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Posted: 11 years ago
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Havent thought of a name yet😆😆

Hi forumwasiyon. I am Aash😃 I am going to write a short(Depends on my mood n ur response) OS on Zaya. This takes place just before the party😆😆😆 I sincerely disliked the way it was handled, so i am going to write a small alternate version of what was NOT shown n what i wud have loved to see😉

Feel free to berate me😳

P.S> I adore the way Zain pronounces her as Aal-ya. So thats gonna be used. Words in italics are thought. 😃

i am going to put up a short teaser, depending on ur response, i might update tomorrow😆 Plea
use any typos.


Nameless OS🤢



Zain and Aaliya had decided on their game plan and were going to enter the Don's house to steal the papers. And currently, both of them were in a random hotel suite where they had come to get dressed in their respective costumes and avoid being seen by anyone at home.

Zain Abdullah lounged back on the bed in the suite, his hands behind his head, pondering over the possibility of getting caught by the Don.

He had escaped through a lot of tight spots unharmed during his escapades, but then he had never been facing a real Don with guns and bullets before. He swallowed hard at the extremely unpleasant visuals in front of his mind's eye and decided that failing was not an option. He had to do this, not only for his brother but also for his Dad. Barkat Royale was Usman Abdullah's pride and Zain would do anything to ensure it dint shatter. Hadn't he already proved that by marrying Aalya...Speaking of who, where the hell was she?

He glanced at his watch. It had been nearly half n hour since she had disappeared into the bathroom to change into her disguise. Ye ladkiyan bhi na! Inhe aisa kyu lagta hai ke zyada time legi tayyar hone me to aur khoobsurat ho jayega? Zain cribbed, glancing at his watch. Hope she picked the witch costume... Kafi cute lag rahi thi usme...The thought crossed his mind before he could control it.

He sat up horrified at his train of thoughts, "Zain tu pagal ho gay hai!!! Us Mamu ki Bhanji ke saath reh kar, tu bhi behki behki baatein karne laga hai."

Berating himself for his nonsensical thoughts, he got up and knocked on the bathroom door. On receiving no response, he knocked louder and hollered, "Are O Mamu ki Bhanji!! Party aaj hi hai aur mujhe bhi tayyar hona hai. Kitna time laga rahi ho! Come out fast!" He waited but still there was not-a-peep from the other side. His patience running thin, he taunted, "Kuch bhi kar lo, apni rondu shakal to nahi change kar sakti to time kyu waste kar rahi ho..." There, he thought satisfied with himself. That should definitely get his smartass wife into revenge mode. But surprisingly, the deafening silence continued.

By now Zain was seriously worried, "Kahi use kuch ho to nahi gaya?" he debated with himself over breaking into the bathroom. Finally seeing no other option, he went over and tried the knob which to his astonishment was unlocked. He opened the door quickly and barged in, his strained face showing his deep apprehension over what he would find.

And what he saw blew every thought right out of his mind.



Oopss. Wrong place to stop?😲

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To be continued 😉




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SheenGcian thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aash tu waqai me Pagal hogai hai re 👏
SheenGcian thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waise Nice Os What a nam ZaYa 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part.i wish that happened in the show.u end in a wrong point.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS😃
its really interesting, cant wait to read the next part and yes u shouldn't have ended it like that😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ya allah.. u ve to end it der..?
Like seriously. ?
Pls jaldi karo ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intersting OS... I wanted writers to show their whole process of actual disguise but never the less gud tht u cme up with the thought. Hope to see next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ! Nice OS ! u are a nice writer ! 👏
Y do u ended it there ? 😲
Pllzzz update soonn !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os...and definitely the wrong place to stop!
Update soon!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg it's so much interesting can't wait for the next, show up real soon, pm me

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