...but it was serene beauty ...clam...quite...tranquil ...a half moon was peeping through a piece of cloud obstructing its way ... Earth was covered with the silver color blanket of moonlight ...her face was lightened by the cool silver light ...she was looking no less than an angle ...an angel ...who has lost her way home ...

Suddenly the weather turned gloomy ...Heaven started shedding tears with her ... mother earth was trying to console her and soothe her innumerable pain. She has gone through storms of emotion in last few hours...From stupefaction to sorrow to wounded and heartrending pain...After being mum for long hours,finally her hidden emotions were taking form of soft sobs ,heart-aching complaints and countless inquiries arising in her fragile heart.

Shehensha ...shehensha ...humare charitra pe sandeha kaise kar sakte he...humse aise prashn karke unhone humare sambandh pe bhi prashnchinha laga diya he...tears of grief and revilement ran down her face ...dieing on the way to her heart...

Aap ne fir se hume majhdhaar me la kar khada kar diya he Shehensha...ab jabki hum aap ki chinta karne lage the..aap ke liye sache mann se prarthana karne lage the...fir se aap pe vishwas karne lage the...aap ne fir se humare bhavnao ka upahas kiya he ...humare ...humare..."pre"

She suddenly realized what she was saying and stopped abruptly in midway of confessing her feelings towards her husband...whom she claimed to hate few months ago...

"Humara pre.."She was too scared to make her feeling vocal..which had the strength to change her life..her world...her destiny...

Prem...yehi kehna chahti ho na jodha...

A sweet yet sharp voice intrigued her thoughts ...her eyes ran around trying to find the intriguer ...

Shehsha ne tumhare prem pe sandeh kiya he...tumhare hriday ko thes pahunchaya he...hum thik keh rahe he na jodha...

The voice grew louder and sharper with each word...as if it is determined to let out nothing but the truth...

Kaun?? ...kaun bol raha he....her voice filled with anger,fear,confusion...thousands of mixed emotions rising in her heart were getting reflected in her voice...

Moti...tum ho kya...tum yahan kaise aayi...she looked around restlessly and found nothing but thick forest at one side and infinite sky on the other side...

Her question died in the thin air ...just like the beautiful yet ruthless walls of mugal harem even the natural elements were conspiring against her...teasing about her miserableness ...

Hum he jodha...she looked around ...to find her own reflection smiling at her....she was not exactly smiling ..she was smirking ...as if she was making fun of her misery at this moment..

Kaun ho tum...her hazel eyes were shocked to see their mirror image...

Hume nehi pehchana jodha...hum he ...tumhare antar-atma...ya fir tum hume apna hriday hi keh lo...

She gave stress on the word "hriday"...

Jodha tried to look away...trying to hide her feelings from her inner soul...

Kyu itni vyathit ho jodha...itni krodhit kyu ho Shehsha se...

Shehensha na humare charitra pe sandeh kiya...humare chal chalan pe prashn uthaya...humne kabhi nehi socha tha ki unka vishwas hum pe...bas ...bas ek chalawa tha...bas ek dikhawa tha...

shehensha ne aisa kya puch liya jodha...jo Amer ki Rajvanshi rajkumari...mughal saltanat ki Jodha begum niruttar ho gayi... her inner soul taunted her...

wo janna chahte the ki hum ratri ko kis se milne jate he...she answered with much apprehensions ...

Oh...toh tumne unhe sab kuch bata diya na jodha...ki tum kisse milne gayi thi...

She stared at her reflection blankly...

Batao jodha...tumne unhe bata diya na..ki wo kaun tha...

She looked at her reflection with eyes filled with questions and pain...

Nehi...

toh fir shehensha ne tumse koi anuchit prashn toh nehi pucha he na...unhe pura adhikar he ye janne ka ki unki patni...unki begum andhi ratri ko kis se milne jati he..

She didnt have any justification for this...still she argued ...

parantu hum apne sujamal bhai sa se milne gaye the...wo bhi is liye taki hum shehensha ke pran bacha sake ...unke mitra ke bhes me chipe huye shatruon se... she made her concern for her husband as the shield to protect her self-respect...

toh aapne unhe ye bataya ki aap kyu aur kis se milne gaye the...bataiye jodha...her reflection demanded answer...

hum...hum nehi bata paye..hum...vachanbadh the...she seemed helpless in front of her own conscience ...

oh...toh tum shehensha ko ye nehi batana chahti ki tum apne sujamal bhai sa se milne gayi thi..parantu ye avasya chahti ho ki wo tum pe kisi prakar sandeh na kare...

tum unse ye nehi kehna chahti hi tum kis karan itne ratri ko chup chup ke mehel se bahar gyi thi...aur tum chahti ho wo tumne prashn na kare...

tum unse ye bhi nehi kehna chahti ki tumhare mann me unke liye kya bhavnaye he...par tum chahti ho ki wo tum pe aakhen band kar ke vishwas kare...tumhare prem pe vishwas kare...

