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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story pooji...
finally maine teri ye story read kr hi li...
ufff kitna suspense h story me...yaar maan k dad ne aisa kya kiye jo maan n uske dad k beech me itni tension h...aur starting me dadi ne maan k dad ko ye kyi bola k maan unka apna beta nai h???????
ye maansee ka suspense b h...tune clear tho kr diya k maansee maaneet ki beti nai h...but yaar geet maansee se itna attached kyu h?????
i really hate sheela n vid...grrr wo sheela kitna torture krti h geet pe...akhir geet k saath hua kya h????wo kaise iss sheela k pass phas gai????
i hope maan ko jaldi pata chal jaye k geet hi uski pari nain h...
i love anni n geet's bonding... maan loves geeet but usne abi tk confess nai kiya h...oye hoye geet jealous ho rhi h maan ki pari se...chalo maan ne geet ko bata diya k uski pari ek kid h...
yaar ye maan k dad ne maan ki shadi k liye ladki b dekh liye n saari baat b kr li h oh god jb maan ko pata chalega tb kya hoga?????
maan k dad aisakyu lr rhe h???????
yaar pooji eagerly waiting for nxt update...
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Posted: 11 years ago

ADHOORI ZINDAGI




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@ rami 92

You idiot here only one pari is there and do pm me you last update of blog I am unable to open last one plz plz

@ samidsamid welcome to you here and thanks for comment

@ desigirl

You comment is always special thank you so much

@ gurthi 30

so sweet of you thanks for commenting you missed parts with big comment I loved it

@ Dumas

Ur pic will be in next update just guess in which way lolzz

@ impooja verma

Confusing ?? lolzz will reveal it soon about sia and SK

@ valli 30

Thanks for big big comment gal

@ preetymaaneet welcome to the stort thanks for comment

@ nivaditachand

Hey gal lolzz you are dancing huh thanks re all cursing me for not meeting manse with maan lolzz

@ maan ki nadi

Jaan you here wow welcome to you too and thanks for long comment as well

@ nikkirocksss

1st of all welcome to story and Take a break for ur questions ok

Yes maan is not ranjith own son

Manse is not maaneet baby still manse is attached with geet I haven't said she is not geet's baby also na

How geet fell in hands of SK for answer wait and see remaining will come in future updates

Thank u soo much for putting ur doubts here I can know where I am lacking ur comment helped me re



Power cuts again started and today from 12.30 to 5.30 gals

That's why delay really sorry



part 31

thanks for all your likes and comments






"ok do remember you are not supposed to tell this to anyone" warned SK before cutting the call. Sia signed in defeat she don't know what SK is planning with GK. She really don't want to help her but she is trapped. As per plan she makes geet drunk that drink. "I hope geet I can save her from that witch" thought sia painfully. Acting with wicked mind is not in her books her heart pained when geet asked about her well being at party.
"God save her please she is small girl save her from that witch hands" prayed sia to god.
It is night at 8 pm maan heading back to home for a change he is going to KM not palace. He so much wanted to go there last night moments were still fresh in his mind driving him crazy. She is with him and the sleep he got after many days peaceful he can mark that. Not to forget his pari is also with him uff he is losing himself with the feel of bliss. In his entire life he didn't thought he will felt happy and this much happiness holding in his heart he wants to dance shout on top of his voice making this world know how much happy he is.

The past years he suffered in his own shell keeping him away from all away from happiness. He smiled as outer self but inner self he is not happy the meaning of happiness he got to know today only. The feel of contentment was seen on his face "Saheb ji looking so happy today" asked driver kaka when maan out at KM.

"Ji kaka so I am happy today" replied maan with smile adoring on his lips.
"So this is good news for us be happy all ways beta" said kaka looking at maan with affection. Maan leaned against car nodded his head in acceptance with calm face. "Sahib I am warning you don't drive at late night by yourself you ordered me to stay with bade sahib so I am doing that. Krishna told me you are driving alone leaving him with guards already you are stressing yourself if it continues then will inform this to dadimaa" warned kaka with slight serious tone. Maan know kaka meant the night he met geet at park he glared at Krishna for revealing this to kaka.

"No need to scare him just go and take rest now BTW all waiting for you to take some good class to you" informed kaka about ladies waiting for him. Maan didn't mind anything what he said to him he respected him allot. Giving pleasant smile maan makes his way to hall.
"Kaka about that girl you didn't asked him" questioned Krishna unable to hold back his curiosity. "she will be friend of him only and dont dig deeply for get it" dismissed kaka knowing about maan's nature.


