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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Wow amazing luv it
Taarey together yupie

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Bloodwow yr, sounds interestingprolouge is just simply awesomecontinue nd update soonthanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: Rabertmona

superb concept dear 👏
its seems interasting😊
eagerly waiting for the update😉
plzz continue soon and pm me⭐️

Originally posted by: love_taarey
awesome yr
superb concept
really looking forward to this one yr
continue soon
n do pm me😊

Originally posted by: skfirdous
intresting concept
update soon
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Originally posted by: khyati2000
your concept is juzz amazing...
but tragedy????? what is the tragedy and blood?
pls pls pls update soon

Originally posted by: Humairaa
Awsm concept
Update soon

Thnxxx all...
will update soon and send PM's...
Blood and tragedy will soon make sense 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

"Taani,you know na,I am the most impatient creature in the world",he talked into the phone,pacing around his bike.
"Hey Mr.Singhania,wait ,wait,dont be impatient...I'll be down in 5"she said hanging up.Applying a final touch of lip gloss,she ran down to her impatient boyfriend.
"See,just as you wanted ...I am in casuals,but where are we going at seven in the morning"
"Wait,baby ...everything will make sense"he said zooming off on his bike,taani clinging to him.Oh,how he loved her touch,how he longed for her.

Here,Swayam reaches home,in mumbai.He decided to surprise his sister the day before,but his god damned work.After spending three years in different parts of the country,the previous night in a very uncomfortable cabin in the headquarters,he was finally at a place which he could call HOME...
Ting-tong went the bell and the servant,fondly known as Kaka
came to the door...
'Swayam baba,aap yahaan..." He said ,surprised to see swayam back at home...
Swayam took his blessings and asked,"Kaka,taani?"
"Taani baby to Rey baba ke saath subah saat baje hi chali gayi"
"Rey?"
"Ji,Reyaansh...baby ke acche dost hain,par mujhe kuch zyada dikhta hai"
"Kya kaka,kuch bhi",swayam said,walking towards his long lost room...
"Reyaansh?"

"Taani,I want this date of ours to be different,I want that this date,instead of being the mushy mushy one,becomes the one where we come to know each other.Where we become friends with the one we love,Are you with me? ",he asked extending his hand
She gve her hand into his."For friendship" they said in unison,standing against the backdrop of an amusement park.

Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave.
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere...

"That will be scary..."
"Taani,I am here,dont worry. We'll have fun,now come on",he said literally dragging her

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tainu takda rawaan...

The ride was scary indeed,but one glimpse of hers could vanish all the fright.
She was screaming,clinging to him,tears started to make their way down her eyes and it was a long time before the ride would end.
"Look at me Taani",he said ,starting to make silly faces and tickling hee a bit,making her laugh"

Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di
Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di

"I want that candy floss"
"Taani,it isn't good for your,you know,teeth"
"Shut up Rey..."

Eating the candy floss,she kept on dancing around ,blabbering about her school days when she used to stealthily have the forbidden candy floss.
And he,he was busy admiring the once-again-bubbly side of hers

Ae to nazraan nazraan di gal ve
Tu vi sun le zaraa
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa rehna kol tere...

"What happened to your hand? ",she asked,shocked seeing blood oozing out
"Wo.."
Without letting him complete,she sucked the blood,blew over his wound and tied a handkerchief round it
"Just because I am there to nurse your wounds,doesn't mean you will always get hurt"

Tainu takdi rawaan
Naina 'ch tere main vasdi ravaan
Paagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan

Dancing in the Dance Fountain,with a lot more people,thy kept on stealing glances at each other
Sometimes praising,sometimes teasing

Ishq duaavan jaane kab aave
Ishq duaavan aave jab aave
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main taa baitha kol tere...

Sitting in a corner of a garden,the sunset adding to the beauty,they were eating ice-cream.
Taani told him about the days she spent in Jodhpur,her life,her story.
Rey didnt have to tell anything,she knew him inside out.

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tenu takda ravan (x2)

"Taani..wo..",he said pointing towards her lips where some ice-cream was stuck.
"Here?",she asked
"No,may I?",he asked extending his hand towards her lips.
The awkwardness had suddenly come out of nowhere.
After a day of knowing each other and laughter sessions,desires were taking root.
Rey rubbed of the ice cream,but instead of removing his hand,he was staring at her.
A shade of crimson red was adorning her cheeks.
The distance between them decreased,as she closed her eyes.
After a small war between his heart and brain,he placed his lips on hers,softly pouring out his love.
The sun went down,embarrased to see two lovers,all alone ,kissing each other.
The sun had witnessed much more passionate things,but there was something about these two...

"Taani still isn't back.Wierd",Swayam thought pacing around his room,when the doorbell went...
"Taani where were...YOU,What are you doing here Ms.Rai prakash?",he said shocked seeing Sharon at the door.
"I am not at all interested in visiting you,but comissioner sir,wants 'us' to work on a case,and he wants it tommorow.Without thinking of anything else,he asked me to go over to your place,and do research work overnight.Now,may I come in"
"Oh..ok..ya,sure"
"You stay here alone? "
"No,actually ,my sister does,but she's out somewhere"
"Okay"
"You'll have something?"
"Na.."

"So,lets get to work.",she said,moving ahead.Not much aware of the house,she turned,and tripped over an artifact,and landed over Swayam...
Getting lost into each other was the only thing they could do..
"Oops,Sorry",she said,trying to get up,but unfortunately or fortunately,she tripped again...
They got mesmerised by each other yet again...
When the awkwardness reached its peak Swayam said,"Clumpsy girl..."
"Ya whate.."
She was going to reply when they heard someone who was shocked seing the happenings in front of her eye.
"Bhai?"

Hey guys...Real sorry I know me is very late,But I've got reasons,
Exams+Shreya ditched me on the story leaving me all alone+My fellow ATers know how much busy I was 🤣

Okay ,Jokes apart ...me is real late,i know...showwy...

This update is for Menka di (kapoormenka) , Affi di (GlamorousPearl) and Sonia di (Anysia)
Menka di as she has practically blackmailed me for updates...
Affi di as her belated b'day gift...
And sonia di has the craziest reason..
She once gave me dare to write an OS on A TaaRey date on the song Ishq Bulaava...
What I did was merge the two...🤣
*showwy*
Now,coming to the update...I know it had too much of TR and less of SS
but,I've got a reason...and this is the last happy-happy update for a long time...
coz the precap..

Precap: The Day Of Blood

Pls like and comment...
BTW,did anyone notice tgat I've changed a lot in my writing style..please if I should continue this way...
P.S-For,PM's buddy me

Love ya all,
Sanyu

Edited by ...Sanyukta... - 11 years ago

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Aiman

@princess_tara

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

awesome update
luv taarey cute moments
they were really awesome n beautifully written
luv song selection
swayam was shocked to see sharon 😆
eagerly waiting for next update
update it soon