*Untying d knots* kisha SS epilogue pg:28

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHARECTER SKETCH
KD(KESHAV DESAI)- ACP of mumbai police. Very strict police officer . His name only is enough to make criminals confess their crimes . Reckless, fearless, brave are words that describe him .He has captured many criminals and gangs. But this steel man has a heart that only beats for his highschool sweet heart KIYA GUJRAL . He loves kiya like anything and can do anything for her.
KIYA GUJRAL- THE DIVA . She is the singing sensation of the country . Girls envy her , guys want her . This words describe her. She is the face of every top brand . Her all albums are platinum hit . Her every action is a breaking news. The diva's heart is reserved only for his boyfriend KD. She loves him verymuch more than her life . Kd is her world .
KAMNA- Girlfriend and partner of mumbai's underworld don KUNAL. Every illegal activity in mumbai occur under her supervision . Hates Kd to the core for some reasons and want to destroy him.
KUNAL- KAMNA'S boyfriend and underworld don . Whole mumbai is afraid of him . Very wicked and can do anything for power and money.
ARUN- kamna's brother .
PROLOGUE
Kd is sitting in his room drinking alcohol . He has already completed 3 bottles and now drinking 4th bottle . His eyes red , puffy and teary . Seeing him now no one can tell he is the same ACP whose name only is enough to confess their crimes. He is sitting like a statue and drinking not caring about world . His mobile beeped and there was a message with picture attached to it . He saw that and was shocked . His eyes widened . First humanly reaction he has given in past 2 days . His mobile rang and he picked it up .
Person on the call : Agar is photo ke bare main aur janna hai toh bina kisiko bataye apne ghar ke paas wale PCO par aa jana kal subah 6 baje aur phone bajega woh uthana . Kisiko iss bare main pata chala toh ( and he laughs sarcastically and disconnects the call). Kd dont know how to react seeing photo to be happy or sad ??? After all that 2 days before that fateful day ...
okay guys here is charecter sketch and prologue of my new ss.
it is a thriller and suspense ss .
I am not good at giving charecter sketch but here it is.
I know it is complete crap but plzz comment and tell me if I should continue it or not ???
INDEX
part-1 pg3
part-2 pg7
part-3 pg10
part-4 pg12
part-5 pg15
promo-1 pg17
part-6 pg19
part-7 pg21
part-8 pg23
part-9 pg25
Epilogue pg28
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG dis is so good yaar...
Woh photo Kiya ki hai na ???
Aur KD Devdas kyun bana hua hai ????
Very interesting plzzz continue soon...
Purana ff mat bhool jana 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

OMG dis is so good yaar...
Woh photo Kiya ki hai na ???
Aur KD Devdas kyun bana hua hai ????
Very interesting plzzz continue soon...
Purana ff mat bhool jana 😉

thanx khushi..
yes right guess..
I will continue soon..
dont worry I will continue dat ff tooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh! It sounds interesting!
Loved it!
Plz conyinue...
I will be w8ing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Stavan...u actually got me hooked on
Aisa kya hua ki angry young man had to take up alcohol..me wants to know...
N kunal...underwold don😆..I know it has nothing to do with my kunal kulbhushan singh but kinda imagined him as the don n found it hilarious. But kya cutiepie don ho ga kunal... awieee
Uff cant control myself kunal ka name aate hi... sorry
Well..Please do continue sooo..will be waiting

Off topic,,, but whats the meaning f your name...???

Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinaswea

Oh! It sounds interesting!

Loved it!
Plz conyinue...
I will be w8ing!

thanks a lot
glad u like it😊
yup will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow stavan...
.its tooo intrestng...
Kd...acp...
Kiya...the diva...
Kunal n kaamna...
Wow lovd it...
Continue...continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha02

Stavan...u actually got me hooked on

Aisa kya hua ki angry young man had to take up alcohol..me wants to know...
N kunal...underwold don😆..I know it has nothing to do with my kunal kulbhushan singh but kinda imagined him as the don n found it hilarious. But kya cutiepie don ho ga kunal... awieee
Uff cant control myself kunal ka name aate hi... sorry
Well..Please do continue sooo..will be waiting

Off topic,,, but whats the meaning f your name...???

Neha

thanx Neha
glad that u liked it ..
Kunal kulbhashan singh as underworld don😆 . U r right he will be the cutest gangster 😃 .
I will continue soon...
btw stavan means worship or prayer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KDreamer

Wow stavan...

.its tooo intrestng...
Kd...acp...
Kiya...the diva...
Kunal n kaamna...
Wow lovd it...
Continue...continue

thanx a lot
I think kd ko police force main hona chahiye goons ki toh achi band bajeyga
kiya she is diva and rockstar
kamna and Kunal both are wicked
I will surely continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah stavan nice
kunal underworld don
me bhi Neha ki tarah soch rahi thi 😆 😆
Anyway its awesome
plz continue

Ishita

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