ONE SHOT .... NATTAAMAI..... THEERPAI MAATHI SOLLU....CLIMAX POSTED

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Posted: 11 years ago

ONE SHOT ... NATTAAMAI... THEERPAI MAATHI SOLLU...

Part 1:

Inside the room, Karthik is very frustrated and shouts at Vishnu and Madhan.
Karthik: ennadaa loosu thanamaa irukku... idhukku neenga Angel koottittu
varaamaiye irundhirukkalaam... ippo enna panradhu???
Madhan: machaan... antha naattaamai ippadi oru podu poduvaaru nnu yaarukku
daa theriyum?
Vishnu: dei... nee kaadhalikkara ponnai kootiitu vandhu... unnai love panren nu
antha ponnu sollanum nu thaane daa sonnaaru... ippadi balti adippaaru nnu
yaarukku theriyum?
Karthik: enna daa karumam idhu? life la innoru thadavai yaarukkum irakka pada
koodaadhu nnu thonara alavukku aayiduchi...
Vishnu: sari panna chance kidaichappa ellaam vittuttu... ippo feel pannaa...
Karthik: dei... Angel ah ennaala kalyaanam pannikka mudiyaadhu daa...
Madhan: puriyudhu machaan... raji vandhirundhaa prachanaiye illa...
Karthik: dei... ava vandhirundhaalum... ippadi ellaam sonnaa othukku vaalaa nnu
doubt thaan...
Vishnu: atleast nee thayangi ninnurukka maatte illa...
Karthik: mandai vedikkuthu daa...

Lakshmi and Angel enter.
Everyone is quiet.
Lakshmi: enna mudivu panni irukke Karthik?
Karthik: enna Lakshmi?
Angel: Karthik... oru nimisham...
Karthik: sorry angel... ennaala...
Angel: summa iru Karthik... naama modhalla nalla friends... appuram thaan
mathadhellaam...
karthik keeps quiet...
Angel: Karthik... rendu option thaan irukku...
Lakshmi: enna Angel?
Angel: enga appa amma illaama naan kalyaanam pannikka mudiyaadhu...
avanga varanum nu solli time kekkaradhu...adhukulla vidinjidum... amma vai
koottittu vara yaaraavadhu poyittu Raji ah koottittu varanum...
Vishnu: innonnu...
Angel: pesaama avanga munnaadi ippo thaali kattittu... inge irundhu
kilambinadhum adhai kazhattida vendiyadhu dhaan...
Lakshmi: enna vilaiyaattu idhu Angel?
Angel: thaali ngradhu ungalukku thaan sentiment aana vishayam... enakku illa...
mathavangalukkaaga siluvai ya sumanthu ratham sinthinavarai vazhipadarava
naan... Karthik kaaga edhaiyum seiven...
karthik: thappu Angel...
Angel: thaali kattu nnaa...nijamaa illa... kattara maathiri nadi...
karthik: puriyalai...
Angel: thaali kattaradhu nnaa... you have some tradition illa... moonu naalu
mudichi poduvaanga... maapillai illama vera yaaro kooda mudichi poduvaanga..
something... divya kalyanathula parthadhu... i don't remember exactly...
Lakshmi: aamaa... moonu mudichi poduvaanga... moonaavadhu mudichi
maappillai oda thangachi poduvaa...
Karthik: adhukku???
Angel: avanga munnaadi... thali eduthu kattara maathiri act pannu... Lakshmi oru
mudichi pottu vittudattum... veliya ponadhum.. adhai avizhthidalaam...
Karthik: vilaiyaadaadhe Angel...
Angel: naan serious aah thaan solren... silent aah inga irundhu kilambittaa..
Rajikkum nee eppadi solve panne nnu solla venaa... smooth aah mudinjidum...
Vishnu: nee edhuvum pudhusaa plan pannalaiye???
Angel: antha Jesus mela Promise aah... naan karthik ku dhrogam panna maatten...
After alot of arguments... they decide to execute plan 2...

Panchaayathu...

Everyone including Karthik's parents are assembled...
Naattaamai: enna paa? enna mudivu eduthirukkeenga?
karthik: naan Raji kku thaali kattidaren...
Naattaamai: antha thaali eduthittu vaa paa...
Some one brings the thaali..
Karthik takes the thaali in his hand...