The first person came to his view is his dad who is watching business news along with dev. Maan didn't even glanced back at him dinner was quite affair with dev, meera and aniee silent masthi. None talked much about maan not being at home regularly in front of ranjith.

"So how come sir came home today" commented dadi with annoying look at maan when all settled in the hall. "Dadi be happy for that we get his time or else MSK giving his time to family talk of the town" answered naina glaring at maan meaningfully. Aniee is busy in getting geet to on call not at all listening what's going on around her. "Maa I have to make a call now I will be back" said maan as an escape from there rapid-fire secession.

"Yeah do that here only I will apply oil to your head" ordered naina with serious look. Maan makes a face first but he is not giving proper time to his family looking at expectant eyes of naina and dadi giving up maan lied in her lap making faces dev and meera enjoyed his cribbing.

"Aniee go get oil for bhai every time you are sitting with mobile only" chided dadi making her frown. In mean time maan called geet thankfully she lifted the call.

"So how the day of yours did you taken medicines at noon and what about dinner" asked maan casually ignoring dadi maa meaningful look at him. "Here you go kisi ka gussa kis par nikal raha hai" muttered aniee handling oil bottle to naina.
"Bhai she is not lifting the call" wishepered aniee in maan's ears hinting about geet. "Ohh usko bathado I am in shower at that time" answered geet to maan. Maan don't know what to do with this girl "meri itni sari questions ko answers nahi hai per she has answers for her questions great" thought maan annoyingly. Aniee backed away from maan when dev dragged her to take some class about GK issue before maan could answer her back.

"So?" asked maan not getting further reply from her. Geet was feeling consciousness around him her heart doing marathon listening to his voice itself. Geet reached to her cup board to get her night dress to get changed as she is in robe.


She wondered why no were there to keep an eye on her servants were busy in doing their own works. Probably she is alone now and she is happy feeling like to run back to him sleep in his warm embrace. She don't remember the night happenings but feel of his essence around her she can feel it. It is giving immense pleasure to her heart a part of her saying he is medicine to her wounded heart.


"So you don't have anything to talk right ok bye" said maan about the cut the call but her voice stopped him by doing so "Ji nahi nahi please" pleaded geet sitting on bed with crossed legs.

Maan smiled silently not making oblivious to both ladies presented with him "then answer me first" commanded maan with serious tone.

"Ji I have taken everything on time" answered geet meekly. "What about checkup of yours" questioned maan knowing very well she didn't attend the doctor. Geet makes a face not answering him back but answered after brief moment "I don't like hospital smell even muje nahi jana hai".

Maan imagined her face a smile automatically spread on his face "one sec" said geet to maan putting her call on hold he need to deal with this child alone. "Maa ab bas bhi karo I have so much work" said maan sitting on sofa stopping his mom task who is giving head massage for his stressful head.

"BTW maan who is in call" asked dadi directly. She is keeping eye on his facial expressions to get any clue but MSK masked his face tactfully. The calmness in his voice and words hinting something else she is curious to dig deeply. Naina raised her eye brows wondering why her MIL asking like that. Dadi assured nothing to worry without maan's knowledge who is busy to give appreciated answer to dadi.

"Oh dadi one of my friend from London" lied maan without meeting her gauze. Dadi sensed he is hiding something but didn't budge further let it go on. "OK no go don't keep yourself awake up to late night you need rest remember" reminded dadi giving permission to maan.

As the words slipped from dadi maan flew away from their sight confusing naina. "Maa what's the matter" asked naina not getting anything. "Nothing beta I am just concerned about maan's health he is stressing himself so much." Answered dadi diverting the topic not giving proper answer.

"Ha maa I am also not happy with his negligence towards his health hope he will get this thing in to his brain" hoped naina signing heavily. Both retired to bed after making sure of kitchen work is completed.


"Bagawan I can see how much maan changing these days keep him like that only." Prayed dadi sitting on her bed with closed eyes. "Aur lagtha hai I need to know something also" thought thinking about maan's words when he is in call. She purposefully avoided this topic in front of naina before blurting out anything she need confirmation.


"Aniee please yaar listen you know right how much papa will give value to his pride and he don't like any one that relates to film industry that's why I am stopping you from meeting geet. Try to understand if papa got to know this you cont even imagine what will happen" said dev trying to distract her from calling geet.

