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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Guys,

Mein agayi hoon phir se meri os se tum sab ko pakane ke liye.

This os is partly based on one of my favourite stories.

Firstly, I will introduce the characters.

Varun Rastogi:Panchi's father.He is a business tycoon and loves his one and only daughter Panchi.

Swati Rastogi:Panchi's mother.She is very sweet and kind-hearted woman.She loves her daughter so much.

Panchi Rastogi:She is sweet,beautiful and obedient.She loves her younger sister Payal and shares everything with her.

Payal Rastogi:Panchi's cousin sister.She loves her elder sister very much.

Samrat Shergill:He is working as a lecturer in a college.He loves his son Ranveer.

Hema Shergill:She is beautiful and sweet woman.She loves her son a lot.

Ranveer Shergill:He is handsome and values friendship so much.

Varun and Swati are busy searching for a suitable match for their daughter Panchi.They want her to get married to a guy who is well-settled,handsome,kind-hearted and most importantly loves their daughter so much and take good care of her.After going through the profiles of many eligible bachelors,they finalize her marriage to a software professional from USA.They think that the guy is a perfect match for Panchi.

Panchi is in her room getting ready for her engagement-ceremony.She is quite nervous because she is going to get engaged to a guy whom she doesn't even know Properly.She agreed to it just because its her parents choice and she knows very well that whatever her parents do its for her good.Everyone in Panchi's house are busy making arrangements for the engagement.When Panchi's father is Standing outside the house waiting for the grooms family,who is to arrive from Airport,He sees a handsome man getting down from a taxi.When that guy approaches him and greets him Varun enquires who he was.That guy says he is Samrat's son Ranveer who came from delhi to attend his daughter's engagement ceremony.As, his father was unable to come due to some important work he sent him to attend the ceremony on his behalf.When Varun comes to know that Ranveer is his childhood friend Samrat's son,he becomes very happy.He takes him inside the house and introduces him to his family members.He orders his servant to keep Ranveer's luggage in the guest room and tells Ranveer to get fresh-up and come down to attend the ceremony.After sometime,when Ranveer comes out of the washroom he sees a boy playing with his cell-phone.When he approaches him to take his cellphone that boy runs away and hides in a room.While searching for the boy he opens the door of a room suddenly.He sees a girl who is looking godgeous in red ghaghra and the ornaments.He is awe-struck at her beauty.He fell in love with her at first sight.He is staring at her continuously without even blinking his eyes.When Panchi sees him she shouts at him for entering her room without her permission.He says sorry to her and goes out of her room.After that he goes down and Varun introduces him to the Grooms family.Then Panchi arrives and after that the engagement ceremony begins.Both, the families decide to get the two married after 6 months.After all the talks regarding the marriage get completed,the grooms family returns back to US.Then Varun introduces Ranveer to Panchi.

Next day,when Ranveer was about to go back to Delhi, Varun stops him and offers him a job in his company. Ranveer denies the offer thinking that Varun is offering him the job because of his friendship with his father.Varun understands Ranveer's point of view and assures him that he is offering him this job seeing his intelligence not because of his friendship with his father.He knows that Ranveer was the topper of the college and also a basketball champion.Ranveer finally joins Varun's office and starts working very hard.Varun becomes very happy seeing his dedication towards his work.

The Relationship between Ranveer and Panchi starts with hatred and turns into friendship.They become close friends and unknowingly they both fall in love with each other.One day,Ranveer and Panchi goes to Mall with Payal.When Panchi and Payal are busy in shopping, Ranveer starts flirting with a girl.Panchi gets angry seeing this.She confronts Ranveer and tells him to be away from girls as it irks her when she sees him with any other girl.Ranveer asks"Agar mein kisi bhi ladki ko dekhu to tu itna badak kyun jati ho?"He says that he don't understand why she is having a problem if he moves close with any other girl.Panchi gets frustrated and says"haan mujhe problem hain agar tum kisi bhi ladki ke kareeb jaate ho na mujhe accha nahi lagta hain,kyunki mein tumse pyaar karti hoon."She says this and runs away from there because she herself is confused what she said few minutes back.Payal is shocked to hear this and goes away from there.After Panchi and Payal go away from there,Ranveer was standing there with a shocked expressin on his face.He was shocked to hear that Panchi loves him.He was unable to understand whether to be happy that Panchi loves him or sad because she is already engaged.At the moment Panchi confessed him he also wanted to confess her his feelings but something stopped him from doing so.That is,Samrat and Varun's friendship and the reputation of Panchi's family.Before coming to Mumbai Ranveer's father told him never to do any such thing which would affect his friendship with Varun and spoil the reputation of their families.So,he decides to go back to delhi.

