New Os : Ye Tune Kya Kiya???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its my Small thought.. and im warning you its so emotional... and its stupid one.. but hpe u like it...


She is crying Hystrically... finally he is getting Married ... But not with her... she loves him madly , he knows it... but still he marries another girl... why not he is Superstar... Lotz of People worship him , love him... but he can't marry all of them...


She just shutterd , thinking there is no tomrrow... she is just a Assistant of Production Team.. Her Regulary interactions with him , daily meetings , behavoiur made her fall for him... She always used to say... " Vo mera Hero hai..."


She looking at 36cm Box infront of her ... In news also showing his Marraige preparations & guest Interview & all that... She always want a Fairytale wedding for her...


Her mind drifted into Flashback


"Tum pagal to nhi ho gyi???? ab tak mai sirf aise khel samaz raha tha . " He yells


"Per mai sach mai aapse pyar karti hue .. sachhi... aap ek baar soch ke to dekho.." She pleads


"Dekho , tum sirf ek achi collgue ban sakti ho meri , uske alawa aur kuch nhi... " He says


" Per..." She says


"Per var kuch nhi.. meri Magni ho chuki hai , and 7 mahine baad meri Shadi... "He informs


"Janti hue , per tab tak shayad..." She says with hope in her voice


"Tum pagal to nhi ho gyi... tum mujhse Date karna chahti ho , ye jaan kar bhi mai tumhara nhi ho sakta... Tum apni tarah dekho aur meri tarah , hum dono fark hai , mai ek Superstar , aut tum Ek Production House ki ek Assistant... "



"Pyar kabhi ye nhi dekhta... " She says sadly , she feels hurt , when he given her a feeling that she is Too small for him... she is too small for his Status...


"Sry . .." She wips her Teras...


"Maine aapko tang kiya.. shayd sach jane ne ke baad bhi ... apse pyar karne lagi thi , Sapne dekhne lagi thi aapke ke saath , aapke ke liye... Bad dua to nhi de sakti... per itna jarur kahungi ek na ek din aapko mera pyar samjh aa hi jayega , aur tab aapko ehsaas hoga... ki aapne kya khoya , " with that she goes from there with her Broken Heart..




Other side


He is driving Furiously...

"Damn ye Traffic is ebhi aaj hi hona tha?" with that he give contoiusly Horn to other Vechiles & get his way..


Finally he reach at his destination & ruungily goes to her... He sat beside her... :Hufff , tum yaha ho ... tank God..." He says while panting


"To tumne kya socha?" She ask him without looking at him


" kuch nhi , mere ek stupid se frnd ne kaha tha ki mere Bhai ne shadi karli , to tum Sucide kar dogi ... "



"To isiliye tum aha aaye?" Now she is looking at him


"No... i knew ki tum itni bhi befkoof nhi ho ..." He says with grin


"Sach kahu ,,to karna chati thi , per nhi kar paayi "She sadly says


He just keep his hand on her shoulder... & hold her..


" Pata hai , meri frnd nekya kaha?"She says with choking voice...


"Ammm hmm "


"Usne kaha bhul jaao use vo tumhare pyar ke layak nhi tha... jab vo jane ga ki usne kya khoya hai tab use ehsaas hoga... apni galthi ki... " She says with sigh..



He seat there with her ... now almost 9 Pm... Now they are walikng ..


"Tumhe nhi lagta , ki tumhe ghar jana chayie , tumhare Bhai ki shadi hue hai aaj... " she says slowly


" Unke pas bahut sare log hai ... per mere pass to sirf ek tum ho... " He says & and she look at him


"What "? She ask him in suspious Tone


"Ya ,,, i like u... means i love you... Shadi karogi?"



She just stunned...


"Na... na mat kehena , plz... mai janta hue ki tum mere Bhai se pyar karti ho , vo ek Superstar hai uar mai sirf ek Production Team mai kaam karne wala tumhara Helper , tumhara Collgue... Mia nhi janta ki aage kya hoga meri life mai , but I promise u ki mai tumhe hamsha hasta hue rakhunga...jyada to nhi per wear karne ke liye Kapde aur do time khana de sakta hue..."



She just llok at him , his sincerity give her thought...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Next Morning


He comes at Breakfast lazily & his Wife is still sleeping...

He sees his Mother looking wooridly at Door..


"Mom , what happen? baat kya hai ?"


"Vo .. vo Chota abhi tak ghar nhi aaya.. kal kisi ka call aaya aur chala gya... " His Mother informs


"Kab gaya?" He ask


"Jab hum Bahu ko ko lekar ghar aaye tab use call aaya... aur vo bina kuch bole..." She syas while crying



Suudenly Door bell rings


Servant open door


"Kon hai ?" She ask & froz at her place



"Beta ye ... ye sab???? kya hai???? ye..." She shockingly look at him


"Maa mai ise pyar karta hue , aur humne aaj hi subha shadi karli... " he syas & both bend down to touch her feets..


She bless them , & cups his Wife's face "Bahut khubsurat ho beta aap , ab mere dono Beto ki shadi ho gyi aur mujhe dono achi Bahu mil gyai... " with taht she kissed her forhead... and goes from there


Her Husband also recevies call from his frnd , so he goes from there


The Elder One looking at her dangerously... Her First Love standing in front of her , but Today she belongs to other...



