ZAYA OS:Ho Raha Hai Pyar *Updated* pt2/pg 3

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Hey guys I am a silent reader on this forum and a zaya fan too. I am just loving this ongoing track so have written don something. its a short os but i will be writing it in parts. just to show my version of Zaya's cute romance and their journey of love.
Hope you like it

<font color="#FF0000">part 1 </font>

It had been a month since Zain had met with an accident. Last entire month aliya had taken full care of him. Today his plaster was off. But he had problem in movement of his hand.
Doctor had advised to take it easy for more 3-4 days. He had been at home for
last 1 month and that was certainly not zain style, but thanks to this MamuKiBhanji that he had to be at home. But truly saying he knew she was only worried for him though she didn't show it. He wasn't less either. He didn't leave achance to show his disapproval of her decision to make him stay home but he himself knew it very well that even he loved that pampering.


But today he was like a free bird again. He went for a shower and changed into a white T-shirt and his black jacket and went out to meet his friends. As he went to his car, the driver was already sitting in it. When asked for he answered that aliya madam has told him to go with you. He gave an expression of dsapproval but sat in the car without kitkit. Now a days he did many things out of character and he
himself didn't know why. He would keep staring that MamuKiBhanji for long, he would keep asking for her even if she is out of his site for an hour and agree
to her decisions without saying a word.


The car came to a halt
and see once more he was in her thoughts. arghhh "Zain you need to take a break dude" he said
to himself and left the car. There his friends were waiting for him at their
usual hangout spot. He did not know how long he was sitting with them. "Hi
guys", came in kartar. "What made you so late"."Actually its my brothers
engagement today so all you guys have to be there along with your girlfriends
and zain do bring aliya bhabhi along". "ok sure".


Mamuki Bhanji ko call kar
leta hu. Aaj bohut maze le rahi hogi main jo nai hu kitkit karne ke liye.Aliya saw his name on the screen and immediately
picked the call. "Ha bolo. Ek din bhi mujhe chain se nai baitne donge na tum.
Kya kaam hai?"


"Tumhe kya lagta hai mere paas fursat hai jo main
tumhe call karta rahunga. Aaj kartar key
aha party hai toh humhe jana hai. Shaam ko ready rehna." He too said with his
attitude


"ha thik hai aur kuch".


"Ha
woh main keh raha tha ki ki ki.."


"kya
bolo jaldi mere paas aur bhi kaam hai".


"Ha
toh bol hi raha hu na ki tum aaj sari pehen lo" and he cut the call.


He
didn't have the guts to say further. Guts? Was Zain Abdulla thinking about guts?
But he had to agree. At the valentine party she was looking damn gorgeous in
that red sari so he had a desire to see her in sari. Wait did he just now say that
she was looking gorgeous? Zain Abdulla from when did you think of aliya and
gorgeous. Stop it Zain and he brought a halt to his own argument.


I
just hope that MamuKiBhanji is ready by now. So I told her about the party long
back. Don't know why these girls take so long to get ready. Saying this he
entered his room . But he got to see an unexpected yet something beautiful.
There she was at the dressing table struggling with the knot on her blouse and
with a irritated expression on her face. "yeh blouse bhi na. ek toh late ho
raha hai aur ye band nai raha hai. Abhi wo kitkit ayega aur apni kitkit shuru
karenga."


"Wah! maan na padega. Gusse me toh tum aur bhi
khoobsurat ho jati ho".


"Allah tauba tumhe sharam nai aati iss tarah gurte
hue."


"Apni biwi ko dekhne mein kaisi sharam. "


Hearing this she hid her face to her side
blushing. But zain had something on his mind. He slowly moved closer to her and
he took step behind till she hit the wall behind her. she looked up to him and
saw a firm determination in his eyes. " zain kya kar rahe ho tum. Jao ready ho
jao.hum late ho jayenge party ke liye". But he did not say anything instead
kept moving forward. She tried escaping from side but he kept his hand there to
stop her. "Darwaza khula hai zain. Koi
aa jayega." "aane do" "Chand khala.."
and he cut her words by putting a finger on her lips and warned her to keep
quite through his eyes. He had something in his eyes that dried her throat not
letting her utter a word. He took her closer and slowly moved near her and
inhaled her scent. His lips touched her neck and then shoulder and till then he
tied the knot of the blouse from behind without losing his effect on her. "Lo
ho gaya"


"Tum ye
knot band rahe the?"


