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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Pooja !! First of all... Sorry for late comments...I wanted to read leisurely but could not find time for that as last week was too hectic & disconnected me from IF due to hell lot of guests & a repair cell phone !! Good to hear that u are fine !! Take care !! 😊
PART 34
WOW.. Maaneet interaction was sooo cute !!! Geet is really adorable !! 😳 Dadi & annie are gonna help Maaneet !!?? Yayiiee !! Atleast they have some good people to support !! ⭐️ But with people like Ranjith , Sk , Aarthi , Vid,etc.. arrrgghhh 😡 I don't know what is gonna happened !!!
Holi celebration will be exciting !!! Let's see what good the festival bring for our Maaneet !! 😉 Gonna read part 35 now !!
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So.. The shopping spree plan was a success for Dadi-Anie duo !!! 👍🏼 Geet's cribbing was very funny !!! 😆 Poor she had fever & inspite of that had to do this much cribbing !! 🤣 Maaneet selecting dress together was sooo dreamy !!! hayyyeee...marjawan !!!! And their final hug !!! Even Arjun witnessed it !! ☺️ And they worry about each other's feelings when all people around them know about their relation !! 😈 Geet blabbered about the GIRL with Maan & he got the point right on time !! Way to go Maan !! Hoping atleast now Geet will confide him with her thoughts !!! Loved the updates Pooja !! Waiting for a colorful Holi update !!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 35
nice part...
so Maan has no idea what is troubling Geet...
and Maan is not liking at all...
but the care and love was so beautiful...
and Daadima is also happy...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
m not getting how come geet taking their bond as a friend? yaar kaun se friends iss tarah se kiss karte.. no doubt geet unique hai yaha😆😆😆
hope maan got to know what his father is upto & y geet was saying all that to him
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hello all updating any one waiting??????
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Ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hain.. waiting waiting..😛 par koi gadbad toh nahi hain na..? warana nend nahi ayegi mujhe..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hain.. waiting waiting..😛 par koi gadbad toh nahi hain na..? warana nend nahi ayegi mujhe..😛


😆 i hope u got good sleep last night 😛 as i have'n updated the part na 😆😆
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SDdd double updates enjoy thats why delay 😆😉
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Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle



SDdd double updates enjoy thats why delay😆😉

wow
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Posted: 11 years ago


ADHOORI ZINDAGI



New banner again by priya111111




thank you soo much di


@ cutie teju
😆 is there any need to confess still me wondering
maaneer are not bidhu here you are such a budhu 😛😉
@ priya-11111 and rosmita
geet will talk to him soon about aarthi and this will be so cute and sweet 😆😉
@ jaan
your comment i was ☺️ dont praise me that much ok 😉
@manshi
yes its high time they will clear soo soon may be in two updates only
i hope ur enjoying maanee journey now. u know keeping in mind about u i am typing updates now a days 😳
@idunno
pari secret yes it will come out very soon
wow you here thanks for reading all parts again happy to see u back

@ nivededita
hey how ru i am looking for comments here late latif 😆 happy to see u back re
@ Impooja verma
hey you did your exams were finished?? yes geet is unique piece here
@ vicks
dont worry for late comments i am happy you are back now





PART 36

@ Hanishadevi


(THIS UPDATE IS FOR YOU

this time update was 4500 woords 😆😉 so updating in two parts

thanks u soo much for answering my question)



When they were making their way out from mall maan dragged her to the lonely corner. Dadi and aniee already left from there but arjun eyes caught this. He hugged her tight not giving second for her to control her marathon heart beat because of sudden pull. He felt so calm from morning his heart is not at peace. Only because of her he got peace and he is feeling happy even. She didn't reciprocated the hug let him do whatever he wants. Is it possible when all she wanted is his one smoothening hug?. She gave up reciprocated his hug hiding her face in crook of his neck.

"Geet it's quite late today go home and take rest" he said taking her palm in his messaging it sensually. She opened her mouth to say something his voice interrupted "I will call you promise". She smiled big at him he left from there giving quick peck on her lips making her blush.
She stood there totally mesmerized with this new feel pecks and kisses became so common for both of them both didn't realized that even. She ran away from their holding her over enthusiastic heart met with aniee and dadi who are waiting for her at parking lot. Maan is in driving seat looking at her glowing face lovingly. She dare to look at him left in her car feeling so happy. Maan heart jumped in joy to look her like that with content he also left from there.