Maan who is passing by that room heard his voice stopped in his tracks when he heard GK name. "Aniee about GK we don't know anything about her even dev tried to have background check on her as you are treating her as friend. We didn't get any information and above all watching news about her from past days I don't think it there is no harm to be with her. You are involving yourself so much in this think about it ones." Meera also confessed her heart out.

She is not any narrow minded girl but when it comes to GK all doors were looking closed. It's the normal thing for Khurana's to check about background of people whom they were meeting. They haven't got any news about GK and media all ways back of her for her stardom. The thing they won't allow aniee being caught in trouble and media is all ways hungry for Khurana's and to get any spicy news to raise there TRP's.
Aniee given deaf ears to both annoying dev but he maintained his composer and said "Now sleep like good girl ok". Maan silently witnessing there talk he know they are concerned for aniee. The things they are saying is true but when he himself fell in love with that mysterious girl how he can stop his sister.

He should say something is there in geet that's why he is unable to think of anything his sis is also not exception. Aniee loves geet more than him he don't have complains he vowed to know about geet as early as possible. Dev and meera left from there aniee again started calling geet sitting on her bed.

"Geet first talk with aniee check your mobile she is calling you now" informed maan to geet after putting call in normal mode.

"Ji you are in call right" answered geet with frowning look rubbing her wet hair. She is waiting for his voice not even changing her dress she gets impatient with every passing minute.

"Pagali you have other mobile not only this one" said maan almost laughing at her question. Geet bit her tongue she forget about her cell totally. Hurriedly fishing her bag took out her mobile many calls from aniee and some random calls are also there. Wide smile spread on her lips when aniee again called her without wasting time geet picked up the call.
"Hey where were you up to now huh" shouted aniee pacing to and fro in her room. Maan also heard her shout giving space to both left to his room smiling.


"Oh I am just busy maf kardona chutki" pleaded Geet melting aniee's heart. Maan felt like fainting when he heard her calling aniee as chutki

"wow we have same choices not bad" thought maan grinning like small kid.
"Chalo chod diya acha whats going on and what you are doing" asked aniee casually in her mind she is thinking to confront about maan or not. "Oh just now came out from shower sitting on bed with robe" answered geet exactly what she is doing like good girl.


"Bilkul pagal hai" muttered maan for her answer. "Acha tell me one thing last time when we are in call you said something related to maan bhai. You know him personally are you both are friends?" questioned aniee with calculated words.


"Friends?" muttered geet with annoyance. She don't know what she is expecting from aniee but that word she don't like it.

"Oh chutki teri bhai" started geet but stopped not knowing what to tell her. "Geet one sec you meant about me right" questioned maan geet said yes putting aniee on hold.


"OK listen switch on the speaker of other phone and don't tell anything about me ok" Ordered maan geet also did the same. "What happen tell me you guys know each other maan bhai is in contact with you?" aniee asked again putting maan in shock.


"Jaroor geet ne kuch kiya hoga" thought maan thinking about geet innocence he chuckled with the though itself.

"chutki I am feeling sleepy with talk with you later and I am feeling tired also" escaped geet from her question wisely. Maan frowned at her answer but let it go he don't want to rush out things.

Geet don't want to talk about it now she is feeling so happy for last night. Aniee cut the call after talking some time "So geet take care as you are not feeling good" said maan but geet refused to do that.

"Acha tell me something then" asked maan but geet nodded her head negatively.

"Geet I am not in front of you answer me" maan asked not getting any reply. Geet is feeling so happy to voice out anything kept silent. Placing her mobile on bed started changing her dress maan also didn't budged further.

He can hear faint sounds of she is doing something. Both refreshing there last encounter while for geet her own behavior, her answer when he asked what he meant for her "Sab kuch" she herself was not sure why she said like that. Her heart knows that was true only he meant a lot for him but she is unable to name what is that.

Changing her dress with shy smile adoring on her lips geet lied on her bed comfortably. "Kill this silence geet" pleaded maan with her never ending silent treatment. Geet hided her face in pillow not knowing how to voice her excitement. The air, sky and moon along with twinkling stars were witness for their silent talk and their silent love.


Shaking his head at her childish act maan headed to his study to check out his work. After around one hour he heard no sound from her side not even her sighs or her un even faint breathes. "Geet" maan called out very slowly but didn't get her response. "Pagali she slept already chalo good night geet" saying maan cut the call.


Two days passed by maan didn't get time to meet her but didn't for get to message her call her daily. Geet felt like princess with his care and concern the thing she is craving from many years she is getting from him. She don't want anything more enjoyed his attention and care.


