OS- Disappointment.

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hkl75

@hkl75

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Posted: 12 years ago

the over whelming feel of disappointments n hopes getting crashed one experience before sleep, u expressed it brilliantly. 👏

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@Leve

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nicely written i really liked it 👏👏
each moment was described through words- very wonderful 👍🏼

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Priyanka

@..KaJenDelena..

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

I love this! The first paragraph is written beautifully not to say the rest isn't but the first paragraph caught me from the word go. LOL, Emotions are protrayed beautifully and the way it was meant to be. I absoulately Loved this! More from you please!

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

I had almost forgotten I had written this piece, feeling good on discovering it again.

Thank you everyone for taking out time to read, like and comment on it. Thank you for the kind words. Much appreciated. :))

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Gave me chills. You are so FAB.

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Ami

@beebutterfly

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Don't know what to say to it...it's just too well written not to make the one reading it feel weighted down by the sadness in it. And it's just painfully true...not much else can hurt you as much as feeling worthless and being made to realize that constantly by someone you seek approval from. You can never really forget the harsh words or get used to them, they just stay and gnaw at you...and you described that feeling as it would be lived.

The little support that she used to give even that was missing.

This little bit just stands out, for me it's the line which makes me saddest...as long as that one person is there for you, you can bear it all but when they themselves believe you are wrong, it's shattering..

You managed to move me beyond words with this one which is why you are brilliant and I hope you know this...unmatchable! :)))

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winter.03

@winter.03

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

You have etched the down the feelings of despair and loss to perfection. The truth you bore through your words was resignedly worth the read. Words often leave an imprinting upon others. People forget to be careful when using them.

Brilliant piece.