"Ha toh. Tumhe kya laga main kya karne wala tha.? Bol do. Wo kya hai na
zain ke liye kuch bhi namunkin nai hai. Kaho toh tumhari yeh khwahish bhi puri kar du. MamuKiBhanji" and he
winked at her. "Tumhari ye faltu he baatein band karo aur ready ho jao" saying
this she literally ran from there . he stood there smiling


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-Minion- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute and romantic one.i love their kitkit along with romance.keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg how cute Nd romantic I loved it especially the way zain told her to wear a saree and then cut the call hahaha amazing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i jst lovd it..do post more stories and if possible pm me plz...exam hai so chotta comment.,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashiqua

i jst lovd it..do post more stories and if possible pm me plz...exam hai so chotta comment.,


its fine dear. Nice u loved it. Will pm it to u. And all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm... :)
Cont soon and pm me pls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Dear!Pls do write more on Zaya & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U know I was going to finish this soon but its been long time since I wrote the first part.
Here is the second part. I know it is an os and should not be this lengthy. Will try to end it soon.

Part 2

Mr & Mrs Zain Abdullaa entered the party hand in hand like any other happiely married couple. They had a bright smile on their faces. It was to show others how happy they are. "Kitkit lagta hai mera haath pakadne ka bohut shok hai tumhe. "
"galat fehmi me mat rehna ki shok se hath pakda hai tumhara MKB. yaha dad he jaan ne wale hai iskiye show off kar raha hu" their talk was interrupted by kartar who welcomed them and they went towards their other friends. zain and the boys moved aside and the girls started their own gossiping. zain kept on looking towards aliya who wad more than comfortable with the girls.He wondered how can someone be this close in so short time span. He than became engrossed with the guys little did he know that aliya had caught him throwing glances towards her.
This one month had been really special for them. they fought same as before but the was a certain comfort zone between them .now they were not bearing each other but leaving with each other. The most important was the respect they had for each other. aliya went back on the day she had come to know that zain was protecting aayat by lieing to her. She was angry on him initially but then understood the gravity of the reason why he did that. Rocky was arrested later but this event had left a scar on their lives forever but in a better way.
Zain was on the bar counter looking in direction of aliya, His friend... ya u heared it right.

*Flashback*
It was the day when rocky was arrested. Zain also transfered 12 lakh rupees in his phups account. aliya was mesmerised with this gesture of his.He was a perfect brother, perfect son-in-law, a perfect son and also a perfect husb... what are u thinking aliya she questioned herself. But even she had to except the truth. He didnt tell her so that she may not get worried about her sister. was it that he cared for her.no he did that for saving aayats reputation. she was suprised by her thoughts. with that she entered their room. there was zain trying to remove his T-shirt. His cry of pain brought her out of her trance. She rushed to his side and tried soothing his pain . she didnt know what made her eyes teary but she didnt not try to stop them. all she was concerned was his pain. Somewhere she thought it was because of her sister so even she is responsible. She slowly changed his T-Shirt trying her best not to hurt him and then even changed his bandage. And she started moving from there avoiding glancing at him. but alas zain caught her avoiding him and also her tears didnt go unnoticed by him. A wave of concern flew over his face but zain being zain would not like showing it to her.
"MKB i am injured and tears are in your eyes. kahi pyar vyar toh nai ho gaya na mujhse." he winked.
"Nothing like that .you stop imagining things and take rest. i have some work." with that she started rushing from there. He pulled her back with a jerk which made her fall over him. they Looked in each others eyes seeing nothing but concern for each other. They quickly broke the eyelock. but zain did not leave his grip on her.
"zain what are you doing leave me i have work. not until you answer my question. and no other work should be important to you than your husband."
she didnt have anything to answer .
" now tell me why were u crying. did mom tell you anything or anyone else?" he asked with concern written all over his face. That made her cry even more. Now he was getting worried. "aliya just speak up"
" I am sorry zain . you risked your life because of aayat. if anything would have happened to you i can never forgive myself"
"shh MKB you dont have to blame yourself for anything. and aayat didnt do anything wrong so there was no point of me not supporting her. i didnt tell you because i knew u would behave in the same as u are doing now.
A smiled reached her face and she could see the smirk on the corner of his lips.
"But promise me one thing that you will not hide anything from me hence forth."
surprised by her words zain replied"dont u think that same formula applies to u too" " ok than deal done. from now on we will not hide anything from each other"
Zain reached his hands towards her and the next words startled her" Friends" it was rather a statement than a question. She kept staring at him. what was this guy upto. Does this mean that he is giving a chance to their relatonship. his voice brought her out of her thoughts. she saw his hands still towards her. She didnt know what made her hands meet his and they primised to be friends for ever.

*End of Flashback*


Thanks for reading and do hit the like button and comment please. Your feedback is too precious
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome n a cute romantic story...
loved it ❤️
continue soon dear...
plz pm me when you update next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start and update
Finally Zain Abdullah is in love with his wife, and he is accepting it too.
Zain, Aliya and party perfect setting.
Aliya is very smart. I think she too loves Zain now. She is just waiting for him to confess love for her and I think he may do so in the end of the party.
Update next part soon and pm me when you update

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