"Tumne ye shadi jaan buchke..." but he cuts her


"Mai aapki tarah nhi hue , aapke Bhi pyar karte hai mujhse , aur unki baato ne yakeen dilwaya mujhe... "


"Yakeen... huh... aur tum to mujhse pyar karti thi na... ek hi din mai sra pyar ..." he taut her


"Aap kya samjhnge ki pyar kya hai aur vishwas kya hai???? Mai aapse pyar karti hue ye jan ne ke baad bhi usne mujhse shadi ki... maine sirf apne dost ka saath diya... aur vaise bhi aap hote kon hai itna puchne wale..." She ask



"Oye hello , mai is Ghar ka Malik hue... aur tumahre Pati ka Bada Bhai , aur Tumhara Pehela Pyar... " He again taunt her


She abt to ans him


"Chale ?? sry... vo Frnd ka call aya tha , chalo tum rest karo , thak gyi hogi na... " her Husband comes there & take her away...



Days passing , months passing



Slowly she become ladali to her Mother -In - Law... Her Husband also doing well in his wrk ... Fianlly he open his prodution House...


There Room


He lay on her lap & she slowly caressing his hair


"Thanks , mujh pe bharosa rakhne ke liye.."


"She smils & kiss his forhead...


"Thak u to mujhe bolna chayie ... itna sab jaane ne ke baad bhi aapne shadi ki mujhse... "


"Hammm , vaise ab ek kissi do na..." he says like little boy...


" She wipe her tears...


"Shayad tumhe kisine bola nahi , jab Pati itna Romantic baat kar raha hota hai , tab aise rote nhi... & pull her on him..



On Other side


"Ofo kya hai ye ... maine bola tha na . ki mere dimmag mai dard hai , mujhe ek Chai chayie... " he yells


"Chilla kyu rahe ho???? bahiri nhi hue . kaha hai Servant se mil jayegi... " His Wife yells back



" Mai koi paagal nhi hue jo 30 ghante shaoot pe hota hue , Superstar hue Superstar ... " He yells while holding his Head...



"To... Super Star ho tum Duniya ke ghar ke nhi... aur ha ye Super star hone ka rauff kis pe jama rahe ho ... mai bhi Ek Actress hue... samazhe...??? " with that she take her bag & goes



"Aise Parites ke alwa aur suchta hi kya hai?" he irridatly says & lay on Bed ...



Other Side..


He comes Home late Tod , almost at 4 am.. She just sleep on Dining table...


He comes to her & smile to himself & take her in his arms & goes to room..



Both Bro's seating on Break fast Table... eating their food


"Chote kya hua ? chehera kyu itna utra hai?" His Mother ask & Elder Bro look at him


"Kuch nhi , raat ko der se aaya na , to sir mai dard hai... "He informs


"Oh... to Servant se bol do Chai mil jaayegi " His Bhabhi says carelessly...


At that time he look at her , she place Juice in front of him ...


"Nhi Bhabhi , bas isne Malish kar di , to bas... Dard choomantar ho jayega... " he says with sweet smile... she just give him faint smile...



"Chote... tum na.. Bahu ko hamseha tag karte ho... " his Mother says ...


After Break fast all goes to their roos...


"Jara ruko to..."


"Ji Maa?"


"Beta mai bahut khush hue ki Chote ne ye Ladki chuni hamare ghar ke liye... jab se ghar mai kadam pade na ise ladki ke tab se ghar bhi has raha hai , aur Chote ko tu khud dekh raha hai , vo bahut khush hai , apni life mai bahut aage gaya hai vo ,apne sapne pure kar raha hai vo... "


He listen to his Mother & sighs... First he disowns her love... refuse to understand her... Tod he knows he did a great mistake... Her words always rings in his ears "Kabhi na kabhi to aap mere pyar ko samhje hi jaaynge tab aapkopata chalega ki aap ne kya khoya hai... "


He rembers all moments when his wife always bark at him , she is only happy with him when he takes to her on Trip , on Party... and otherside , His Brothers Wife ,the same girl who love him unconditionaly always support to his brother , stand for him... care for him... his lega automatically take him to his Brother's room... what he see.


He seating on Floor , & she message his hair with Oil...


Suddenly he turns & kiss on her Big Belly... She just smile at him


"Aww , aap baby ko kitna miss kar rahe hai ,dn't wry ab bas thode aur mahine phir baby hamare paas hogi... "


"Hammm...hamare pyar ki peheli nishani..." he syas & he kiss her on forhead , she just hug him...



He just looking at them silently...


"Aj samaj aaya tum sahi thi , maine kya khoya ye aaj pata chala..." he says & goes from there...



End...


Ufff ho gya mera OS ,and hpe u all like it... sab ka bahut brain khaya maine... 😉



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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os dear.. Love it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mannu kya tune sab ko rulane ka ya phir emotional banane ka contract liya hai kya...
but jo bhi ho awesome story dear...poor big bro

and i m happy for chote and his wife...and their pyar ki nishani
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really emotional one...
But,a beautiful one,as well. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww that was such a sweet and heart touching os...!1
really very lovely...!!!
feel very happy for the girl n his husband...!!!! now that guy knows what he lost...!1
loved it to core...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh dear
its a AWESOME OS 👏
sach kaha is ladki ne JAB KUCH RISHTE TOOTH JATE HAI TABHUME USKA EHSAAS HOTA HAI 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful os dear
emotional n full of love.
who says love never happens again.
aww so shweet wala tha i was crying.

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