Lived your fantasy baby boy, didn't you? (A Kriyaansh OS) PG-16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaay...me frst...
let me read...dn i vl comment...

wow...dat waz totally suprb...
i likd d ending d most...
real or illusionary???
m too confused...
waz she for real or not??
buh i waz suprb...
u explained rey need for dat girl very well...
have i ever said...
"how a beautiful writer u r???"
whatever u write alwayz turns out to b beautiful n not to say alwayz dark...dat makes it more suprb...
gr8 concept sexybabe...
lovd it...
thnk u for diz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: reyaditi

yaay...me frst...
let me read...dn i vl comment...

wow...dat waz totally suprb...
i likd d ending d most...
real or illusionary???
m too confused...
waz she for real or not??
buh i waz suprb...
u explained rey need for dat girl very well...
have i ever said...
"how a beautiful writer u r???"
whatever u write alwayz turns out to b beautiful n not to say alwayz dark...dat makes it more suprb...
gr8 concept sexybabe...
lovd it...
thnk u for diz...


I am ovwrwhelmed really Thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg
That was sooo sensuous and hawtt
U r srsly an awesome writer
I love all ur works
This one is tooo good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Re..



I am ovwrwhelmed really Thank you so much



ur most welcum girl...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was pure ecstasy
^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sensuality at itz peak.. :* :*
ending was superb..
n loved d title too..
Gonna read ur other works too :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was confusing at the end but still liked the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: multi26media

it was confusing at the end but still liked the story

it was supposed to be confusing..its what you want to believe...she could be for real she could be not. She was so perfect to be real but miracles and exceptions exist so I ended it at a questioning point.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was grt!!!
Specially d ending!!!
Was she for real??? Dat was d only Q in rey's mind!!!
U truly r a grt writer!!! Beautifully penned down!!!
N u r taking an off for a month?!! 😲 😭
Even u have exams or wat?!
Bt thnx for d pm!!! It was really grt!!
N yes u did a grt job cz d end really was confusing!!!
Grt work!!!

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