"Not bad planning without me but arjun got what is going on around" aniee stared at her mobile reading arjun's message. Showed it to dadi who is looking at her so curiously "Must say he is so clever" dadi praised arjun's mind. Maan choose to ignore their silent murmurs. "Ha so clever my foot he will understand everything so easily except my things" aniee cribbed silently in her heart annoyed with his ignorance.
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Next day at KM all got busy in checking final preparations total house decorated like new bride. They held everything at back side of KM arranged small stage for dance etc. Ranjith ordered for natural colors they used different flowers to prepare colors along with that they arranged normal colors as well. Naina and dadi got busy in kitchen secession. The whole idea of celebrating holi is naina's she wants to celebrate this holi with her son maan. From past years she missed celebrating holi with him this time she don't want to miss this opportunity.

"Dadi where is maan bhai I haven't saw him from morning?" dev questioned after searching for him in every possible place of KM.
"You are asking me? Knowing about him he will be busy with files at office today also" naina cribbed felling irritated for his absence. All laughed at her condition

"I want to apply color first on maan bhai" aniee shouted coming in to kitchen while eating sweets in full mouth.

"No way this time I will do that veer ji won't be able to escape from me haina pati dev ji" meera nudged dev looked at her with dreamy look for her pati dev word.


"Excuse me wo meri beta hai I will do that honors this year I will apply first" naina announced making all chuckle for her possessiveness.
The fight goes on until dadi interrupted them "it's final I will apply on him wait and watch." Dadi added up in their game. All dispersed from there giving challenging looks got busy in their own guests.


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"Finally Mr.MSK I got your pics I thought this geet good for nothing but see today because of her I am able to get what I have dreamed off. The final blow then I will get hold of Khurana's shares easily" SK said laughed like manic. Her laugh echoed in her empty room the furniture, decorated walls are witnesses of her evil plan. She glanced at geet who is getting ready for holi. Giving one quick glance at geet left from there thinking about her plan.


Geet checked herself in the mirror for nth time after taking bath ruffling her hair with towel. There is no special make up her red cheeks making her look so pretty. She even haven't kept any extra accessories even still she is looking out of world. She consciously looked around feeling his gauze on her. There he stood with crossed arms leaning on wall looking at her intently. His vision is very clear at mirror she checked him from top to bottom he is looking out of world as usual. She blushed with his intense gauze on her looked away unable to look at him.


He paddle up to her stood beside her she again looked at his vision on mirror he complimented her through his eyes. Taking waist chain from side table he makes her wear that. Her body burned with flames with his direct contact of palms on her naked waist. Grabbing her bindi he did the same all the time she blushed when ever his hands touched her warm skin. The sound of her bangles filled in room breaking the silence when he makes her wear them. He kneeled in front of her makes her wear payals. Her toys curled with new feel he is filling inside her. She backed away when he leaned on her to kiss her.


"Oochh" geet shouted when she fell from chair hurting her ass. Her dream broke with the sudden disturbance. "Jalli" she cursed herself cutely hitting her head with her hand.
Oh she is dreaming about him at day also "Raath kami hogaye kya ab day dreaming bhi. Uff kya hua tuje geet" she cursed herself for her stupidity.

Suddenly her face last her color as aarthi face came in to her mind like some flash. She realized she is GK as SK face came in to her vision when she saw her mom portrait. Shockingly she is not crying today but some un known happiness surrounded her heart. Her past faded away with the happiness she is holing right now. Still aarthi issue eating her mind she decided to talk with him.

Wait what she will ask him when she herself un known for what she is feeling sad. Ohh it is killing her mind she in in total mess right now. Her heart dancing on its own rhythm thinking about him while her mind refusing anything. "Oh geet you lost it what happened to you today" she murmured staring at her reflection which is looking like some new bride. Pushing her all thoughts aside she started getting ready picking up all those accessories she saw in her imagination few minutes back. Her heart saying he will love all those things if she wears them.


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"Sir what you are saying how can I come with you forget it" Ritzy shouted at Amy making annoying face. Mansee looked at each other placing her head on table like it is some interesting cartoon film.
Ritzy stared at amy in dis belief she as usual came to KH today from the sec she entered he is back of her with his constant pleads. How she can accompany him to KM holi party did he gone nuts? She wondered. "Miss ritzy you very well know why I am asking you don't pretend like you don't know" amy said winking at her. Ritzy looked away she very well know about what he is hinting.

"You are coming with me" amy stated as final note. "No" ritzy instant reply came from her mouth. "Yes" "No" game continued for almost five minutes. Mansee got excited with their fight clapped her hands looking at ritzy.
"Excuse me sir I have some works here I am done with manse routine check up so let me go now" irritated ritzy said started taking her belongings.
Amy grabbed her wrist both lost their balance landed on bed with ritzy top of Amy.

"See ritzy you cont win over me then stop this nautanki" amy told in her ears huskily. Mansee stared at both started clapping her hands again as maan used to play with her making her lay on him. Poor child thought amy doing the same with her not knowing his naughty thoughts. Amy rubbed ritzy arms sensually taking this golden opportunity.

