Asya Untitled FF pg 5 /12 Feb

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zoyaah

@zoyaah

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

aww so good

i like it

asad is very strict

continue soon

and pm me if it is possible

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Another trademark work...loved it...

Your Ak is really an AK-47. Zoe is an atom bomb, Ayaan is flirting Colt.44 and Rumaira is a dynamite stick...Haay haay..pura armory haazir!!

Loved the background story also..do continue.

Thanks for PM.

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Update soon please 😃

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Ri...lemme just tell you this I LOVE IT!!!!!

The Zoya you've written about is my dream Zoya; the carefree; badass genius! I had always wanted to such a feisty and bold avatar to her. Thank you for pulling it over! And Jallad Khan is an added edge...the strained comradeship is an icing to the cake; i can' t believe what'll happen when these two will actually fall for each!! Geez thinking about that and I get bumps!!

This is way to perfect girl!! Asad was ready to break the door; what if he had see her make out! Gosh I can't wait for the next part...you need to update ASAP!!!

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Hi...sorry for this late comment, but yeah...thnx for the pms hon, n if ur wondering who i am, im soumeesg...changed my username...anyways, bak to the ff, i dont watch asya, but after this i just might...love the storyline n characters...plz send me a pm u update next time😃