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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i am manasi...n this is my first ff please read it n i am waiting for your precious comments...please do respond 😊
THE TRIP
Precap : Dean announces a trip to manali n everybody goes but randhir starts acting different!!!! he starts becoming jealous seeing sanyukta with parth...what will happen to randhir??? will he be happy by the attraction toward sanyukta???or he will ignore it???

hey...should i continue it please comment...😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hai?! just go for it yaar...looking forward to read the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ya...thanks a lot...u r the 1st one to like it so u r special to me...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesing...very interesting😆...do continue😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THE TRIP
PART 1

Dean announces a trip to manali and everyone is very excited to go...!!!! 😊😆
next day...
kaustuki - "chalo sanyu ab uth bhi jao"
sanyu - ''ha...ha tum chalo me bas do minute me aati hu'' 😕
Suddenly everybody hears an announcement by vardhan [ All the students coming for the trip should assemble near the bus but not to sit in ] everybody becomes confuse 😕 nobody knows why vardhan sir tells them like that.So all the dream team and other students comes near the bus.
vardhan comes...
vardhan- ''see, me janta hu ki tum log ab kun kaha aur kiske sath bethega is ke liye jhagad ne lago ge..., so i am going to choose ur patners.''Everybody becomes shock by listening this.
vardhan - '' interesting... very interesting...to thik he vidushi tum yo yo ke sath betho''.
vidushi - " no way...me is idiot ke sath kabhi nahi bethungi''.😡
vardhan - '' no arguments, go''.
yo yo - '' chaliye vidushiji ''.😉 They both goes in.
vardhan - '' sanyukta tum aur parth''
sanyu & parth - " ok " n they both goes in
Randhir becomes angry by vardhan sir's decision self thought [ W*F sir ne sanyukta ko us idiot parth ke sath ku bheja...mein kya invisible hu...what y am i thinking this...y do i care]
vardhan tell randhir to sit with sahil and of course kaustuki n jiggy were together.
randhir was seeing sanyukta enjoying with parth n his was very angry seeing them together .but he wasn't getting it that y he was feeling so jealous.
yo yo - ''suno...suno...ab ham eak game kelenge is game me eka chit mein donga us chit me jiska name hai , uske bareme kuch bolna hai...to pehele parth bhai aap ''.
parth takes the chit n reads it louldly '' sanyukta''he looks at sanyukta n blushes. Randhir sees him blushing n his blood boils seeing him...
- end of chapter 1
hey please bare it ...😕it is little boring but lots of twist n turns coming ahead so please continue reading it . and please forgive me for any grammatical mistakes...n please do comment😊😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was ok but plz post a longer update fr the next time and plz do send the link of ur update along with the pm
and thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update 👍🏼👏
waiting for the nxt pt...
n ya plz snd da link along wid da pm...or else its vry difficult to find out 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
sure i will send u the link...sorry for that😭 u know i am new here !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2
parth - ''sanyukta'' he looks at her n blushes😳. randhir looks at him n his blood boils.😡
parth - ''sanyukta ,cute he, smart he, beautyful he...aur vo meri best friend he...''
sanyu - ''thank u''parth smiles at her. randhir *self thought* [ vo looser apne aap ko kya samajta he sanyu kabse uski best friend banjai 😡...what the heck i am thinking... SANYU...mera bimag karab ho raha he. me us farzi ko sanyu ku bol raha hu ]
yo yo - ''vidushiji ab app ki bari''.
vidushi - '' YO YO, wat...yo yo my foot...kk...idiot , badsurat,cheap, hamesha girls ke aagee pechee karne vala...'' yo yo interrupts
yo yo - bas...bas ...aur kitni izzat nikalogi meri ''
kaustuki - wah...mujhe pata nahi ta ki tujhe izzat bhi he...''everybody laughs. randhir stares at sanyukta how cute she looks while laughing.
After sometime their game ends and everybody r sleeping...randhir still is staring at sanyukta while sleeping *self thought* [ how can someone look so cute while sleeping...she is literally a killer😳]
when he comes out of sanyukta land he realizes that sanyukta is shivering, he quickly takes his shawl and puts it on sanyukta . kaustuki sees everything n smiles *self thought* [ aww..so cute.. 😳mein janti hu ki vo keheta he ki use sanyu pasand nahi... par vo andar hi andar use pasand karta he...bas use koi confess kar na sekha de...]
After 2 - 3 hours they reach manali. vardhan is already there.
vardhan - ''sunno sab hum is hotel me rehene vale he, yelo tumhare keys...girls n boys different rooms...'' they all goes in their room
next day...
early morning they all assemble outside the hotel.
vardhan - '' vo jo mountain dik raha hena tumhe vo climb kar na he. teachers tumhare sath nahi hoge tum logo ko eka guide leke jayega...tum log aaj rat vaha camp karoge..so go...'' they all took their bags and started climbing. sanyukta and parth were together. more they climbed, more they both came close...n randhir became more jealous.after an hour they reach there...
They all r siting around the camp fire and yo yo comes...
yo yo - ''bhailog mene yaha par eka party arrange ki he to chalo... ''😃 everybody goes to the party except randhir...
- end of chapter 2

precap - sanyukta gets drunk and randhir takes care of her...and for the first time randhir will get to see sanyukta's other side more wilder...😃

I hope u like it 😕 my fingers r crossed sorry for late update...my exams r started n lots of tention🤢...
love manasi ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
😊😛 awsome work
update soon waiting

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