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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Awww... that was sooo sad ...

AsYa together but not ...

Poor Zoya ... and poor Asad too !

Plz ... get them together again ... soon ... make them talk to each other !

Awesome writing Shelly ... waiting for the next part !

Thanks for the PM ... 😊

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: rusha4003
Awww... that was sooo sad ...

AsYa together but not ...

Poor Zoya ... and poor Asad too !

Plz ... get them together again ... soon ... make them talk to each other !

Awesome writing Shelly ... waiting for the next part !

Thanks for the PM ... 😊

I know Usha, I ended it on a sad note. Both Asad and Zoya needed the love/passion and the fight.

My plan was to end the story in chapter but when I started to type it ... it just became too long. I thought might as leave it I on a cliff hanger. 😆

You know me I can't keep them separated.

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5he11y

@5he11y

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Loved this update.

PLEASE continue

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Oh, wow.. This was just amazing. I know you made us wait a long for this update. But, it was fruitful. The update was just fabulous. This was an epic confrontation. Zoya and her reaction to what happened between them and then Asad , I have actually wanted him to leave his rational side for once. Stop using his brain and think and listen to his heart. And, work according to what his heart says. When QH begun their were rumors that Zoya would marry Ayaan someday although it will not happen now the way the track is going but still back then looking and analyzing Asad's character I knew if she marries his brother he'll never listen to his heart and always think about his brother.

But, the way Asad reacted in this chapter. You made my dream come true. Finally, he bought Zoya to his utter most priority. He actually asked her to take divorce and run away with him. Did I actually except this from asad , then the answer is yes.. But I din't ever thought he'll ever do this.. I loved the update.

Please do continue soon!!!

Dee

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@ShellJA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Oh, wow.. This was just amazing. I know you made us wait a long for this update. But, it was fruitful. The update was just fabulous. This was an epic confrontation. Zoya and her reaction to what happened between them and then Asad , I have actually wanted him to leave his rational side for once. Stop using his brain and think and listen to his heart. And, work according to what his heart says. When QH begun their were rumors that Zoya would marry Ayaan someday although it will not happen now the way the track is going but still back then looking and analyzing Asad's character I knew if she marries his brother he'll never listen to his heart and always think about his brother.

But, the way Asad reacted in this chapter. You made my dream come true. Finally, he bought Zoya to his utter most priority. He actually asked her to take divorce and run away with him. Did I actually except this from asad , then the answer is yes.. But I din't ever thought he'll ever do this.. I loved the update.

Please do continue soon!!!

Dee

Thanks Dee,

I really appreciated your feedback and kind words. His reaction is all about how I would want him or any lover to react after spending a night together. I know the TV Asad would never do it for him it is all about family, his mom, Najma and Ayaan. And I find on Tv they make the characters so one dimensional and men or people just are not.

I will try to write the last part very soon. I know I spent too long on this chapter.

Thanks again.

Shell