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Arshics

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Saras bhaiyya hain khadoos

Apni Kumud Devi hain teacherni

Woh sikhavengi khadoos ko

Baatein achchi aur sayani

Kusum abhi bhi kar rahi hai Saras raag ka jaap

Danny ke dil ko buri lag sakti hai uski yehi baat

Guman mom ka chalu hai haar jeet ka khel

Tod ke rahegi woh Saras aur Danny ka Mel

Kabir ne kiya phir Guman se flirt

Actually karna hai usko Guman ko hurt

Kabir ne bhi banaya Danny ko pawn

Aaakhir kya chahta hai kabir, aur yeh hai kaun?

Chalo ji yeh toh tha aaj ka apisod

Jinko lagta hai kabir chashme mein hot

O toh dekh lo

Jinko pasand hai Guman ki game

Woh bhi dekh lo, without any shame

Jinko lage hai cute Danny hamara

Woh dekh sakte hain yeh apisod dobaara

Agar dekhna ho kusum taking Saras's name

Woh bhi dekh lein apisod again

To gar dekhni ho bade bhaiyya aur bhabhi ki story

Dekh lo without any worry

Par gar aapko dekhni ho Samud ki chemistry

Woh toh ban chuki hai ab ek history

Shadi ko ho chuke hain 2 weeks poore

Ab Inke romance ki aasha rahegi adhoori

Toh Jinko chahiye intensity of Samud

Woh please kar dain apne TV ko off!

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shubh20

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ekdum true bytes... 😃 first this kusum should call saras jeejaji... bas... that will solve half of the issues... 🥱 samud had some scenes today.. and saras had been strict with Danny in few cases before also ... but this time some misunderstanding has to be created know? so Danny will feel bad for whatever saras says... so that his so called mom and that idiot kabir can confuse him more and separate him from his bhai... 🥱 who is this bloody third person to interfere in family issues? why these vyas brothers are acting like fools in his case? 🥱 and now a days we are getting only gubir in the precaps.. 🥱 what the hell does this kabir want? 😡 I saw the first crack in the relationship of ram and lakshman... even though Danny said all those lines at last.. I can sense something else coming up..

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Pruthveshwar Sakunala

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wah Wah Arshi Ji.. Wah Wah..!! 👏

Aap se behthar bytes likhna... Kisi aur ki bas ki bath nai hai.! 😃

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Arshics

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Pro-
Wah Wah Arshi Ji.. Wah Wah..!! 👏

Aap se behthar bytes likhna... Kisi aur ki bas ki bath nai hai.! 😃

Kya karain Pruthvi, aaj ka episode bhi waisa hi tha, pheeka pheeka sa

Kuch dam nahi aa raha abhi tak

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Arshii ...

The Bytes are EXCELLENT ... as always ... 👏

How do you manage to give this Wonderful Poetic touch always ... Amazing !! ⭐️

The only good thing about the Episode today was that now we clearly know the CVs plans for the upcoming track ...

The Cards were laid out on the Table ...There was some movement ahead ...

So the CVs plan is to create a Rift between our Ram and Lakshman ...

OK ... That can be the basis of the Upcoming Drama ...

but the Important Question is where will it leave SAMUD ?? 😕

I hope they have some ideas for SAMUD too ... although as of now it does not look like it ...

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Pruthveshwar Sakunala

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshics

Kya karain Pruthvi, aaj ka episode bhi waisa hi tha, pheeka pheeka sa

Kuch dam nahi aa raha abhi tak

Haan Ji.. Ham bhi kya kar sakthe.. Jab poore ke poore CV's ka bewda plans hamare samne pheeka pad gaye.. Ham ko na entertain na kuch mil rahi hain ismein se.! 😕

Dam tho CV's ke creativity mein nai hain.. Tho ultimately poora epi pheeka pad jaatha..

Haiye haiye.. ham kya kar sakthe!! 🥱

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Sersh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wah wah Arshi khoob likha apnay...👏

aik dum firsht class 😆

aur sahi kaha apnay

"Par gar aapko dekhni ho Samud ki chemistry

Woh toh ban chuki hai ab ek history

Shadi ko ho chuke hain 2 weeks poore

Ab Inke romance ki aasha rahegi adhoori

Toh Jinko chahiye intensity of Samud

Woh please kar dain apne TV ko off!"

as they say naa...

" Yeah na thi hamari Qismat

Kay Visale' yaar hota

Agar aur jeetay rehtay

yahii intezar hota" 😭

As for danny, Danny will have a weak moment just bcoz of his dear Mom 🤢, but will surely come out of it soon, n barey bhaiya n him will have a Hum sath sath hain wali moment, alongwith Kumud bhabbi's tear filled eyes n approving nod 😆

Akhir kya chahta hai kabir aur hai koun? a very good Q, n abt time CVs shld clear his identity coz he's very annoying now 🤢

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pasumarthisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Arshi,

Awesome bytes.

I liked the episode today. The formula might be typical. But the narrative was fast and crisp.

Like I said, Danny will be the one under pressure and will buckle.

Kumud is seeing everything with a clear perspective.

Saras is getting carried away but not wrt Guman n her intentions.

Kusum is shooting words without any control and she will land herself n Danny in big trouble.

The obviousness of the formula was there. But still everything fitted in.

I liked saras-kumud scene today. There is some progress at last. They were sweet and adorable together. Kumud throwing the towel and Saras's reaction was cute.

for the first time, I liked Mr. Kabir's act in the last scene with Danny.

LN is the key.

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KK84

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sheer brilliance Arshi!! Without ur bytes, SC humaari jaan le letaa! I haven't even seen but enough to know that time to say alvida to samud romance...bury your desires deep within ur heart kyunki ab na hongey yeh paas paas :-(

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