"Enna nadakkuthu inga???"
Everone turns hearing towards the direction these words come from...
Raji was standing there... fuming...

Part 2... tomorrow morning...

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry friends... power cut and my phone batteryis completely down...
will post climax tomorrow morning...

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Ramya05

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sweety.. Super pa... Very nice:)

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Lily Padawattar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nattamai (sweety) unga theerpai sollunga .
Nice post. Waiting for climax .

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veda

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Posted: 11 years ago

it's awesome sweety 👍🏼

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 11 years ago

natamai jee unga idea superuuu nice twist raji entry seekram theerpa sollidunga

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anithu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sweety..Summa adhiridu pongaaa..

Waiting for next part😳😳

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271043

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Posted: 11 years ago

sweety, awesome 1st part... waiting for raji's reaction in the next part...

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sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 2... CLIMAX...

Raji was standing with her Angry bird face firing...
Karthik: Raajiii...
Vishnu's mindvoice... "machaan... setha daa nee..." "naanga ellaam enna aagaporom nu theriyaliye????"
Naattaamai: Raaji yaa????
Raji comes near them, gives a furious look to Karthik and Angel... turns the other side...
Nattaamai: yaarumaa nee?
Raji: solren...
Raji goes to Sumathi... and asks...
Raji: naan yaaru?
she looks tensed...but denies..."enakku theryaadhu.." and that's all...
Raji gives a tight slap on her face within a fraction of a second...
Sumathi shouts..."Raajiii..." rubbing her cheek with her palm...
Everyone gathered there start whispering...
Nattaamai: yaaru maa nee? Sumathi ya en adikkare?
Raji: nee yaaru yaa?
Naattaamai: naan Sumathi oda periappa...
Raji: irundhuttu po... ennai kelvi kekka nee yaaru????
Sumathi's mom: ey... avaru thaan engalukku elaame... nee yaaru? enga ponnai en adikkare?
Raji: adikkaradhaa? ivalai ellaam kandam thundamaa vettinaalum paavam illai... pachai dhrogi...
Sumathi's maama: ey...
Raji: ey... intha satham podara velai ellaam un pondaatti kitta vachikko... en kitta illaa... ey.. nu kathunaa... naanga bayandhiruvomaa?
Naattaamai: edhukku maa ippo prachanai panre?
Raji: unga pracahanaiya theerka thaan naan vandhirukken... sollu Sumathi... unga veettu aalunga kekkuraanga illa... naan yaaru nnu sollu...
Sumathi: enakku theriyaa... (another slap hits her... continues crying and...) idhu dhaan Raji... Karthik LOVE panra ponnu...
Naattaamai: unakku eppadi theriyum????
Sumathi continues crying...
Raji: en peru Raji... naanum Karthik um oru varushamaa love panrom... veetla solli kalyaanam pannikkanum nu nenaikkumbodhu... Karthik oda appa, amma avanai ponnu parka kooppittanga...
Sumathi amma: unnai love panravan edhukku ponnu parka varanum?
Raji: Sumathi ya ponnu parkara annaikku ... bangalore le irundhu Karthik oda amma appa neraa Office vandhu... sayanthiram ponnu parka poganum nu sonnaanga... Karthik yerkanave oru ponnai love panren nu sonnadhukku... romba therinjavanga moolamaa vandha varan... ponnu parka varom nu vaakku kuduthittom ... varalai nnu sonnaa nallaa irukkaadhu... poyittu vandhu ponnai pidikkalai nnu ssollidalaam nu solli koottittu vandhaanga...
Naattaamai: appuram en othukkanum?
Raji: adhai unga arumai ponnu solluvaa... sollu Sumathi...
Sumathi simply cries...
Raji: ippo vaayai thirakkuriyaa? illai innoru arai venumaa??
Sumathi: enakku edhuvum theriyaadhu...
Raji: inga paaru... enga office la reception le irundhu canteen varaikkum... ellaa edathulayum camera irukku... nee ethanai thadavai enga office ku vandhe... yaar yaar kitta pesine...ellaam padhivu aayirukkum...oru phone pannaa... arai mani nerathula ellaa video recording um inga varum... elaarukkum adhai pottu kaattavaa??? illai... nee unmaya solriyaa???
Sumathi gets scared and looks for her friend... her friend hides behind the crowd.