"Get a room guys don't spoil my girl friend like this" both heard familiar voice there maan sat beside manse closing his eyes with one hand while closing mansee eyes with other hand. Amy cursed for his timing while ritzy got fully embarrassed stood beside maan hanging her head down.
"Now stop your drama yaha kuch hua bhi nahi hai spoiler kahin ka" amy cursed maan for his sudden entry. Ritzy glared at him for his big mouth ohh she wants to run away from there.
"Don't be desperate amy I came here to meet my love my girl friend only. My intensions were not to spoil your romance" maan said innocently. He got such a awesome opportunity how he can leave this. He still remembers how many times amy teased him with his tagging girl friends.
"Will you please tell me why you came here itni subah subah" amy changed the topic.

"Because..." maan paused took mansee in his hands kissed her both cheeks "Happy holi pari" maan whispered applying color on her cheeks. "Maa maa" mansee shouted showing her hand to maan as color fell there while maan applying to her.
"Oh pari no no" maan shouted when mansee kept her hands applying color on his whole face. He had some other plans first he wants to apply color on pari then only geet. He wants to be the first one to apply color on geet same should go on with her he even left home early for his goal to work on. Mansee spoiled that but mansee one innocent smile is enough to lighten his mood. For this little pari he will do anything. He came here to meet mansee as it's been many days he met her. While passing through market he got idea for his content his little princess is happy.

"Maan you spoiled my plan I want to apply color first on my girl friend. Hogaya now will you give chance to your friend also?" amy questioned with pouting face making maan chuckle. "No way dare to do that" Maan warned him amy ignored making mental note on his mind to fulfill his wish.
"Ritzy you have to come with me now not for this idiot at least for me please" Maan asked ritzy genuinely. Amy frowned at his remark maan simply ignored his heating gauze on him. Ritzy was reluctant at last she accepted "Princess Victoria is coming to party let's celebrate then" Amy announced maan glared at him.
"Ok ok cool baba Miss.Ritzy do wear this one" Amy handled her cover dashed out from there ignoring maan's naughty look.
Maan said nothing in-between them he is happy for his friends choice of girl.

"Ritzy trust me he is not that much bad" maan told. "Sir don't you want to take your girl friend with you?" ritzy questioned escaping maan's advise.

"Oh no way dean warned me nth time don't take her out he is such a heartless person" maan mouthed hugging mansee close to his heart. Ritzy given helpless look to him in matter of mansee no one makes dean change his decision.

"Sir Wait here I will be back then we will leave together" ritzy makes her way out informing maan. He started playing with his little girl friend both had gala time.


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"Where is he now?" geet murmured searching for him in crowd. Her eyes started searching for his one glimpse after she stepped down from car. Dole sound and music was so loud all were busy in playing holi. She hided herself at corner when ever she saw aniee or dadi. She don't want anyone to apply color on her before him. She is dyeing to see his appreciative look for her attire. Many eyes were already on her but she is waiting only for his one look.
All splashing water colors on one another aniee and arjun dancing on stage. Dev and meera got busy in spoiling there performance by throwing water on them. She restlessly searches for him chup chup ke.
Aniee eyes caught her standing at corner searching for someone she smiled naughtily.


She stamped her foot on arjun's feet he fell on stage dev announced his sister won the challenge. "Arjun idiot ye tum kya kiya ab hum ko uski har bath manna padega Grr don't know this time with what wishes they will come up" Meera cribbed throwing balloons filled with colored water at him.

"Sis listen to me please she cheated us aniee you are gone in my hands such a cheater you are" arjun chased aniee who is going towards geet.
Geet saw them with widen eyes aniee's hands and dress fully socked with water. She started walking fast to get away from this devil chutki. Aniee dumped arjun wisely again ran behind geet carrying many balloons in her hand. Geet's heavy lehenga not helping her to run fast still she managed to run with slow pace.

"No chutki don't do that" geet shouted looking behind running with increasing pace.


"No way such a good opportunity I got today how can I miss that" aniee smiled wickedly. Geet cursed aniee under her breathe continued with her running. All were busy in their own celebrations even Ranjith enjoying his time with his own close friend, he is now and then looking at entrance for maan's arrival also for aarthi.
Suddenly geet dashed with someone lost her balance she closed her eyes confirming she will land on ground in any minute. Suddenly she felt like hanging in air in some one arms opened her one eye. Ohh her heart skipped many beats looking at him he is looking so dashing in his dress. Maan admired her beauty with his eyes she shied with his burning gauze on her. "Mission accomplished" Maan whispered she looked at him with confusing eyes.




How come mission accomplished here?? 😆
socho socho think hard

updating in few hours again


SORRY this time it came very long so updating in two parts
hope you like this part if this is boring do let me know 😳

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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago

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