Her voice became sharper than a knife with each passing moment...

tum unko kuch bhi batana chahti ...aur ye bhi chahti ho ki wo sab kuch swayam hi samajh jaye...

wah jodha...she heard her inner soul applauding for her action..the sound of her claps were mocking Jodha's pride...

Hum batana chahte the unhe...sab kuch..parantu...wo humari baat sunne ke liye bhi prastut nehi the...her eyes became moist again...the sudden hardness which reflected in her hazel eyes turned vulnerable ...

Unhone tumse bahut baar prashn kiya tha Jodha...unhone antim kshan tak tumhare upar viswas rakha...agar unke viswas pe prashn chinh laga he toh keval tumhare karan...her inner-soul said discourteously ...

Parantu...she tried to justify ..

Prantu Kya Jodha...tumne apni bhavnao ko unse chupaya...wo puchte rahe ke kyu tumne unke pran bachane ke liye khud ke pran ki ahuti deni chahi...tum chup rahi...Unke tumhare taraf badh rahe har kadam ko roka...unko hriday ko thes pahunchaya...Tum ratri ko mehel se bahar gayi..bina apne pati ki anumati liye...

Hum keval apne Patni dharm nibha rahe the...apna kartavya palaan kar rahe the...apne pati ke prano par aaye sankat ko talna chah rahe the...she gave explanation for her actions ..

Mana ki tum unke prano ki raksha karna chahti thi ..mana humne ki tumhe unki chinta he..unke pran tumhare liye mulyavan he...sayad sabse jyada mahatva rakhte he wo tumhare liye...her reflection said in a sympathetic tone...trying to make a stubborn young girl understand her own feelings..mirroring her hidden emotions...

Kintu kya is vishay me Shehenshah ko gyan he?Kya wo jante he ki tumhare mann me unke prati kitna aadar he...kya unko is vishay me dharna he ki tumhara hriday prati kshan unke surakhsha ko le kar bichalit rehta he...

Jodha was speechless...she didnt have any answer to these questions...she never analyzed things from HIS point of view...

Socho Jodha...in prashno ke uttar hume nehi apne apko do...aur ho sake toh ...Shehensha ko bhi...

Hum ..hum...she was dumbfounded ...and tried to look at question maker...

All she could find around her was silence and questions..

Her doe-like eyes reflected countless confusions..doubts...questions ...Only questions...the answer to her infinite questions was trying find few answers for his own set of queries...far from the jungle ...HE was sitting in his room at Agra fort ...

Two hearts were trying restlessly to find answers to some questions...ONE HEART started realizing the depth of the feelings it had for HIM...OTHER HEART was still bleeding profusely ...questioning HIS own merciless actions against HER..their answers had the power to change their lives...their future...their destiny ...and the HISTORY ...

PRECAP - Jalal POV😳

hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment...let me know if you want me to continue ... i will wait for your comments and feedback

Have questions or doubts about what is happening and where is Jodha and where is Jalal ??..hope you will get the answers in next part😳

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Deepika... Vow U R an amazing writer... Really Every Single line of this os touched my heart... Your writing not only impress me...also mesmerized me...Jodha's pain is really terrible... The way you pen down her emotion just perfect... I hope that happen in serial too... I have not much hopes from cvs...any way... I have read many novels but I have not read description of Nature like this... Just Amazing ... Superb... Deepika IT IS AN HONOR... You have dedicated this OS to me and Nanu... OMG!!! U R so sweet heart... U R SUPER WRITER... AMAZING!!!! MIND BLOWING WRITER... My mind freeze after reading this master piece... Please start FF from beginning of the story... Why OS ... Make it to SS... 👏👏👏👏👏

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Wow!
It was cute one!
Kaash aaj aisa hi confrontation dekhne milta!
Can't wait for Jalal ka POV!
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Wow!!! This is just wonderful... I got ur pm now.. I m in cllg ryt now... Commenting from mob... Loved it... Unable to hit like coz mob se reading... But will commnt in detail and like it as soon as I log in from lappy...

Thnk u so much fr dedicating this to me n bhavi di... Youare such a darling...

Awesome update, Deepika.