Lived your fantasy baby boy, didn't you? (A Kriyaansh OS) PG-16 - Page 3

Girl..wht should i say now..??

U are way too perfect in this writting business..

I really mean it..

Well coming the piece this was freaking hawt..

Loved the way u wrote the need of rey towards the girl..

Well its totally correct she is too much perfect to be real..

Well to say overall loved it to the core its just superb..

I hope i will get many more to read frm u..

PS as soon as u come back i want an update of call me ella..nd dare u dont give it..i swear on god i will kill u..

Anyway have great life..

Love yaa..

I hope u remember my name unlike me..as i forgot

dont worry now i remember ur name andy..:*

Originally posted by: Lovelylavender

Heyya der bournvelli!
First of all the title!!!
OMG! It actually made my mind go sidetrack!
Way to go re!!

Hm comin to d os..
I cant imagine how can u so wonderfully describe each n every work with details..!
Like the image of kriya..
A pure fantasy of the boys...
Sexy but elegant!!
And rey.. Fantasized but not despo!
Like it was just awesomee!!
Very few writers occupy the talent of makin the reader imagine the scene happening in front of them..
Very few writers hav the ability to make the intimate scenes sexual.. Not vulgar..
Very few hav the ability to make ur goosebumps rise wen u read..
N i m so proud to say my dear bournvelli.. U occupy a high post in those very few..
Quoting you..
"u wer a virgin at this.. But now it seems u r a pro"
😉
just luvd each n every part of ur os to fhe core!!
N the last part actually made me await n wish for further story...
But mayb mystery unsolved is alluring..!

Stay the same re..
Sexy elegant and lovable!

LoaddZz of luv n wishes fr ur exams!! :) :)
Chocobabe! :) :)

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

Girl..wht should i say now..??

U are way too perfect in this writting business..

I really mean it..

Well coming the piece this was freaking hawt..

Loved the way u wrote the need of rey towards the girl..

Well its totally correct she is too much perfect to be real..

Well to say overall loved it to the core its just superb..

I hope i will get many more to read frm u..

PS as soon as u come back i want an update of call me ella..nd dare u dont give it..i swear on god i will kill u..

Anyway have great life..

Love yaa..

I hope u remember my name unlike me..as i forgot

dont worry now i remember ur name andy..:*

Originally posted by: ..Roop..

ohhkk m reading your work for the first time...

and must tell you...

some writer you are...

it was just s*xy...

whether it was for real or his imagination...

i loved this os... ;)

and since you are going for a month leave..

i would try to catch up with your other stories also... (:

kk lemme breathe..
it was damm hawt and sexy...
i donno what to say..
usage of words was jst fantasical..
kria's confidence, rey's puppy dog behaviour..
hot as helll..
loved it..

Perfectly fine..u can call me any thing..

Loved this OS. Awesome one.

Wowww...