Panchi is in her room crying and cursing herself for loving Ranveer.She is feeling guilty for falling in love after getting engaged to Akash(that software professional from USA).Payal says that it's not her fault.She tries to convince her sister to tell this to her uncle but in vain.Panchi takes promise from Payal not to tell anybody about this.She decides to forget Ranveer and marry Akash.The demure Panchi is in shattered mood as Ranveer went back to Delhi without even meeting her.When Varun calls Ranveer and asks him why he went back to Delhi,Ranveer tells that he got some important work in Delhi and will return back after few days.After the call ,Ranveer thinks to himself that Panchi is going to get married within few days.Once she gets married and goes away to USA,he can return back to Mumbai.Thinking of Panchi's marriage a lone tear escapes from his eyes.After sometime tears start flowing continuously and he was unable to control himself.After few days Samrat and Hema understand that something is wrong with Ranveer.They observed this change in him since the day he returned back from Mumbai.They confront Ranveer and Ranveer assures them that nothing is wrong.But Samrat and Hema are not convinced.

Meanwhile in Mumbai,Panchi's marriage Preparations are on full-swing.The more Panchi is trying to forget Ranveer the more she is remembering the moments spent with him.Finally,the day of marriage arrives and when Panchi was getting ready she heard some loud noices coming down from the hall.She went down to see what happened.She was shocked to see Police dragging away the grooms family.She learnt from Payal that the grooms family is a fraud and they are not from USA and that the groom is already married.Panchi's Parents thank one of their guests who told them the truth of grooms family being fraud.They are happy that they came to know the reality before marriage.Panchi is devastated to know the truth of Akash and his family.But she is also happy that she did not get married to him as she loves Ranveer.Payal thinks to unite Panchi and Ranveer.She goes to her uncle and tells him that Panchi loves Ranveer.When Varun confronts Panchi,she tells him that she indeed loves Ranveer.

Varun catches the next flight and reaches Delhi.Ranveer is shocked to see him and questions him"uncle aap yahan kya kar rahe ho,Aaj to Panchi ki shaadi hain na."Samrat tells him that the wedding is cancelled as the grooms family is a fraud.Ranveer and his family gets shocked hearing this.Varun says Ranveer "beta mein ek baat puchta hoon,mujhe sach sach jawab dena."Ranveer tells haan puchiye uncle.Varun asks kya tum Panchi se pyaar karte ho.Ranveer hesitatingly answers that he loves Panchi.Ranveer tells Varun that maine aaj tak eh baat Panchi ko bhi nahi bataye.Aap ko isiliye bata raha hoon kyun ki mujhe jhoot bolna pasand nahi hain.Samrat understands that his son hid his love for the sake of his friendship.He was proud that his son even didn't hesitate to sacrifice his love for the sake of his and varun's friendship.He is happy that his son values friendship so much.Samrat says Ranveer that the one who values the friendship can only understand the true meaning of Love and he can guarantee that his son will be proved as the best husband in future.

Varun asks Samrat and Hema" kya aap meri beti ko apne bahu banane ke liye tayar hain."They happily agree and all go to Mumbai.Panchi was sitting in her room thinking of Ranveer and cherishing the moments that she spent with him.Suddenly,she hears a knock on the door and she opens it.Payal comes in and says that"Didi bahar garden mein koi apka wait kar raha hain,woh bol raha hain ki woh aapke dost hain."Ranveer was in the garden with a mask on his face.Panchi goes there and asks"kaun ho tum,Payal ne kaha ki tum mujhse milna chahte ho,par mein tumhe nahi jaanti hoon."After saying that when she was about to go ,Ranveer catches hold of her hand.She becomes angry and shouts "tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe choone ki."When she raises her hand to slap him Ranveer removes his mask and says" Panchi ,mein hoon Ranveer maarna mat."She becomes happy seeing him and out of excitement she hugs him.After they break the hug,Ranveer says Panchi I have a surprise for u.You stay here,I will come within few minutes.Ranveer brings his guitar and says Panchi I want to dedicate a song to you.This is for u and winks at Panchi and starts singing.

"Pehli nazar mein kaisa jaado kar diya,

tera ban baitha mera jiya

Jaane kya hoga,kya hoga kya pata is pal ko milke aa jee le zara.

Mein hoon yahan,tu hai yahan meri bahon mein aa Aa bhi ja.

O-jaan-e-jaan dono jahan meri bahon mein aa bhool jaaa.