Raji raises her hand again and sumathi panics..."naan sollidaren..."
And Sumathi... confesses her crime from A to Z... everyone hears dumbstruck...
Naattaamai: adhu ellaam sari... nee solradhu unmai nnu naan eppadi
namburadhu?
Raji: neenga ippadi keppeenga nnu therinju dhaan ... naan aadhaarathoda vandhirukken...
She turns and calls..." Krishna murthy Sir...inga vaanga..."
A middle aged person comes with some documents in hand. Karthik is surprised to see him...
Raji: ivar Krishnamurthy... Tiruvanmiyur Registrar Office la Sub registrar ah irukkaaru... idhu ennoda id card...address proof, idhu Karthik oda id card, address proof, idhu kalyaanathukkaaga naanga registrar office la file panna application oda xerox... appuram ivar registrar office la thaan velai seyyaraaraa nnu neenga kelvi keppeenga...idhu ivaroda id card... innum santhegam irundhaa... kaalaile 10 manikku thiruvaanmiyur Registrar office ku ponaa ivarai
parkalaam...
Raji gives the documents to naattaamai...
Naattaamai: ippo enna venum??
Raji: neenga thaaan sollanum... unmai vetta velicham aayaachu illa...
Naattaamai: ponnu pidikalai nnaa adhu modhallaiye sollanum... mandabam varaikkum vandhu kalyaanam nadakkalai nnaa evvalavu asingam...
Raji: yaarukku???
Naattaamai: ellaarukkum thaan...
Raji: adhu unga ponnu seidha thappu... naan oru ponnai love panren ennaala ungalai kalyaanam pannikka mudiyaadhu nu sonnavan kitta ippadi oru udhavi kettu kadaisila avanaiye ippadi maatti vittu vedikka parkaraa...
Sumathi's mother: idhellaam othukka mudiyaadhu... intha kalyaanam nadanthe theerum... Sumathi kazhuthula thaali kattaama maappillai inge irundhu uyiroda poga mudiyaadhu...
Raji: adheppadi??? ennai meeri nadakkum... appadi kattanum nu nenachaa... kattaravanukku kai irukkaadhu... kattikittavulukku thaali thonga kazhuthu irukkaadhu...
Sumathi's mama: enna miratturiyaa?
Raji: aamaa... neenga panna ellaa araajagathukkum en kitta aadhaaram irukku...
kalyaana photographer saayanthirathu le irundhu neenga aalaalukku Karthik, avanga appa amma vai mirattinadhu ellam record panni irukkaan... naan inga varadhukku munnaadi police la complaint pannittu thaan vandhirukken... ishtam illaadhavanukku konnuduvom nu solli bayamuruthi blackmail panni kalyaanam panraanga nnu... unga mela maana nashta case pottaa... kudumbathoda 10 varusham jail kambi ennanum.. paravaa illaiyaa?
Naattaamai: ippo enna thaan maa solla vare?
Raji: neenga panna thappukku kudumbathoda Karthik oda appa amma kitta mannippu kekkanum...
Sumathi's mother: mudiyaadhu...
Raji: appo jail ku poga vendiyadhu dhaan...
She goes near Sumathi... and...
Raji: nee kaal la vizhundhu azhudhe nnu irakka pattu udhavi senjavanukke dhrogam panna nenaichiye... avanai indha paadu paduthi irukke... mariyadhaiyaa ellar munnadiyum avan kaal la vizhundhu mannippu kelu...
sumathi is still weeping... Raji again slaps her... Sumathi runs and comes to Karthik , falls on his feet... he goes back ... she cries saying..."naan pannathu thappu... Arun varalai nnu sonnadhum... kalyaanam venaa nnaa neenga eppadiyaavadhu niruthuveenga.. naan thappichidalaam nu nenachen... ennai mannichidunga..."
Naattaamai: Karthik oda appa amma neenga love panra vishayam therinji eppadi kalyaanathukku othukittaanga?
Raji: avangalukku naanga love panra vishayam ponnu parka vara annaikku thaan theriyum... sari ponnai parthittu pidikkalai nnu sollidu appadi nnu thaan Karthik ah koottittu vandhaanga... ivan unga ponnukkaaga ippadi sothappuvaan nu yaarukku theriyum? vandha idathula pidichirukku nnu sonnaa... paiyyan love panren nu vilaiyaattaa sonnaan nu nenachikittu kalyaana yerpaadu pannaanga... avanga mela entha thappum illai...