"Geet your mom not at returned right?" questioned maan when he called her at night. He know she loves her mom but what confused his is whenever he questioned about her geet will change the topic. As expected geet did the same "Ji ye bath chodo you are coming right" asked about his arrival at his own party for nth time.


"Yes geet I will attend that without my presence who will introduce you to the world as Khurana's new model" answered maan same. The call went on with their minimal talk. Maan didn't asked her again about her mom "I will deal with her straight" concluded maan before going to sleep.

Party day


The hall decorated beautifully media, maan's business associates, Ciney field big shots and many other fields people gathered in the hall. All eyes were waiting for maan and for new model introduction. Maan had his own style of introducing his model to world being model to khurana's is like getting golden treasure to everyone. So everyone waiting for her entry few is feeling J of her few envying her lucky chance.


"Dadi maa just wait and see she will look out of world today" said aniee with enthusiastic voice. Dadi, Dev, meera also presented in those admiring eyes of people in the hall. "Aniee be silent we know she is beautiful let us sit peacefully now" chided dev with annoying look.

"Dev please let her enjoy" pleaded meera lovingly melting dev heart.
"I think you both should leave now go and continue your romance at home children will get spoiled" commented dadi making them embarrassed. Aniee chuckled watching meera flushed face. Lights went off suddenly hall filled with murmuring sounds as result.


sorry for any mistakes directly posting after typing the update
clueless about update i dont know how it came out


will update only on weekly basis gals



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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
now dadi kaka and nalini all are happy to see maan smiling and CID dadi ke dimaag mein doubt aagayi hai kuch tho hai jo maan chuparaha hai.

annie geet se baath karne keliye try karrahi hai par yaha madam sir se baath karne mein busy hai😆😆😆


kab confess kare ga yeh dono eagerly waiting for their lovestory to start

dadi kam thi kya ab annie bhi sach jaane ki koshish karne lagi hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
FABULOUS,LOVELY,AWESOME UPDATE POOJI BABY...LOVED IT TO DA VERY CORE...WOOOW MAANEETS PHONE CONVO WAS LVLY...MAAN WT HIS FAMILY AND DADI NE ALREADY NOTE KI IN MAAN'S BEHAVIOUR K KUCH TOH HAI.AFTER ALL MAAN'S DADI HAINA?😉😉😉 YAAR IM LOVIN THS STORY...WOWWW NXT UPDATE IS PARTY SCENE WAITING SO EAGERLY FR IT.SURELY MAAN WILL GO FIDA WHN HE SEES HIS GEETU.ANNIE WAS SHOOO CUTE...POOOJI JALDI NXT UPDATE DENA...

LOB U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update pooji...loved itt...
sab happy h maan ko smile krta dekh k...maaneet conversation was lovely... ohho dadi ko doubt ho gaya h k maan kuch hide kr rh h...gud dadi ab aap apna CID brain use karo n pata kr lo maan kya hide kr rh h ;-) :P
annie geet ko call kr rhi h but geet tho maan se baat krne me busy h...aye lo geet tho bhul b gai k uske pass ek aur cell h...
yaar ye SK ne aisa kya plan kiya h geet k against kuch smjh hi nai aa rh h...geet pe nazar rkhne k liye koi b nai h geet k passs aisa kya krne wali h ye SK?????
ohh party time... eagerly waiting for nxt update dekhte h kya hone wala h party me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update dear
maan is taking care of geet and geet is feeling like princess but one thing is confusing her that why sk has no one yo kerp an eye on her
that dk is planning something big. Hope maan will be able to save geet
dadima is trying to find the reason behind maans changed behaviour
and maan trying to talk to geet about her mother but she is avoiding to talk on this topic
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz maan geet ko bacha lena...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemm update maneet talking dadi cbi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally Maan found time to return to KM !!!??? Annie's jasoosi is going nowhere..But poor Annie , She is trying a lot yaar !! 😆 Geet feeling Happy without sure of why is described sooo beautifully Pooja !!! Really sometimes we ourselves will be like this when we feel sooo happy without being sure of the reason !!! 😊 There silent phone convo was soo cute !! hmmm... so everyone is present at the party !! Waiting for Maaneet's dhamakedhar entry !!! Reading each update of urs , i feel like dancing only !! kya karooon ??!!! 🤣Loved it !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!

really like dadi & naina scolding maan for his ignorance towards health ..

maan shocked to hear annie asking abt him to geet ..

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