Baby I love u,Baby I love u,baby I love you,I love you so much."

While Ranveer was singing the song Panchi was staring at him continuously.He was looking damn hot in that white shirt,jeans pant and with a guitar in his hand.After Ranveer finished singing he went to Panchi and knelt down and asked"kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?"Panchi replies yes and Ranveer slips a ring on her finger.After that they both go into her house.Panchi is surprised to see Ranveer's Parents.She goes to them and take their blessings.Ranveer's mother says to Varun and swati that"Apki beti bahut pyaari hain."She says to Panchi jaldi se mere bete se shaadi karke meri bahu ban jao.Panchi smiles shyly and goes away from there.Payal becomes very happy that finally her sister is going to get married to the person whom she loves.Both the families fix their marriage date.On their wedding day,when all the ladies were in Panchi's room making her ready for the wedding.Payal goes there and says "aap sab log neeche jaayiye mein didi ki madad karti hoon tayar hone mein."After everybody goes away Payal says to Panchi "didi mein do minute mein aati hun mujhe kuch kaam hain ."and she goes out of the room. Ranveer was standing outside the room and Payal tells him"Raasta clear hain.Didi room mein akeli hain.Aapko jo baat karni hain jaldi se kijiye mein yahi bahar rukti hun taaki koi aye toh mein apko savdhaan karoongi."Ranveer thanks Payal and enters Panchi's room.When Panchi was in her room struggling to tie the knot of her Ghaghra,Ranveer catches hold of her hand and he reaches out to the knot and ties it.Panchi gets shocked seeing Ranveer and moves away from him and asks"tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho kisine dekh liya toh hungama ho jayega."Ranveer says hone do and starts moving towards her.As he was moving forward Panchi was stepping backward.They reach the wall and when she was about to escape Ranveer puts his hands on either sides of the wall so that she couldn't escape.Panchi says Ranveer koi aa jayega.Ranveer says aane do.She says koi dekh lega. Ranveer says dekhne do.When she was about to say something Ranveer moves very close to her that their faces are inches apart.They can clearly hear their heartbeats.Then suddenly he puts his lips on her soft lips and kisses her gently.She also responds to the kiss with the same passion.They kiss each other for a while and after that Ranveer goes out of the room.After getting ready Ranveer and Panchi go down to the hall and take the nuptial vows.They seek blessings of their elders and happily live ever after.

*THE END*

LOTS OF LOVE.

PRIYA.

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Rahi1818 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy. I am the first to comment... Hurray..
So comin back to the OS... I loved it loved it and loved it a lot.
This was brilliant. You are a fab writer. Loved the story specially bcoz Rahi define frndship and their frndship defines love. Loved the proposal and the last kiss scene. Hayye kitne achche lagte hai dono sath mein. Made for each other. Loved the story.
Do write more...
Loads of love and thanx for giving such a beautiful os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankyou sooo much Anjali.
I am glad that u liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Priya
wow just love the OS dear
beautiful concept
and u portrayed it so beautifully
RaHi are awesome as always
Do write more
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was so perfect!
I loved each and everything about it!
Wow yaar ! 😆
You are an amazing writer!
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing and perfect,⭐️
At last Moti sirf nonu ki hai...😃
loved it😳

smriti
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey priya 😃
its amazing
it's like a fairy tale
Prince and Princess fall in love with each other
Then some problems
but atlast pyaar ki jeet hoti hai
and they lived happily ever after hayeee
loved it priya
keep writing

luv u
Ishita
Edited by MyLifeMyRulz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya...lovely girl...
Kya mast mast story likhi hai...m all imagining it...

Panchi so in love that she doesn't care about the whole damn world is so exciting
N nonu toh out of the world hai...love the way he cared for the friendship of the families at stake even though he was blown in by panchi's beauty n charm...hayeee... respect for him dude..yeh banda toh perfect hai...

The story building up was well planned n last moment par shaadi rukwa di tune...kya mast idea tha...😃...
N then the rahi marriage track though out of the world hai hi... hayee yeh dono kya lagenge as husband n wife...
N that kiss was a bonus sweetie...n the way u described it toh double bonus tha...love ya for it...so wanna see one on the show...

In short,,, paisa vasool os tha...lovely
Thanks so much priya...
Lots f love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww this is so good Priya! Loved it, and the last part! Hayee<3 write more dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesm OS dear...
Just loved it 😳
I'm nt a big rahi fan... bt all u guys write so well k raha hi ni jata 😃
Amazing u r 👏
Cont. Writing
Edited by luv_u_Bharti - 11 years ago

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