Hearing this... Karthik's parents cry thinking how foolishly they behaved and how they insulted Raji who in return is showing so much concern towards them...
Raji continues...
Raji: avangalukku avanga sontha kaaranga munnaadi evvalo avamaanam... neenga ellaarum avanga munnaadi nadantha thappukku mannippu kekkanum...
Naattaamai: sari ..appo Karthik thambiya un kazhuthula thaali katta sollu...
Raji: edhukku?
Naattaamai: idhellaaam unmai nnu niroobikka thaan...
Raji: enna yaa? enga appa Kovilpatti consellor... suthu pakkam 98
graamathukkum katta panchaayathu panravar... en kitta ye vaa? neenga panna ellaa thukkum en kitta thella thelivaa aadhaaram irukku... naan edhukku kanda nerathula kandavanga munnaadi thaai kattikkanum? enga appa nalla naal natchathiram parthu grand aah kalyaanam pannuvaaru.. ungalukkum pathirigai anupparen.. vandhu parthuttu vaazhthittu... vayiru niraiya saaptu varuveenga...
Sumathi's mother: appo enna thaan mudivu???
Raji: naattaamai...
Nattaamai comes near her folding hands..."ammaaa???"
Raji: unga veettu aalunga kekkaraanga... unmai therinjichu ille? Naattaamai... theerpai maathi sollu...
Naattaamai: Sumathi kudumbathoda Karthik appa amma kitta mannippu keppaanga...
Raji: inga illai... mandabathula... avanga sontha kaarangalukku munnaadi...
Nattaamai:sari maa...
Raji: innum oru mani nerathula idhu nadakkanum... illennaa adutha pathaavadhu nimsisham police varum ... neraa court ku koottittupovaanga... naan office ku poyi ellaa aadhaarathaiyum eduthittu neraa court ku vandhiduven...
Naattaamai: illa maa... mannippu kettudarom...
Raji gives the documents to Krishnamurthy and...
Raji: romba thanks sir... enga kalyaanam mudinjadhum naanga vandhu padhivu panrom...
Krishnamurthy: sari maa... endha udhavi venum naalum thayangaama kelu...
He comes to karthik, pats on his shoulder, says "lucky man.." and leaves...
Raji comes to Karthik...
Raji: innoru thadavai... antha ponnu kaal la vizhundhaa... kanneer vittaa... nnu munna pinna yosikkaama udhavi pannuve??
Karthik: mm...hmmm..
Raji: vaayai thorandhu sollu...
Karthik: uyire pogappodhu nnu sonnaalum... pachai thanni kooda kudukka maatten...
Raji: ippo vandhu ennai veetla drop pannu nnu vethala paakku thattula vachi koopidanumaa??
Karthik: sorry... vaa polaam...
Raji: naan vandha auto la Krishnamurthy sir ah anuppi aachu... poyi bike saavi eduthittu vaa...
Karthik: ore nimisham...
Karthik goes inside...
Raji: Vishnu...
Vishnu: sollunga Raji...
Raji:neenga Karthik appa amma vai koottittu mandabathukku ponga...
Vishnu: sari...
Raji: Madhan...
Madhan: enna Raji?
Raji: neenga Sumathi family ya follow panni escape aagaama paarunga... avanga mandabathula mannippu kettadhum Karthik appa amma vai bhadhramaa veettula vittudunga... entha prachanai nnaalum enakku phone pannunga... naan police oda varen...
Madhan: sari... naan parthukkaren...
Karthik comes and starts his bike , Raji gets on and he drives away...

Vishnu comes to Karthik's parents and says... "avanukku oru prachanai nnaa eppadi samaalichhaa partheengalaa??? neenga partha ponnu thanakku udhavi pannavandhaan nnu kooda yosikkaama eppadi asinga paduthinaa paarunga..."
Karthik's parents remain silent in guilt...

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Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago